for In Many Years They May Forget5/18 c41
3shewolf2000
I love this fic! Your writing is excellent, your very good at giving the right amount of plot details without rambling (maybe that doesn't make sense, it's just something I've noticed in a lot of MWPP fics) and you keep the story moving and enjoyable. The pre-Remus/Sirius is totally adorable without overshadowing the Marauder friendship aspects. Perfect balance of canon and originality. Love it!
You absolutely cannot leave us hanging here! Although the dramatic imaging is somewhat compromised by the, well, funniness, of Remus being brained by cutlery...
I'm a complete junky for the Remus-we-know-you're-a-werewolf chapters of MWPP fics, and if your past writing is anything to go by, I'm sure I will enjoy your version immensely. So please post it soon!
Cheers, Anna
3shewolf2000I love this fic! Your writing is excellent, your very good at giving the right amount of plot details without rambling (maybe that doesn't make sense, it's just something I've noticed in a lot of MWPP fics) and you keep the story moving and enjoyable. The pre-Remus/Sirius is totally adorable without overshadowing the Marauder friendship aspects. Perfect balance of canon and originality. Love it!
You absolutely cannot leave us hanging here! Although the dramatic imaging is somewhat compromised by the, well, funniness, of Remus being brained by cutlery...
I'm a complete junky for the Remus-we-know-you're-a-werewolf chapters of MWPP fics, and if your past writing is anything to go by, I'm sure I will enjoy your version immensely. So please post it soon!
Cheers, Anna
5/14 c41
1trufflepuff
Love this story soooo much! Can't wait for the next chapter :) Why the cliffhanger whyyy? :D Awesome story plz. continue :)
1trufflepuffLove this story soooo much! Can't wait for the next chapter :) Why the cliffhanger whyyy? :D Awesome story plz. continue :)
4/16 c41
7ginny-malfoy22
I'm really enjoying this fic so far. I like the background you've given Remus with his parents and Hydrus, and I really love the relationship between Sirius and Remus, it's so sweet. I think you've done the characterisation of them all very well. Really looking forward to how you carry this story on.
7ginny-malfoy22I'm really enjoying this fic so far. I like the background you've given Remus with his parents and Hydrus, and I really love the relationship between Sirius and Remus, it's so sweet. I think you've done the characterisation of them all very well. Really looking forward to how you carry this story on.
3/30 c41
18TechNomaNcer28
Their return sure is dramatic! *siiigh*!Loool!Poor Remus feeling used!Lol!I know the feeling and the reaction he just got!XD!Awessssome chapter!Oh my god,imagine them turned into pocketwatches!
18TechNomaNcer28Their return sure is dramatic! *siiigh*!Loool!Poor Remus feeling used!Lol!I know the feeling and the reaction he just got!XD!Awessssome chapter!Oh my god,imagine them turned into pocketwatches!
3/5 c39 TechNomaNcer28
:D!Wooow!Sounds like a nice time!A very nice one!Awwwh,Sirius wanting to be James for a bit,that part was so spot-on!
:D!Wooow!Sounds like a nice time!A very nice one!Awwwh,Sirius wanting to be James for a bit,that part was so spot-on!
3/4 c3 Guest
"in that moment he felt infinite"? you should post a disclaimer for perks of being a wallflower lol
"in that moment he felt infinite"? you should post a disclaimer for perks of being a wallflower lol
2/10 c38 TechNomaNcer28
Hahaa!those boys!this sure was a funny chapter!And James,being kind of awkward about Remus,good going with them!
Hahaa!those boys!this sure was a funny chapter!And James,being kind of awkward about Remus,good going with them!
2/10 c35 TechNomaNcer28
:D!Lol,Peter's gran sounds like a party woman!Haha!Nice chapter with the different views and reactions!Aaah,Petunia was so spot on!Trying not to ask about Remus?!I'm sure she was dyyinggg to know!
:D!Lol,Peter's gran sounds like a party woman!Haha!Nice chapter with the different views and reactions!Aaah,Petunia was so spot on!Trying not to ask about Remus?!I'm sure she was dyyinggg to know!
2/9 c37 latinanewschic
Awwe, it's nice how Sirius is immediately accepting and on Remus side. I love this story, especially the friendship with Sirius, James, and Remus. Also, I saw an alert for chapter 38, but I can't see the chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Awwe, it's nice how Sirius is immediately accepting and on Remus side. I love this story, especially the friendship with Sirius, James, and Remus. Also, I saw an alert for chapter 38, but I can't see the chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
12/29/2012 c37
18Kazo Sakamari
Ohhh! Two chapters at once! I can see how Sirius is progression into a slash relationship, and Remus too. I like the way you subtly add it in there though, and just because Remus and Sirius are starting to fall for one another doesn't weaken the friendship between James and Sirius. That aspect of the story is very, very well done, not a lot of people can managed it.
It's also nice to see that you made Sirius completely trusting of Remus and completely open about everything, and while James doesn't say anything, or even think it, the way you write makes it known to the reader that he is afraid and scared, and that maybe without Sirius' confidence on the matter that he might have taken a different stance.
The fact that on top of all of this you added the part about Regulus slowly beginning to fall to his parents ideals, and Sirius worrying about that too is great. I hope this isn't too long of a review! I kinda wrote a lot...
Anyway! Can't wait until you next update, this a great story with terrific writing. I really really enjoy reading it!
18Kazo SakamariOhhh! Two chapters at once! I can see how Sirius is progression into a slash relationship, and Remus too. I like the way you subtly add it in there though, and just because Remus and Sirius are starting to fall for one another doesn't weaken the friendship between James and Sirius. That aspect of the story is very, very well done, not a lot of people can managed it.
It's also nice to see that you made Sirius completely trusting of Remus and completely open about everything, and while James doesn't say anything, or even think it, the way you write makes it known to the reader that he is afraid and scared, and that maybe without Sirius' confidence on the matter that he might have taken a different stance.
The fact that on top of all of this you added the part about Regulus slowly beginning to fall to his parents ideals, and Sirius worrying about that too is great. I hope this isn't too long of a review! I kinda wrote a lot...
Anyway! Can't wait until you next update, this a great story with terrific writing. I really really enjoy reading it!
