for Brothers4/4/2012 c1 Canyon A. Lynn
Even though I also read some yaoi, I like this one. No romantic relationships to tangle everything up and make a god awful bloody mess. Just simple comradeship going on. The gentle teasing was cute. And I can definite see Ryu being the 'big brother'. Keep up the good work.
Even though I also read some yaoi, I like this one. No romantic relationships to tangle everything up and make a god awful bloody mess. Just simple comradeship going on. The gentle teasing was cute. And I can definite see Ryu being the 'big brother'. Keep up the good work.
3/28/2012 c1 
26LinKueiKunoichi
Okay here we go:
First off, I was a little confused about the dragon blood in the beginning. The other was about the lecturing at first is he doesn't care but he was happy and then he gets angry? Maybe its just me.
Overall, you are improving. Well Done.
26LinKueiKunoichiOkay here we go:
First off, I was a little confused about the dragon blood in the beginning. The other was about the lecturing at first is he doesn't care but he was happy and then he gets angry? Maybe its just me.
Overall, you are improving. Well Done.