for Knightingale6/16 c25 Elizabeth
I understand that creativity takes time but good Lord, you have me checking back every couple of days waiting for an update! And I get so excited when I see one! I even have to get in the mood: I turn the t.v. off, turn the light off, and make everyone leave the room so that I can submerge myself in your world once again! This is very serious stuff. But oh how I like it! I have to say for a second there I thought Prim had a kill and I was shocked but very proud of her. I suspect that at some point she is going to have to defend Gale but she is building to it very well. I know she will be a force to reckon with.
*sigh* I can't express to you how much I enjoy this story. I truly look forward to the next update. Can't wait for more from your wicked, wicked mind! And I know you love your OC Drakin but that Harley Bitch is CRAZY! She's making my mind spin, can't wait to see what more you have in store for us.
Until my next hit ...
I understand that creativity takes time but good Lord, you have me checking back every couple of days waiting for an update! And I get so excited when I see one! I even have to get in the mood: I turn the t.v. off, turn the light off, and make everyone leave the room so that I can submerge myself in your world once again! This is very serious stuff. But oh how I like it! I have to say for a second there I thought Prim had a kill and I was shocked but very proud of her. I suspect that at some point she is going to have to defend Gale but she is building to it very well. I know she will be a force to reckon with.
*sigh* I can't express to you how much I enjoy this story. I truly look forward to the next update. Can't wait for more from your wicked, wicked mind! And I know you love your OC Drakin but that Harley Bitch is CRAZY! She's making my mind spin, can't wait to see what more you have in store for us.
Until my next hit ...
6/13 c25 To be a rebel
Haha, Harley is completely hysterical.
I loved all of the action in this chapter, definitely cool. The moves Gale pulled off? Awesome. Hah, Gale's pretty funny when he thinks he's losing his mind.
Haha, Harley is completely hysterical.
I loved all of the action in this chapter, definitely cool. The moves Gale pulled off? Awesome. Hah, Gale's pretty funny when he thinks he's losing his mind.
6/12 c5 mh21
ps. I don't know if you're into Harry Potter as well, but when you're done writing this fic I'd love to see a Hermione Granger-centric fic from you. You write female characters really well, and the HP fandom could always use more well-written stories. I can already imagine the intense magical battle scenes you could write. :)
ps. I don't know if you're into Harry Potter as well, but when you're done writing this fic I'd love to see a Hermione Granger-centric fic from you. You write female characters really well, and the HP fandom could always use more well-written stories. I can already imagine the intense magical battle scenes you could write. :)
6/12 c25 mh21
It's official - Harley is like Amanda Bynes on twitter. You're not sure if she's just a really good actress who is trolling you or legitimately insane.
You write really excellent fight scenes, they're always intense and nerve wracking. I'm curious if the District citizens from other Districts besides 12 are rooting for Gale and Prim? I can see them supporting Prim but I wonder if they view Gale as a Career-type Tribute rather than a underdog to cheer on. Are Gale and Prim helping to incite the Rebellion more? It would be interesting to get an idea on public opinion from around Panem.
I can't believe this story only has 500 reviews, it's so wonderfully written and difficult to put down. I think I might need to reread it because it's so good. Anyway, please update soon! :D
It's official - Harley is like Amanda Bynes on twitter. You're not sure if she's just a really good actress who is trolling you or legitimately insane.
You write really excellent fight scenes, they're always intense and nerve wracking. I'm curious if the District citizens from other Districts besides 12 are rooting for Gale and Prim? I can see them supporting Prim but I wonder if they view Gale as a Career-type Tribute rather than a underdog to cheer on. Are Gale and Prim helping to incite the Rebellion more? It would be interesting to get an idea on public opinion from around Panem.
I can't believe this story only has 500 reviews, it's so wonderfully written and difficult to put down. I think I might need to reread it because it's so good. Anyway, please update soon! :D
6/12 c25 mbogue99
Hey! It's great you're back at it! Awesome chapter as always! How many tributes are left now?
Hey! It's great you're back at it! Awesome chapter as always! How many tributes are left now?
