for The Price of Winning5/17/2012 c6 Mortebella24
I really like your story,but I think you make katniss seem a bit weaker but still, I am glad that most of the characters are not OOC :)
I really like your story,but I think you make katniss seem a bit weaker but still, I am glad that most of the characters are not OOC :)
5/14/2012 c6 AranaBanana
Hey there,
This seems rather interesting so far, though it has yet to change from the original plot. I'll be waiting to see what happens next, and how the romance will develop between Cato and Katniss.
Hey there,
This seems rather interesting so far, though it has yet to change from the original plot. I'll be waiting to see what happens next, and how the romance will develop between Cato and Katniss.
5/6/2012 c6
1Vampirelover17
Looooooooove this story sooooooooo much! :') Cato and Katniss :') Perfect :3 amazing chapter :) can't wait for your next update! :) xxx
1Vampirelover17Looooooooove this story sooooooooo much! :') Cato and Katniss :') Perfect :3 amazing chapter :) can't wait for your next update! :) xxx
5/2/2012 c6 EMx2
great chapter! i like it more now that Katniss isn't so weak! i really couldn't stand her begging in the last chapter, while know that she is usually such a headstrong, non nonsense character. so im loving that her defiance is back :) update soon cant wait to see what you have planned next! ^.^
great chapter! i like it more now that Katniss isn't so weak! i really couldn't stand her begging in the last chapter, while know that she is usually such a headstrong, non nonsense character. so im loving that her defiance is back :) update soon cant wait to see what you have planned next! ^.^
5/1/2012 c6 essiesense
It almost looks like..Marvel is interested in Katnis...xDDDD THAT WOULD BE GOOD! ยด3 (make Cato more jealous, lol) Please update ASAP! 3333
It almost looks like..Marvel is interested in Katnis...xDDDD THAT WOULD BE GOOD! ยด3 (make Cato more jealous, lol) Please update ASAP! 3333
4/30/2012 c6
5Bloodredfirefly
Very nice. I liked the dream, because their version of reality is so twisted that they LIVE in a nightmare, so your Prim dream was much better than the standard Cato-kills-her-with-a-big-sword scenes in most Kato fics, though how much are you going to use the original stuff? Totally canon sort of thing with nightlock, rule change, hallucinations. Or are you striking off on your own, AU?
5BloodredfireflyVery nice. I liked the dream, because their version of reality is so twisted that they LIVE in a nightmare, so your Prim dream was much better than the standard Cato-kills-her-with-a-big-sword scenes in most Kato fics, though how much are you going to use the original stuff? Totally canon sort of thing with nightlock, rule change, hallucinations. Or are you striking off on your own, AU?
4/30/2012 c6 once and future
Loved the chapter! The inclusion of Clove is awesome... I love stories where she's heavily featured and you write her really well :)
Loved the chapter! The inclusion of Clove is awesome... I love stories where she's heavily featured and you write her really well :)
4/30/2012 c6 rosalieandbella014
I like the story it one of my favs but i hate seeing katniss being caught so many times already wen shes supposed to be on this adreneline drive to get back to prim. Do not take this review as critism because i love this story alot.
I like the story it one of my favs but i hate seeing katniss being caught so many times already wen shes supposed to be on this adreneline drive to get back to prim. Do not take this review as critism because i love this story alot.
4/30/2012 c6 geranium08
Very good chapter! I am looking forward for the Tracker Jacker scene and what Clove asked Peeta. I would hope Katniss and Cato developed feelings for each other and both won...perfect world I guess. But still...I would like that! :) Update soon.
Very good chapter! I am looking forward for the Tracker Jacker scene and what Clove asked Peeta. I would hope Katniss and Cato developed feelings for each other and both won...perfect world I guess. But still...I would like that! :) Update soon.
4/30/2012 c6 dancelover16
Great chapter! I want to see what happened between Clove and Peeta! :D and what is going on with Marvel! I agree with Shelber and I think that Clove should definitely mention Cato's dream to Katniss! That would be so funny! And I'd love to see how you would make it play out! Anyway, another wonderful chapter to a wonderful story! Love it! Please update ASAP! :D 3
Great chapter! I want to see what happened between Clove and Peeta! :D and what is going on with Marvel! I agree with Shelber and I think that Clove should definitely mention Cato's dream to Katniss! That would be so funny! And I'd love to see how you would make it play out! Anyway, another wonderful chapter to a wonderful story! Love it! Please update ASAP! :D 3
