for My Adventure with Moemon11/4/2012 c21 Magzy
For some reason I picture Quinton as Equius. I think they would look alike.
Anyway, this story is getting better and better. Keep up the good work!
For some reason I picture Quinton as Equius. I think they would look alike.
Anyway, this story is getting better and better. Keep up the good work!
9/14/2012 c1 
2shelloseast13ssss
Sarsarss, i just want you to know that you are the all time best author on . after reading yyour pikmin story, i wanted to get up and buy it then and there. you inspire me to write, i'ld love to write a moemon fanficton because it loks awesome, and i already am writing a smash bros survivoor. keep writing sars.
2shelloseast13ssssSarsarss, i just want you to know that you are the all time best author on . after reading yyour pikmin story, i wanted to get up and buy it then and there. you inspire me to write, i'ld love to write a moemon fanficton because it loks awesome, and i already am writing a smash bros survivoor. keep writing sars.
8/25/2012 c20 4Kiria Ithica
This is good: in fact, it's really good. Honestly, I don't know why it doesn't have more reviews, because it should.
So far, I've really enjoyed this. You capture the tragedy of the Moemon and the plight of the trainers/challengers perfectly: I'll admit I thought this was a comedy at first. Generally, words like 'moe' and 'adventure' are usually used in light-hearted fics, and both of them are in the title alone.
Yup, you certainly fooled me, even if unintentionally. I completely missed the 'Moemon can die' rule, and the first death really shook me.
Once again, I've really enjoyed this so far. Pokemon being little girls isn't the most original thing ever, but you certainly put a spin on things with your Nuzlocke challenge. Might this be a reaction to the way we players totally dominate the games and the rather famous Pokegirls?
Anyway, writing can be tough, but I love this. Keep fighting, and I hope I'll see another chapter come out soon.
Kiriha
4Kiria IthicaThis is good: in fact, it's really good. Honestly, I don't know why it doesn't have more reviews, because it should.
So far, I've really enjoyed this. You capture the tragedy of the Moemon and the plight of the trainers/challengers perfectly: I'll admit I thought this was a comedy at first. Generally, words like 'moe' and 'adventure' are usually used in light-hearted fics, and both of them are in the title alone.
Yup, you certainly fooled me, even if unintentionally. I completely missed the 'Moemon can die' rule, and the first death really shook me.
Once again, I've really enjoyed this so far. Pokemon being little girls isn't the most original thing ever, but you certainly put a spin on things with your Nuzlocke challenge. Might this be a reaction to the way we players totally dominate the games and the rather famous Pokegirls?
Anyway, writing can be tough, but I love this. Keep fighting, and I hope I'll see another chapter come out soon.
Kiriha
8/20/2012 c19 shelloseast13sss
ugh, nick, you idiot... good job so far, update soon!
ugh, nick, you idiot... good job so far, update soon!
8/19/2012 c12 shelloseast13sss
sarsars, you are epic. nuff said. keep writing!
sarsars, you are epic. nuff said. keep writing!
8/15/2012 c19 9IcecreamSyndrome
Annie? I figured it was going to be "Erin," but Annie is a good name too. :)
Yes. This is how Team Rocket should be. They may be easy in the games, but in real life, they would be dangerous criminals. Underestimating them would be a seriously BAD idea, and I love that your tackling this misconception head on with Nick's overconfidence. With him challenging Quinton, I have the feeling that he'll be the next to go home.
Anyway, great job as always and keep on writing! :)
9IcecreamSyndromeAnnie? I figured it was going to be "Erin," but Annie is a good name too. :)
Yes. This is how Team Rocket should be. They may be easy in the games, but in real life, they would be dangerous criminals. Underestimating them would be a seriously BAD idea, and I love that your tackling this misconception head on with Nick's overconfidence. With him challenging Quinton, I have the feeling that he'll be the next to go home.
Anyway, great job as always and keep on writing! :)
8/8/2012 c18 IcecreamSyndrome
This fanfic has been awesome so far! I can't understand why more people haven't reviewed yet! :)
My heart sank when I read the title of this chapter, and I must say, I am SO relieved that Melody didn't die! She's just starting to open up and get to know everyone!
