for Hypothetically6/2/2012 c1
5servant123
I liked it :) The ending line was really well written and I thought it was brilliant :) Keep up the good work!
God bless :)
5servant123I liked it :) The ending line was really well written and I thought it was brilliant :) Keep up the good work!
God bless :)
4/14/2012 c1
15GeoffreyF
I am shocked - shocked, I tell you - that this story only has one review. Hrrmph. Time to do something about that.
This is a little treasure. It's an original and fun take on a reveal fic, and a refreshing change from the plethora of terribly dramatic, angsty reveal fics out there (which are all well and good, but variety is better). I love the whimsical style you've chosen, and the characterisation is spot-on. The resolution is at once a surprise and the only thing that makes sense, and the whole thing is utterly charming. Bravo.
15GeoffreyFI am shocked - shocked, I tell you - that this story only has one review. Hrrmph. Time to do something about that.
This is a little treasure. It's an original and fun take on a reveal fic, and a refreshing change from the plethora of terribly dramatic, angsty reveal fics out there (which are all well and good, but variety is better). I love the whimsical style you've chosen, and the characterisation is spot-on. The resolution is at once a surprise and the only thing that makes sense, and the whole thing is utterly charming. Bravo.
