for The Gateway5/8/2012 c8 Species Unknown
Instant coffee part. TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
Instant coffee part. TROLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!
5/4/2012 c7 hiccups525
this is who tails really is when sonic teases him:
Tails:GET OFF OF ME YOU FUCKING GAY ASS FUCKING PRICK! YOU INTERESTERAL PUMKICKN MONSTOSTURTY FAT ASS GAY ASS FUCK THAT HAD A 3-WAY FUCK!
(Everybody looks at Tails like he's crazy)
Tails: Um...I mean (in a cute pose) I no leik you!
Everybody but Tails: AWWW!
this is who tails really is when sonic teases him:
Tails:GET OFF OF ME YOU FUCKING GAY ASS FUCKING PRICK! YOU INTERESTERAL PUMKICKN MONSTOSTURTY FAT ASS GAY ASS FUCK THAT HAD A 3-WAY FUCK!
(Everybody looks at Tails like he's crazy)
Tails: Um...I mean (in a cute pose) I no leik you!
Everybody but Tails: AWWW!
4/30/2012 c7 Guest
FOR CRIYNG OUT LOUD! MAKE A NEW CHAPTER!I'M WAITING FOR THIS 4-EVER!MAKE IT ALREADY!also u make excelent stories ! :D
FOR CRIYNG OUT LOUD! MAKE A NEW CHAPTER!I'M WAITING FOR THIS 4-EVER!MAKE IT ALREADY!also u make excelent stories ! :D
4/23/2012 c6 
6Flame Darkmoon
Oh, cliff hanger huh? I guess I have to wait til you post the next chapter up then.
6Flame DarkmoonOh, cliff hanger huh? I guess I have to wait til you post the next chapter up then.
4/15/2012 c5 1Spindash77
Well not much to say, besides Robotnik's escape the chapter seems somewhat standard. Although I would kinda like to know what took Robotnik's robot so long to break him out
1Spindash77Well not much to say, besides Robotnik's escape the chapter seems somewhat standard. Although I would kinda like to know what took Robotnik's robot so long to break him out
4/5/2012 c4 Guest
What! How does Ferris Not know Knuckles the Echidna! Maybe he's just not a sonic fan... Lol I'm joking gr8 story! I was just wondering if on Ferris' version of earth if sonic the hedgehog is a fictional character?
What! How does Ferris Not know Knuckles the Echidna! Maybe he's just not a sonic fan... Lol I'm joking gr8 story! I was just wondering if on Ferris' version of earth if sonic the hedgehog is a fictional character?
4/5/2012 c4 1Spindash77
So Tails has a company thats practiclly a monopoly over the whole world now, figures. For the most part the spelling and grammer seemed fine but I think a few words might have been missing here or there, be sure to thouroghly read over your work when you finish the writeing segment. I also like how you made the whole not to make the whole 'I came from another dimention' thing sound somwhat natural(Let's face it when you talk about that in conversation it's going to sound kinda forced)
1Spindash77So Tails has a company thats practiclly a monopoly over the whole world now, figures. For the most part the spelling and grammer seemed fine but I think a few words might have been missing here or there, be sure to thouroghly read over your work when you finish the writeing segment. I also like how you made the whole not to make the whole 'I came from another dimention' thing sound somwhat natural(Let's face it when you talk about that in conversation it's going to sound kinda forced)
4/3/2012 c3 Tiny Imperfection
This is a great story, very well detailed. I must say that if I was in Ferris's position I would probably be jumping up and down screaming, "YES IT WORKED!" Oh whatever, hope you update soon. I'm curious to see what happens next.
This is a great story, very well detailed. I must say that if I was in Ferris's position I would probably be jumping up and down screaming, "YES IT WORKED!" Oh whatever, hope you update soon. I'm curious to see what happens next.
4/3/2012 c3 Spindash77
Well I can't really tell were you're going with this story although I do like how even though Ferris is shocked at seeing Knuckles he does manage to still think logicaly and ask questions that some one like him would normally ask instead of pulling out his pistol (Which could have happened although seems out of character for someone who's a genius)
Well I can't really tell were you're going with this story although I do like how even though Ferris is shocked at seeing Knuckles he does manage to still think logicaly and ask questions that some one like him would normally ask instead of pulling out his pistol (Which could have happened although seems out of character for someone who's a genius)
3/28/2012 c2 Spindash77
Well like last time you certainly did hold my interest and the part with knuckles actually seemed to accomplish something this time. The only complaint I have (And this is probably just a nit-pick) is that Ferris decides not to retuen even though he has everything he needs and his life is in danger, he's supposed to be a genius but that came off as a kind of stupid decision since he might not make it (Although we know he will). You could have just made it so that the return doesn't work (And if that's going to be a plot point for later now would have been a better time to bring it up)
Well like last time you certainly did hold my interest and the part with knuckles actually seemed to accomplish something this time. The only complaint I have (And this is probably just a nit-pick) is that Ferris decides not to retuen even though he has everything he needs and his life is in danger, he's supposed to be a genius but that came off as a kind of stupid decision since he might not make it (Although we know he will). You could have just made it so that the return doesn't work (And if that's going to be a plot point for later now would have been a better time to bring it up)
3/26/2012 c1 Spindash77
While for the record what's going on with Ferris is keeping my interest and it seems the spelling is good the ending feels like it's just the middle of the chapter not a chapter ending and also be carful not to make Ferris a mary-sue the whole genius thing seems a little like it may be leaning towards that area.
While for the record what's going on with Ferris is keeping my interest and it seems the spelling is good the ending feels like it's just the middle of the chapter not a chapter ending and also be carful not to make Ferris a mary-sue the whole genius thing seems a little like it may be leaning towards that area.