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5/17/2012 c6 Mortebella24
I really like your story,but I think you make katniss seem a bit weaker but still, I am glad that most of the characters are not OOC :)
5/14/2012 c6 AranaBanana
Hey there,

This seems rather interesting so far, though it has yet to change from the original plot. I'll be waiting to see what happens next, and how the romance will develop between Cato and Katniss.
5/6/2012 c6 1Vampirelover17
Looooooooove this story sooooooooo much! :') Cato and Katniss :') Perfect :3 amazing chapter :) can't wait for your next update! :) xxx
5/2/2012 c6 EMx2
great chapter! i like it more now that Katniss isn't so weak! i really couldn't stand her begging in the last chapter, while know that she is usually such a headstrong, non nonsense character. so im loving that her defiance is back :) update soon cant wait to see what you have planned next! ^.^
5/1/2012 c6 1Peeniss0314
Really liked this chapter.

Update soon!
5/1/2012 c6 2Mason and Alex
Awesome xD can you make a little more fluff between katniss and Cato?
5/1/2012 c6 essiesense
It almost looks like..Marvel is interested in Katnis...xDDDD THAT WOULD BE GOOD! ยด3 (make Cato more jealous, lol) Please update ASAP! 3333
4/30/2012 c6 5Bloodredfirefly
Very nice. I liked the dream, because their version of reality is so twisted that they LIVE in a nightmare, so your Prim dream was much better than the standard Cato-kills-her-with-a-big-sword scenes in most Kato fics, though how much are you going to use the original stuff? Totally canon sort of thing with nightlock, rule change, hallucinations. Or are you striking off on your own, AU?
4/30/2012 c6 5Tally Jennifer Youngblood
does Marvel like her?

cuz its starting to sound like he does
4/30/2012 c6 once and future
Loved the chapter! The inclusion of Clove is awesome... I love stories where she's heavily featured and you write her really well :)
4/30/2012 c6 rosalieandbella014
I like the story it one of my favs but i hate seeing katniss being caught so many times already wen shes supposed to be on this adreneline drive to get back to prim. Do not take this review as critism because i love this story alot.
4/30/2012 c6 geranium08
Very good chapter! I am looking forward for the Tracker Jacker scene and what Clove asked Peeta. I would hope Katniss and Cato developed feelings for each other and both won...perfect world I guess. But still...I would like that! :) Update soon.
4/30/2012 c6 dancelover16
Great chapter! I want to see what happened between Clove and Peeta! :D and what is going on with Marvel! I agree with Shelber and I think that Clove should definitely mention Cato's dream to Katniss! That would be so funny! And I'd love to see how you would make it play out! Anyway, another wonderful chapter to a wonderful story! Love it! Please update ASAP! :D 3
4/30/2012 c6 25Hammsters
Well, I do have one critique. You know in your author's note, when you asked if there were mistakes? Yea, please has an e in it. XD Great chapter, I loved the dream about Cato and I want to know what Cato needed to talk to Peeta about! Update soon!
4/30/2012 c6 3Huntress3419
Whoa. Wonder what's up with marvel! Love it! U have GOT TO update NOW?
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