for Pool Table For Two12/26/2012 c6 Guest
Okay, what is going on? Please tell me you are still working on this cause of all the places to leave your readers hanging - this sucks!
And if you are not gonna write anymore could you just take like 2 seconds and let us know so I can stop checking for one cause its getting depressing
Okay, what is going on? Please tell me you are still working on this cause of all the places to leave your readers hanging - this sucks!
And if you are not gonna write anymore could you just take like 2 seconds and let us know so I can stop checking for one cause its getting depressing
12/26/2012 c6 donoterase
awesome.
These two are just...I mean that they are not together in the books is just...
Well, your writing this so you know what I'm talking about.
Hope to see the next chapter soon. And that I'm not in public when you update cause waiting to read it is not gonna happen and knowing you I might just spontaneously combust.
Hope you had a great christmas.
awesome.
These two are just...I mean that they are not together in the books is just...
Well, your writing this so you know what I'm talking about.
Hope to see the next chapter soon. And that I'm not in public when you update cause waiting to read it is not gonna happen and knowing you I might just spontaneously combust.
Hope you had a great christmas.
9/12/2012 c5 
2garnmcgaughn
So I've been reading this story and enjoying it but noticed something with this chapter that bugged me a bit in a way. When they are on the bike and Rachel has her 'flashback' to earlier it seems too long for a flashback. It's almost like you had forgotten to add it so decided to slip it in later. For me flashbacks usually are a quick memory related to the present.
2garnmcgaughnSo I've been reading this story and enjoying it but noticed something with this chapter that bugged me a bit in a way. When they are on the bike and Rachel has her 'flashback' to earlier it seems too long for a flashback. It's almost like you had forgotten to add it so decided to slip it in later. For me flashbacks usually are a quick memory related to the present.
9/4/2012 c6 tifftails88
That ending was so not even right... I was literally leaning forward and then nada... Smfro. U really know how to set the bait lol
That ending was so not even right... I was literally leaning forward and then nada... Smfro. U really know how to set the bait lol
8/31/2012 c6 princesssbuttercup
Gosh sorry for not reviewing in a while. I actually opened an accout so I can get treats too! :D Making it up to you right now k? This is so lovely with everything you could ask for. Fluffy, sexy, funny, pulls at your heartstrings and a lot of fun. Their relationship is really developing beautifully with their romantic and fun date. Ivy is so thoughtful. You can feel how much they like/love/lust for eachother. And now the tables turned! I love how Ivy seduced Rachel and she can't help herself. Oh that Ivy! Now we know how devastating the smokey eyes are LOL.
Also the time table really helps too cos that always confused me before. I like the songs and would love to know what else is on Kisten's Super Love Mix! :D Oh and bloopers too pls!
Gosh sorry for not reviewing in a while. I actually opened an accout so I can get treats too! :D Making it up to you right now k? This is so lovely with everything you could ask for. Fluffy, sexy, funny, pulls at your heartstrings and a lot of fun. Their relationship is really developing beautifully with their romantic and fun date. Ivy is so thoughtful. You can feel how much they like/love/lust for eachother. And now the tables turned! I love how Ivy seduced Rachel and she can't help herself. Oh that Ivy! Now we know how devastating the smokey eyes are LOL.
Also the time table really helps too cos that always confused me before. I like the songs and would love to know what else is on Kisten's Super Love Mix! :D Oh and bloopers too pls!
8/28/2012 c6 10Over Worked Witch
I'm with Rachel on Ivy's patience far exceeding my own. If I had been hunting a button pushing, mix signal sending, stubborn witch with a great ass for years who finally stopped running away I would have slammed the door shut and the church would have been unfit for visitors for exceedingly long time. ;)
I loved that Etta James's "At Last" made an appearance in this chapter. The rest of the songs I've enjoyed, but that one has always been a favorite of mine so I was thrilled. Guess Kristen has good taste in music and as well women.
Now, that I'm all caught up I eagerly await Chapter Sexin.
10Over Worked WitchI'm with Rachel on Ivy's patience far exceeding my own. If I had been hunting a button pushing, mix signal sending, stubborn witch with a great ass for years who finally stopped running away I would have slammed the door shut and the church would have been unfit for visitors for exceedingly long time. ;)
I loved that Etta James's "At Last" made an appearance in this chapter. The rest of the songs I've enjoyed, but that one has always been a favorite of mine so I was thrilled. Guess Kristen has good taste in music and as well women.
