for A Shadow of the Past Life3/30/2012 c1 
5gamil-zirak
Very nice. Its the little things like the fell voice laughing, and that seems to be what makes her drown in despair. Its filled with tragedy that's befitting the material. Good job!
5gamil-zirakVery nice. Its the little things like the fell voice laughing, and that seems to be what makes her drown in despair. Its filled with tragedy that's befitting the material. Good job!
3/24/2012 c1 20Galad Estel
Did Turin know that his sister's name was Nienor? Well, since he wrote to his mother after he came to Doriath he must have...wouldn't he think it a little strange that this girl knew his sister's name and asked about it?
20Galad EstelDid Turin know that his sister's name was Nienor? Well, since he wrote to his mother after he came to Doriath he must have...wouldn't he think it a little strange that this girl knew his sister's name and asked about it?
3/23/2012 c1 43Duilin
When I saw laughter, I thought of Lalaith, and I thought of how fitting it was. Just perfect. And this entire story was perfect. From her premonitions to unknowing that her very husband is her brother, and that she will eventually find out later, that's just amazing, and you put it into perspective perfectly.
43DuilinWhen I saw laughter, I thought of Lalaith, and I thought of how fitting it was. Just perfect. And this entire story was perfect. From her premonitions to unknowing that her very husband is her brother, and that she will eventually find out later, that's just amazing, and you put it into perspective perfectly.