for Small Bump10/2/2012 c1 
16Twinkle Earthling
Konichiwa Yuu-chan :)
Aww I always loved all your stories :D and I would say that this is one of my favorite. I like the way how you described them, the flow of the story is great... I cried whilst reading it...
Angst, I always wanted to try writing it but it also fails XD oh well...maybe Angst isn't my genre X3
Good job :)
Short and detailed chapter, you did well on the emotional part... :)
Added to my favorite :)
See yah!
16Twinkle EarthlingKonichiwa Yuu-chan :)
Aww I always loved all your stories :D and I would say that this is one of my favorite. I like the way how you described them, the flow of the story is great... I cried whilst reading it...
Angst, I always wanted to try writing it but it also fails XD oh well...maybe Angst isn't my genre X3
Good job :)
Short and detailed chapter, you did well on the emotional part... :)
Added to my favorite :)
See yah!
3/27/2012 c1 Ratrityas
Beautiful. I almost cried even if it's kinda short.
I imagined Usui and Misaki crying, god :(
Beautiful. I almost cried even if it's kinda short.
I imagined Usui and Misaki crying, god :(
3/24/2012 c1 OMG
OMG yay you love ed tooo! He's awesome isn't he! The song makes me cry everytime I hear it! :( have you heard grade8 by him? Its too good so is give me love :p o and I love your story! Write moreeee! :D
OMG yay you love ed tooo! He's awesome isn't he! The song makes me cry everytime I hear it! :( have you heard grade8 by him? Its too good so is give me love :p o and I love your story! Write moreeee! :D
3/24/2012 c1 ScarletGaze
I was feeling what you were trying to convey... If it was how not everything in life is written in stone (not every pregnant woman becomes a mother), how disappointment is always something to consider especially if you keep waiting for it. I learnt a personal lesson as well from this; something other miscarriage fics didn't convey properly, I guess... Not everything ends well, similar things are happening around the world, but that don't mean you give up.
A jumbled up review indeed but I am an emotional wreck right new. Keep up the ever magnificent work.
Btw, thanks for the raws too, you really are a KWMS angel. :')
I was feeling what you were trying to convey... If it was how not everything in life is written in stone (not every pregnant woman becomes a mother), how disappointment is always something to consider especially if you keep waiting for it. I learnt a personal lesson as well from this; something other miscarriage fics didn't convey properly, I guess... Not everything ends well, similar things are happening around the world, but that don't mean you give up.
A jumbled up review indeed but I am an emotional wreck right new. Keep up the ever magnificent work.
Btw, thanks for the raws too, you really are a KWMS angel. :')
3/24/2012 c1 20AAJL
WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN ALL THIS TIME? I MEAN, YEAH, I KNOW YOU'VE BEEN BUSY WITH WORK AND STUFFS (and, to be honest, so have I), BUT SUCH A LONG ABSENCE IS UNACCEPTABLE!
...It's okay if you come back with an awesome story, though. :)
I wanted to see Usui's kid. :( She sounded absolutely gorgeous, and it really wasn't that long to wait, too. TT^TT
Oh, just some grammatical issues: when you're using a number that's less than twenty-one (I think), you've gotta write the entire number. As in, letter for letter. The context in which the word 'dimple' is used makes it a plural, not singular. The rest was fine, though. :D
20AAJLWHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN ALL THIS TIME? I MEAN, YEAH, I KNOW YOU'VE BEEN BUSY WITH WORK AND STUFFS (and, to be honest, so have I), BUT SUCH A LONG ABSENCE IS UNACCEPTABLE!
...It's okay if you come back with an awesome story, though. :)
I wanted to see Usui's kid. :( She sounded absolutely gorgeous, and it really wasn't that long to wait, too. TT^TT
Oh, just some grammatical issues: when you're using a number that's less than twenty-one (I think), you've gotta write the entire number. As in, letter for letter. The context in which the word 'dimple' is used makes it a plural, not singular. The rest was fine, though. :D
3/24/2012 c1 4Raina Rasberry
Yuu duck! daggers!
aw kidding! its cute, ud think its a sappy one [as usual from u] but it ends up being somehting more, now i really want to listen to that song!
4Raina RasberryYuu duck! daggers!
aw kidding! its cute, ud think its a sappy one [as usual from u] but it ends up being somehting more, now i really want to listen to that song!