for Love Between Red and Black4/1/2012 c2 
5xXStarburstNinjaXx
Really good I love it and cant wait to read more. Little suggestion though, try to sepperate your words into paragraphs, or its kinda hard to read( at least for me) other than that you did a really good job and i loved you idea.
Question though, when you say Bluefire is a vegitarion do you mean that she only drinks animal blood, or human blood or no blood at all. Im a bit slow on this kind of stuff. :)
Ps. I hope i dont seem rude. If i did then im sorry, to me, i always sound kinda mean when i write reviews even though i dont mean to.
5xXStarburstNinjaXxReally good I love it and cant wait to read more. Little suggestion though, try to sepperate your words into paragraphs, or its kinda hard to read( at least for me) other than that you did a really good job and i loved you idea.
Question though, when you say Bluefire is a vegitarion do you mean that she only drinks animal blood, or human blood or no blood at all. Im a bit slow on this kind of stuff. :)
Ps. I hope i dont seem rude. If i did then im sorry, to me, i always sound kinda mean when i write reviews even though i dont mean to.