for When the World Catches Fire4/22 c13 becthom594
PLease please please let that be embry call at her aid.. lol. I wasnt sure i was going to like this story bc im a jake girl but Embry would be my second choice. Im glad jake imprinted after Embry did so that didnt hurt to bad seeing that. I do not like this Zayne guy what soever. Im a lil confused about why it was a month from the beach day till she seen embry. I thought she was going to go and tell him that day. Also i was kinda thinking the same way as Emily...She was being a BITCH. lol. I do like this styory a lot and cant wait to read more. Good work.
PLease please please let that be embry call at her aid.. lol. I wasnt sure i was going to like this story bc im a jake girl but Embry would be my second choice. Im glad jake imprinted after Embry did so that didnt hurt to bad seeing that. I do not like this Zayne guy what soever. Im a lil confused about why it was a month from the beach day till she seen embry. I thought she was going to go and tell him that day. Also i was kinda thinking the same way as Emily...She was being a BITCH. lol. I do like this styory a lot and cant wait to read more. Good work.
4/14 c13 
10Melody-Rose-20
Ok, I think the ending was rushed - you could have done more with the Zayn/ Bella/ Monster thing you have. Like Jekyll and Hyde.
10Melody-Rose-20Ok, I think the ending was rushed - you could have done more with the Zayn/ Bella/ Monster thing you have. Like Jekyll and Hyde.
4/8 c12 jallapercabethjiperhazleo
Ohhhhhhhhhh!
More!
Embry to the rescue with the rest of the wolf pack!
Can Jake not imprint on a random girl?
O well
C
Keep up the chapies !
Ohhhhhhhhhh!
More!
Embry to the rescue with the rest of the wolf pack!
Can Jake not imprint on a random girl?
O well
C
Keep up the chapies !
1/23 c12 mikaela rosario
wow! that is really sad. would zayn really do that to bella?
wow! that is really sad. would zayn really do that to bella?
1/23 c10 mikaela rosario
i kinda feel bad 4 bella.
i kinda feel bad 4 bella.
1/23 c5 mikaela rosario
wow! so zayn's a wolf. nice.
wow! so zayn's a wolf. nice.
1/23 c3 mikaela rosario
luv it!
luv it!
1/23 c2 mikaela rosario
D nice. jacob is really happy with being able to date bella.
D nice. jacob is really happy with being able to date bella.
1/23 c1 mikaela rosario
i've read this story before. it's really amazing.
i've read this story before. it's really amazing.
1/2 c12 10Melody-Rose-20
Creepy use of third person. I thought it was funny that Bella wasn't over-reacting.
10Melody-Rose-20Creepy use of third person. I thought it was funny that Bella wasn't over-reacting.