for Silent Screams12/20/2012 c1 Fireflight
Make more
I love the idea
Make more
I love the idea
4/28/2012 c2 
5Monster in Wonderland
I think this was an awesome chapter. And I mean that sincerly. Keep writing! I'm not big on horror but since it's cats you can't entirly take "horror" seriously you know? It might be horrifying to them but to us it's just a story. =P Anyway I like the way you put a lot of description in and how you GRADUALLY work your way into the plot (unlike myself. For some reason I always find it harder to gradually work toward the plot when I'm writing Warriors stories...) I'm actually writing my own story about a mute kit. She's in Shadowclan though so I think you can see that she won't become a warrior as easily... That's how I found your story. =) Because I was looking for other people who wrote about mute warriors haha. Anyway this review is way too long. But I like it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon! Oh and one more thing, Green-leaf has a hyphen.
5Monster in WonderlandI think this was an awesome chapter. And I mean that sincerly. Keep writing! I'm not big on horror but since it's cats you can't entirly take "horror" seriously you know? It might be horrifying to them but to us it's just a story. =P Anyway I like the way you put a lot of description in and how you GRADUALLY work your way into the plot (unlike myself. For some reason I always find it harder to gradually work toward the plot when I'm writing Warriors stories...) I'm actually writing my own story about a mute kit. She's in Shadowclan though so I think you can see that she won't become a warrior as easily... That's how I found your story. =) Because I was looking for other people who wrote about mute warriors haha. Anyway this review is way too long. But I like it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon! Oh and one more thing, Green-leaf has a hyphen.
3/30/2012 c1 Foxface
interesting so far! please hurry up and write the next chapter because i can't wait to read it!
interesting so far! please hurry up and write the next chapter because i can't wait to read it!
3/29/2012 c1 Rainb0wshine
No no no no no no please make more it's good I need more, hurry! I can tell already that this story is going to blossom into a flower. A bloody gory flower with kitties dying. Let's get another chapter in here!
No no no no no no please make more it's good I need more, hurry! I can tell already that this story is going to blossom into a flower. A bloody gory flower with kitties dying. Let's get another chapter in here!