for The beauty of Hindsight4/16 c8 Coffebreak101
this is absolutely brilliant idea I can't believe none of this before I love it so far I can't wait for the next chapters
this is absolutely brilliant idea I can't believe none of this before I love it so far I can't wait for the next chapters
2/14 c8 Guest
am enjoying the read. makes me smile :
am enjoying the read. makes me smile :
2/13 c5 TheRealProtector
I don't know if I have time but can I be the Shang Gazelle? I've always wanted to be quick and elegant... umm like short and strawberry blonde, with bright blue eyes. Quick and graceful is what would make the defining characteristics. But yeah...
I know it might be too late but just in case ;)
I love this and how the Griffin keeps dumping Kel on her butt XD and umm FAITHFUL :D
I don't know if I have time but can I be the Shang Gazelle? I've always wanted to be quick and elegant... umm like short and strawberry blonde, with bright blue eyes. Quick and graceful is what would make the defining characteristics. But yeah...
I know it might be too late but just in case ;)
I love this and how the Griffin keeps dumping Kel on her butt XD and umm FAITHFUL :D
2/13 c3 TheRealProtector
Tortall vs. Yamani Islands?! Oh, I know this was the path she had to take, but it makes me so sad! No Neal and Yuki! (Although now maybe kel can be with Neal... ;) ;) )
Tortall vs. Yamani Islands?! Oh, I know this was the path she had to take, but it makes me so sad! No Neal and Yuki! (Although now maybe kel can be with Neal... ;) ;) )
2/13 c2 TheRealProtector
I mean... it's good... but for someone who's already read all the books... it takes forEVER. I mean I guess my problem is that I've read the books- like 10 times. but still.
I mean... it's good... but for someone who's already read all the books... it takes forEVER. I mean I guess my problem is that I've read the books- like 10 times. but still.
2/13 c1 TheRealProtector
HAHAHA okay I'm laughing. A) because the Goddess TOTALLY just told them that they screwed everything up and B) because well because they are the 4 books :D
HAHAHA okay I'm laughing. A) because the Goddess TOTALLY just told them that they screwed everything up and B) because well because they are the 4 books :D
1/19 c8 Guest
I love this it's like two story's in one :D very unique. Please update soon.
I love this it's like two story's in one :D very unique. Please update soon.
1/13 c4 
3Topaz B. Rainheart
This is a really awesome story. I like the two story lines, explaining what Kel's up to while they're stuck, and everyones attitude, for the most part. I think you should probably work on your punctuation, though, and your capitalizing, because I've noticed mistakes. All round the only mistakes that I can see aren't really ones that effect the story, which is great. Fix the minor details, and such, and you have a really great story on your hands. I can't wait to read more!
3Topaz B. RainheartThis is a really awesome story. I like the two story lines, explaining what Kel's up to while they're stuck, and everyones attitude, for the most part. I think you should probably work on your punctuation, though, and your capitalizing, because I've noticed mistakes. All round the only mistakes that I can see aren't really ones that effect the story, which is great. Fix the minor details, and such, and you have a really great story on your hands. I can't wait to read more!
12/28/2012 c1 LexeyMakinsey
Please please please if you get this, I have been searching and searching for a story like this for 2 years please please please please please please please please update this.
Please please please if you get this, I have been searching and searching for a story like this for 2 years please please please please please please please please update this.
12/13/2012 c8 Liz
This is awesome!
This is awesome!
11/29/2012 c3 Guest
I think Kel shouldn't hook up with anyone. Maybe she should die in saving Jonathon and Wyldon. And make it like a slap in their faces.
I think Kel shouldn't hook up with anyone. Maybe she should die in saving Jonathon and Wyldon. And make it like a slap in their faces.
11/26/2012 c8 Guest
I love your story! I always thought that if Kel hadn't been allowed to stay there would have been dire consequenses for Tortall. I also love the fact that Wyldon found out Neal's little nickname for him. You have a gift for making the characters shine with humor. I also like the fact that Buri is going to beat Oakbridge up in the practice courts.
Keep Writing!
I love your story! I always thought that if Kel hadn't been allowed to stay there would have been dire consequenses for Tortall. I also love the fact that Wyldon found out Neal's little nickname for him. You have a gift for making the characters shine with humor. I also like the fact that Buri is going to beat Oakbridge up in the practice courts.
Keep Writing!