6/11 c25 
3EStrunk
That was well written, but so gruesome. Not that it wasn't fitting for the Games. I love that Prim was smart enough to not take the middle path. I hate that Gale was stabbed. Harley is absolutely terrifying!
3EStrunkThat was well written, but so gruesome. Not that it wasn't fitting for the Games. I love that Prim was smart enough to not take the middle path. I hate that Gale was stabbed. Harley is absolutely terrifying!
6/11 c25 3Lorelei Eve
So glad to see you updated! And holy shit was it worth it! There were a few LONG seconds that I thought you actually killed off Prim. My mind was racing with all these what if Katniss/Gale scenarios, each one more awful than the last. The rational side of me knew it was silly. You'll get them both out of the arena.
I absolutely love the brilliance of having a shifting arena. It'll make things so much more interesting and give Gale plenty of new opportunities to set his snares.
Dude, Harley is nuts. You're doing a fabulous job of dangling the relationship between Dakrin and Harley without actually giving anything away. And Rory's reaction to her shucking her clothes was priceless. I'm still reserving judgement on wtf is actually going on with her.
You do such an amazing job describing action. I can vividly see the scene you've created, each movement of the character, and what's going on without it seeming very systematic. I'll forgive you for not getting back to my PM because you've put out such a great update :) Fabulous as always.
3Lorelei EveSo glad to see you updated! And holy shit was it worth it! There were a few LONG seconds that I thought you actually killed off Prim. My mind was racing with all these what if Katniss/Gale scenarios, each one more awful than the last. The rational side of me knew it was silly. You'll get them both out of the arena.
I absolutely love the brilliance of having a shifting arena. It'll make things so much more interesting and give Gale plenty of new opportunities to set his snares.
Dude, Harley is nuts. You're doing a fabulous job of dangling the relationship between Dakrin and Harley without actually giving anything away. And Rory's reaction to her shucking her clothes was priceless. I'm still reserving judgement on wtf is actually going on with her.
You do such an amazing job describing action. I can vividly see the scene you've created, each movement of the character, and what's going on without it seeming very systematic. I'll forgive you for not getting back to my PM because you've put out such a great update :) Fabulous as always.
6/11 c25 21Ellenka
Ok, you know i love this, but for the record, I LOVE THIS.
And apart from the lot of fun & awesome action, because of how scarily raw & human & real it was - especially how Gale nearly lost it and then the tiny moment of relief cost him an injury. My pleasure, as always :)
21EllenkaOk, you know i love this, but for the record, I LOVE THIS.
And apart from the lot of fun & awesome action, because of how scarily raw & human & real it was - especially how Gale nearly lost it and then the tiny moment of relief cost him an injury. My pleasure, as always :)
6/11 c25 jessyhcl
That was a LOT of action! And I LOVED it! I had to re-read the scene with gale and crayton to really understand that move, and that was very creative.
Harley is something else...YUCKY. I am soooooo intrigued by her story line and what is up with the two of them.
Can't wait for more! Hope your momentum will carry you all the way to the end ;)
That was a LOT of action! And I LOVED it! I had to re-read the scene with gale and crayton to really understand that move, and that was very creative.
Harley is something else...YUCKY. I am soooooo intrigued by her story line and what is up with the two of them.
Can't wait for more! Hope your momentum will carry you all the way to the end ;)
6/11 c25 34Pinklove21
Oddly enough, just an hour ago I was wondering when you were going to update haha. Thanks for inadvertently reading my mind :)
Fantastic, as usual! And I love Gale's plan to figure out the maze and how it moves. I was curious how you would have him do that, except in my mind the hills only shifted at night somehow while most of them were sleeping.
Harley is definitely sick. You know something's wrong when Careers think someone is sick. And Dakrin's reaction to her clothes...gay? Asexual? Or just so damn focused he doesn't have time to care? I'm very curious about their back story together, and I doubt you'll disappoint when it comes.
Love the action of course! I was wondering when they would eventually run into someone, and boy was it intense! I'm surprised that Skye didn't catch on that it was clearly a trap to tell them where he was sending Prim, though I suppose tricks were the last thing on her mind at the time. And oh god, I'm honestly impressed that he was that hurt and made it all that way to harm Gale! Kid's got balls and strength, I'll give him that.