Well, keep up the good work! :)
This fanfic has been awesome so far! I can't understand why more people haven't reviewed yet! :)
My heart sank when I read the title of this chapter, and I must say, I am SO relieved that Melody didn't die! She's just starting to open up and get to know everyone!
Well, keep up the good work! :)
8/1/2012 c17 6Sir Starlll
TEAM ROCKET'S ROCKIN' ON THE DANCEFLOOR!
...Sorry, I had to...
So, Team Rocket is here? Things are getting intense...
I have a feeling that one of the starter Moemon is going to die... poor Moemon...
This story is really picking up...
Keep the chapters coming!
-StarIlI
6Sir StarlllTEAM ROCKET'S ROCKIN' ON THE DANCEFLOOR!
...Sorry, I had to...
So, Team Rocket is here? Things are getting intense...
I have a feeling that one of the starter Moemon is going to die... poor Moemon...
This story is really picking up...
Keep the chapters coming!
-StarIlI
6/7/2012 c13 Sir Starlll
HOLY MUSICAL BATMAN THAT WAS JUST WOW!
...Sorry, just, that moment with Oliva... just, wow...
-StarIlI
HOLY MUSICAL BATMAN THAT WAS JUST WOW!
...Sorry, just, that moment with Oliva... just, wow...
-StarIlI
5/18/2012 c10 2LucarioGuy15
Read everything and I have to say I love it!
The idea, the rules, thestory, it's all just plain brilliant! Please keep on writing. I'd like to see more of this.
2LucarioGuy15Read everything and I have to say I love it!
The idea, the rules, thestory, it's all just plain brilliant! Please keep on writing. I'd like to see more of this.
5/17/2012 c10 6Sir Starlll
...Woah, new review button... I think that this is my favorite one, so far...
So, mostly filler, but nothing much to complain about.
...Now I feel a little guilty about sticking hundreds of Pokemon in PC boxes...
Keep the chapters coming!
-StarIlI
6Sir Starlll...Woah, new review button... I think that this is my favorite one, so far...
So, mostly filler, but nothing much to complain about.
...Now I feel a little guilty about sticking hundreds of Pokemon in PC boxes...
Keep the chapters coming!
-StarIlI
5/9/2012 c9 Sir Starlll
*Sniff*
*Sniff*
That was so beautiful... at the end... he sacrificed the win just to save his Pokemon... *Sniff*
...One tiny question, though. Will there be a girl joining the team? ...Other than the obvious? As in, will there be a love interest? I'm just wondering, because I wouldn't mind seeing a bit of romance. Still, I love the way you write, so I won't mind either way.
Keep the chapters coming!
-StarIlI
*Sniff*
*Sniff*
That was so beautiful... at the end... he sacrificed the win just to save his Pokemon... *Sniff*
...One tiny question, though. Will there be a girl joining the team? ...Other than the obvious? As in, will there be a love interest? I'm just wondering, because I wouldn't mind seeing a bit of romance. Still, I love the way you write, so I won't mind either way.
Keep the chapters coming!
-StarIlI
4/24/2012 c7 Sir Starlll
...Jacob sounds like he'd actually make a really good Antagonist.
You know, if I was a Moemon trainer, I'd just not use my last Pokemon. As in, keep it in my Pokemon Center. That way, if I lose, I can keep playing.
Great battle scene! I'm not sure which I prefer more; this, or your battle scenes from My Adventure with Captain Olimar.
I see you took my advice on the Pokemon Teams! Thank you! That actually REALLY helped me out.
Keep the chapters coming!
-StarIlI
...Jacob sounds like he'd actually make a really good Antagonist.
You know, if I was a Moemon trainer, I'd just not use my last Pokemon. As in, keep it in my Pokemon Center. That way, if I lose, I can keep playing.
Great battle scene! I'm not sure which I prefer more; this, or your battle scenes from My Adventure with Captain Olimar.
I see you took my advice on the Pokemon Teams! Thank you! That actually REALLY helped me out.
Keep the chapters coming!
-StarIlI