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5/9 c1 staidwaters
very poetic. Kudos!
11/25/2012 c1 32theconsultingdreamer
Awww!
10/29/2012 c1 Hunting With Castiel
"Leads to Dean standing in the middle of a muddy field in the early hours of the morning and screaming at an archangel." best line I've ever read! Had me laughing all day. teat job chap
10/16/2012 c1 Aria
Oh... wow... I had tears silently pouring down my face and just. They are all just so broken and my heart didn't need that. Because I'm pretty sure this fic pulled on my heart strings...
10/12/2012 c1 15Musiclovesbest
I started bawling after Gabe got rid of Lucifers grace and Cas said 'I'm the one who gripped you tight and raised you from perdition'. I just started crying.

Your writing is simply amazing. I loved how you incorporated that little chant into basically everything. The looks into his mind and what was happening to him were stunning. All and all your writing is absolutely gorgeous and I loved this.

The ending had to be my favorite (which is weird because I'm not usually a fan of ending). The way Cas was clinging to Dean and was sorting things in his mind and making lists. I loved that Gabriel joined them I don't know why but I do.

This fic was beautiful and I loved it. Job amazingly well done!
9/3/2012 c1 11pisceanchic101
What a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading this, and love the idea of grace interacting with grace. I always felt the hallucinations were too loose a term, so I find the idea that Lucifer injected a bit of his grace into Sam to torture him mentally a great idea, even better when it interacts with Castiel's grace. Nice job.
8/16/2012 c1 293DBABE1999
This story is AWESOME... I need MORE! Sequel please!
8/12/2012 c1 86criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak
I'm not even sure that there are words that describe how heartbreaking beautiful this piece of writing is. There are very few fanfictions that can move me in the entire gambit of emotions, but this is certainly one of them.

I wanted to cry and smile and laugh and scream and cheer and at the end I found myself smiling and wanting to saw "AWWW!" at the wonderfulness of it all.

The way you wrote the characters, the way you explained Cas's confusion and insanity and pain and guilt and the torment Lucifer put him through while he ws in the psych hospital and the heartbreaking things he felt and saw and had to experience.

I love the way you wrote Gabriel into this as well (Gabriel, Lucifer and Castiel are my favorite angels of all of them so it was really amazing to see all three of them in the same story).

I also loved how it started off kind of hopeless and sad and yet ended in that fluffy, lighthearted tone that made me, once again, want to saw "Aw,".

It really was absolutely perfect, almost preferrable to what actually ended up happening considering Garbriel was involved and that just made my heart do little dances for joy. I mean, insane!Cas was... interesting, but it just broke my heart a little bit every time they showed him like that. Not that this wasn't horribly heartwrenching, because it was and it nearly had me in tears in several places.

Still, beautifully written and very moving piece. I absolutely loved it!
7/8/2012 c1 2OffAir
I adore this story, and your writing style. This is absolutely heart wrenching in all the right ways.
6/20/2012 c1 1kyle lover forever
What the hell

this is an absolutely perfect fanfiction

possibly the best description of his madness I've ever read

seriously, awesome.
6/15/2012 c1 16bluecharlotte
This is fantastic. It went from crazily dark and cold and awesomely (and so sadly) sadistic to warm and fuzzy and saving and destiel and sabriel of epic proportions. I absolutely love your take on all the characters. Your writing style is wonderful, whether it's angst or fluff or somrthing in-between. Probably the best supernatural fic I've ever read, or at least in my top 3. Phenomenal! :)
4/13/2012 c1 2nemiah
*tear*

This is just...so beautifully written and...

Words fail me at the moment...
4/7/2012 c1 Anon
Wow, that was amazing and really, really well-written. Secretly, I've been craving some fanfic about Castiel's stay in the mental hospital, and this story has scratched that itch 5 times over. And the ending is so sweet, and I love how innocent and soft Castiel is when he thinks about kissing Dean.
4/5/2012 c1 8PoetKnowit20
That was lovely! Really enjoyed that and was happy Gabriel came back. Because his character was awesome and I personally wonder if he actually died! Loved it! :)
4/3/2012 c1 31Maknatuna
OMG all the feelings ! Brilliant story !
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