Now, that I'm all caught up I eagerly await Chapter Sexin.
8/28/2012 c5 Over Worked Witch
That last part was definitely the hottest part of the chapter. Rachel scaring Ivy though was awesome for an entirely different reason and Rachel's solution for getting out of an argument is one I strongly support. :)
Lets don't forget about Ivy's impending "revenge" either as a vamp with a plan and a curious witch to toy with sounds like a good time to me. ;)
That last part was definitely the hottest part of the chapter. Rachel scaring Ivy though was awesome for an entirely different reason and Rachel's solution for getting out of an argument is one I strongly support. :)
Lets don't forget about Ivy's impending "revenge" either as a vamp with a plan and a curious witch to toy with sounds like a good time to me. ;)
8/28/2012 c4 Over Worked Witch
I'm not entirely sure Rachel is done pissing people off as I don't imagine those standing in line, waiting for a table, when there is a half empty restaurant would be too pleased with her or Ivy. Though, I would gladly trade having to deal with an angry mob for a date with Ivy. :)
The garden scene was fantastic and not just because of the sexy Ravy time or the heartfelt love. I really enjoyed it for the excitement Rachel had about the flowers, it seemed like something Rachel could rediscover about herself and remember her roots as an earth witch before she became a bad ass proto-demon.
I'm not entirely sure Rachel is done pissing people off as I don't imagine those standing in line, waiting for a table, when there is a half empty restaurant would be too pleased with her or Ivy. Though, I would gladly trade having to deal with an angry mob for a date with Ivy. :)
The garden scene was fantastic and not just because of the sexy Ravy time or the heartfelt love. I really enjoyed it for the excitement Rachel had about the flowers, it seemed like something Rachel could rediscover about herself and remember her roots as an earth witch before she became a bad ass proto-demon.
8/28/2012 c3 Over Worked Witch
What I really enjoyed about this chapter is that Rachel still goes about doing things that push Ivy's buttons without thinking about the consequences. How fortunate though that in this world Ivy gets to enjoy those moments and the consequences turn out to be Ivy getting Rachel all worked up. :)
What I really enjoyed about this chapter is that Rachel still goes about doing things that push Ivy's buttons without thinking about the consequences. How fortunate though that in this world Ivy gets to enjoy those moments and the consequences turn out to be Ivy getting Rachel all worked up. :)
8/28/2012 c6 Anolan19
Holy blueballs batman! Please UD soon! Also intrested in Kisten's Super Love Mix.
Holy blueballs batman! Please UD soon! Also intrested in Kisten's Super Love Mix.
8/28/2012 c2 Over Worked Witch
Poor, tormented, Ivy. She gets in a stable, but nothing special, relationship and then suddenly Rachel is offering her chance at a relationship with the one she loves who just happens to be a witch that on most days would test the patience of a dead saint.
Its good that Rachel is there to help Ivy through the turmoil though instead of hiding in her room and trying to pretend she wasn't already madly in love with Ivy.
Poor, tormented, Ivy. She gets in a stable, but nothing special, relationship and then suddenly Rachel is offering her chance at a relationship with the one she loves who just happens to be a witch that on most days would test the patience of a dead saint.
Its good that Rachel is there to help Ivy through the turmoil though instead of hiding in her room and trying to pretend she wasn't already madly in love with Ivy.
8/27/2012 c1 10Over Worked Witch
Gah! How the hell haven't I read this before?! It's so, so, very good!
Now I have to leave for work before my boss fires me...though being unemployed certainly would give me more time for FanFic...tough call that one.
I shall be back to read and review the next 5 chapters of this story though!
10Over Worked WitchGah! How the hell haven't I read this before?! It's so, so, very good!
Now I have to leave for work before my boss fires me...though being unemployed certainly would give me more time for FanFic...tough call that one.
I shall be back to read and review the next 5 chapters of this story though!
8/26/2012 c6 NataliaDeCronos
0.0 Goddamn woman... My eyes got progressively wider throughout this chappy and I swear to God I drank an entire bottle of water, which is a feat in of itself considering my tiny size. This next chapter has to be smoldering like melted milk chocolate or I will have to hunt you down!
0.0 Goddamn woman... My eyes got progressively wider throughout this chappy and I swear to God I drank an entire bottle of water, which is a feat in of itself considering my tiny size. This next chapter has to be smoldering like melted milk chocolate or I will have to hunt you down!