Now I'd love to see what the mentors are thinking about after all that, especially Katniss and whoever the D3 mentors are. Would the D3 mentors know what's going on with how crazy Dakrin and Harley are? Oh and of course that Gale gets better soon :)
As always, can't wait for another chapter!
34Pinklove21Oddly enough, just an hour ago I was wondering when you were going to update haha. Thanks for inadvertently reading my mind :)
Fantastic, as usual! And I love Gale's plan to figure out the maze and how it moves. I was curious how you would have him do that, except in my mind the hills only shifted at night somehow while most of them were sleeping.
Harley is definitely sick. You know something's wrong when Careers think someone is sick. And Dakrin's reaction to her clothes...gay? Asexual? Or just so damn focused he doesn't have time to care? I'm very curious about their back story together, and I doubt you'll disappoint when it comes.
Love the action of course! I was wondering when they would eventually run into someone, and boy was it intense! I'm surprised that Skye didn't catch on that it was clearly a trap to tell them where he was sending Prim, though I suppose tricks were the last thing on her mind at the time. And oh god, I'm honestly impressed that he was that hurt and made it all that way to harm Gale! Kid's got balls and strength, I'll give him that.
Now I'd love to see what the mentors are thinking about after all that, especially Katniss and whoever the D3 mentors are. Would the D3 mentors know what's going on with how crazy Dakrin and Harley are? Oh and of course that Gale gets better soon :)
As always, can't wait for another chapter!
5/19 c24 GalexCatnip
I must say that I sped read through these 24 chapters because I was so intrigued, and the only thing I'm disappointed in is that I have caught up with everyone else and must wait in agony until you have time to produce more magical writing!
I really like your different points of views - really matches the characters themselves! Even creepy Snow!
Thank you for your talented writing! I can definitely say I enjoy this much better than the true installments of the Hunger Games Trilogy!
I must say that I sped read through these 24 chapters because I was so intrigued, and the only thing I'm disappointed in is that I have caught up with everyone else and must wait in agony until you have time to produce more magical writing!
I really like your different points of views - really matches the characters themselves! Even creepy Snow!
Thank you for your talented writing! I can definitely say I enjoy this much better than the true installments of the Hunger Games Trilogy!
5/18 c16 Anon
I've been entranced in your story because I just found it, but I just have to say that I am literally in tears after this chapter! And of course loved loved loved the Firestorm chapter. And yes, the broken heart knot was quite genius :)
I don't even know if you'll see this because this is an old chapter, but I had to put it out there.
I've been entranced in your story because I just found it, but I just have to say that I am literally in tears after this chapter! And of course loved loved loved the Firestorm chapter. And yes, the broken heart knot was quite genius :)
I don't even know if you'll see this because this is an old chapter, but I had to put it out there.
5/16 c24 Elizabeth
You are KILLING me with this long updates, BUT I will patiently wait for more as long as you keep giving me more! I know I've told you this before but you are the reason I keep coming back to this fandom on a regular basis. I am always hoping for an update and I can't explain the excitement that rolls over me when I see that you have updated!
No matter how many fanfics I read, I really look forward to creative ways that authors plan to take him out ... I can honestly say that I am really waiting to find out how you plan to take Snow down. I know it's going to be soooooo good!
Take all the time you need to craft this wicked ride we are on. I'm strapped in and ready to go! I'll be checking in for more updates! LOVED IT!
You are KILLING me with this long updates, BUT I will patiently wait for more as long as you keep giving me more! I know I've told you this before but you are the reason I keep coming back to this fandom on a regular basis. I am always hoping for an update and I can't explain the excitement that rolls over me when I see that you have updated!
No matter how many fanfics I read, I really look forward to creative ways that authors plan to take him out ... I can honestly say that I am really waiting to find out how you plan to take Snow down. I know it's going to be soooooo good!
Take all the time you need to craft this wicked ride we are on. I'm strapped in and ready to go! I'll be checking in for more updates! LOVED IT!