for Me Against the World8/14/2012 c31 Koragirl
great job thank you for all the updates . awesome work . please email me when next chapter up OK
great job thank you for all the updates . awesome work . please email me when next chapter up OK
8/1/2012 c31
3Scaehime-KingofKing's Daughter
Funny how Tea was the one to comment on Yami being the Friendship speech maker.
I didn't know the meaning of Marik's name before, but it was pretty obvious that Malika was supposed to be a female version of Marik. Don't beat yourself up over not explaining it sooner.
3Scaehime-KingofKing's DaughterFunny how Tea was the one to comment on Yami being the Friendship speech maker.
I didn't know the meaning of Marik's name before, but it was pretty obvious that Malika was supposed to be a female version of Marik. Don't beat yourself up over not explaining it sooner.
8/1/2012 c31
36XxBlackRoseWitch378xX
That was a nice closing, I'm happy that you made Malika her name, because back then I imagined Marik's gendberbender name, Malika. Strange huh? But anyway I love this chapter. :)))
36XxBlackRoseWitch378xXThat was a nice closing, I'm happy that you made Malika her name, because back then I imagined Marik's gendberbender name, Malika. Strange huh? But anyway I love this chapter. :)))
8/1/2012 c31
4SerenePanic
"Ignore her!" Haha, I immediately though: "Ignore me!" I was watching far too much YGOTAS yesterday...
Great chapter!
4SerenePanic"Ignore her!" Haha, I immediately though: "Ignore me!" I was watching far too much YGOTAS yesterday...
Great chapter!
7/27/2012 c30 SerenePanic
Yay! Marik had been revealed as a girl! Now I can't help but wonder what will happen next...
Yay! Marik had been revealed as a girl! Now I can't help but wonder what will happen next...
7/27/2012 c30
4MyFalseTruth
I really like this chapter. Marik acting like a girl (well, not acting like one, just flaunting the fact she is one). Remu is just awesome. I think he is my favorite character of this story. Him chasing and pouring ice cubes down Marik's shirt was really cool. (Ha! It's a pun!... not funny is it? -is shot for stupid joke-)
I really hope Marik was kidding about being called 'Marika'. It just doesn't work. I audibly laughed at what Remu said he'd call her after she told him to call her that.
Good chapter. I didn't notice a single spelling or grammer mistake so good job on that.
4MyFalseTruthI really like this chapter. Marik acting like a girl (well, not acting like one, just flaunting the fact she is one). Remu is just awesome. I think he is my favorite character of this story. Him chasing and pouring ice cubes down Marik's shirt was really cool. (Ha! It's a pun!... not funny is it? -is shot for stupid joke-)
I really hope Marik was kidding about being called 'Marika'. It just doesn't work. I audibly laughed at what Remu said he'd call her after she told him to call her that.
Good chapter. I didn't notice a single spelling or grammer mistake so good job on that.
7/27/2012 c30
102Youngbountygirl
OH YEAH! I LOVE RIDING MATER! Also, Serenity never messed with Joey yet when Kisara leaves with Seto.
102YoungbountygirlOH YEAH! I LOVE RIDING MATER! Also, Serenity never messed with Joey yet when Kisara leaves with Seto.
7/26/2012 c30
36XxBlackRoseWitch378xX
Wow, Marik. You are you so bold. XD I aww'ed at the Bakura and Marik moment. :3
36XxBlackRoseWitch378xXWow, Marik. You are you so bold. XD I aww'ed at the Bakura and Marik moment. :3
