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1DaftDruid
I would just like to say that I am really truly loving the latest few chapters and can't wait for more in the stories! I really think you should be a published author because this stuff is truly amazing!
Thank you for the amazing work in progress!
1DaftDruidI would just like to say that I am really truly loving the latest few chapters and can't wait for more in the stories! I really think you should be a published author because this stuff is truly amazing!
Thank you for the amazing work in progress!
5/20 c53 1Casanovan
That was exciting! Really an entertaining chapter. Who knew demons would operate with smartphone-like UI's? I got really freaked out when it seemed like GC was dead, though. Like, I play a hunter as my main, and I didn't see the feign death thing coming. Thank god we didn't lose anyone.
Really excited to see what happens next!
1CasanovanThat was exciting! Really an entertaining chapter. Who knew demons would operate with smartphone-like UI's? I got really freaked out when it seemed like GC was dead, though. Like, I play a hunter as my main, and I didn't see the feign death thing coming. Thank god we didn't lose anyone.
Really excited to see what happens next!
5/19 c52 Sparkie
Sorry I haven't been able to review for ages, but I'm looking forwards to the next chapter!
Sorry I haven't been able to review for ages, but I'm looking forwards to the next chapter!
5/18 c52 5Skedaddle-San
You've done a great job in writing this up so far; it's honestly refreshing to see such a well-done OC (?) fic in the warcraft category that manages to write the earth/azeroth culture-clash believably (that bit with Senta'ri and Earth's mass-produced goods had me cracking up).
On a relevant note, I reckon you pulled off first-person narration really well, aside from a bit of ambiguity apropos character descriptions. :P The plot and pacing was also a plus - at first I was reluctant to reluctant to read this in case the pacing started to meander (e.g. some 'epic' fics requiring 20 chapters for a single arc), but, yeah, issue averted. :L On the whole, Burning Legion has a cohesiveness to it that makes for an immersive read, to say the least. :) I'll be looking forward to your next update!
-Skedaddle
5Skedaddle-SanYou've done a great job in writing this up so far; it's honestly refreshing to see such a well-done OC (?) fic in the warcraft category that manages to write the earth/azeroth culture-clash believably (that bit with Senta'ri and Earth's mass-produced goods had me cracking up).
On a relevant note, I reckon you pulled off first-person narration really well, aside from a bit of ambiguity apropos character descriptions. :P The plot and pacing was also a plus - at first I was reluctant to reluctant to read this in case the pacing started to meander (e.g. some 'epic' fics requiring 20 chapters for a single arc), but, yeah, issue averted. :L On the whole, Burning Legion has a cohesiveness to it that makes for an immersive read, to say the least. :) I'll be looking forward to your next update!
-Skedaddle
5/14 c52 1Casanovan
Finally another WoW player! I was beginning to think they'd all evaporated. Gah, but now I have to wait another week for an update! It's ok, it's worth waiting for. Good chapter, update soon.
1CasanovanFinally another WoW player! I was beginning to think they'd all evaporated. Gah, but now I have to wait another week for an update! It's ok, it's worth waiting for. Good chapter, update soon.
5/14 c51 1DaftDruid
I have loved this story so far and can't wait for the next few chapters! I am only a recent fan but I think that its written amazingly! I think that even though you think otherwise, the love story side i quite entertaining. Can't wait for more!
1DaftDruidI have loved this story so far and can't wait for the next few chapters! I am only a recent fan but I think that its written amazingly! I think that even though you think otherwise, the love story side i quite entertaining. Can't wait for more!
5/8 c51 Khaylie
Think it was very smart of you to make that list, even if I knew everyone already kinda. It was fun to read about their appearances.
Now I only need their faces :D or mostly Brath's - I wanna know what he looks like!
It feels sad that its almost the end of this story :/ it lies very close to my heart.
Keep up the good work!
Think it was very smart of you to make that list, even if I knew everyone already kinda. It was fun to read about their appearances.
Now I only need their faces :D or mostly Brath's - I wanna know what he looks like!
It feels sad that its almost the end of this story :/ it lies very close to my heart.
Keep up the good work!
5/7 c51 3Alaythassa
OMG thank you so much for the list! I can finally imagine the characters properly (not that I wasn't able to before, but now my imagination is more ... acurate? Meh, sounds cheap).
Now the conflicts of Azeroth are finally catching up with the heroes on Earth ... well, I hate Garrosh's guts for wiping out Theramore and I can totally understand the gnome. But I can also understand Amy's point. She wants the suffering and the death in her world to stop and oh my god she is just 17 years old! She's barely an adult and of course she thinks about the Azerothians in that way. Who wants to blame her? Her world doesn't have the weapons to fight the demons and they can't even see them. If someone has to fight somebody who he doesn't know to whom does he turn? To someone who fought that fiend already and in Amy's case, this someone were the people of Azeroth.
Yeah, alright, I'm talking about everything and nothing again :D
Thank you for the list, it really helped.
Best Wishes Alaythassa
P.S.: Are you well again? If not, get well soon :D
3AlaythassaOMG thank you so much for the list! I can finally imagine the characters properly (not that I wasn't able to before, but now my imagination is more ... acurate? Meh, sounds cheap).
Now the conflicts of Azeroth are finally catching up with the heroes on Earth ... well, I hate Garrosh's guts for wiping out Theramore and I can totally understand the gnome. But I can also understand Amy's point. She wants the suffering and the death in her world to stop and oh my god she is just 17 years old! She's barely an adult and of course she thinks about the Azerothians in that way. Who wants to blame her? Her world doesn't have the weapons to fight the demons and they can't even see them. If someone has to fight somebody who he doesn't know to whom does he turn? To someone who fought that fiend already and in Amy's case, this someone were the people of Azeroth.
Yeah, alright, I'm talking about everything and nothing again :D
Thank you for the list, it really helped.
Best Wishes Alaythassa
P.S.: Are you well again? If not, get well soon :D
5/2 c50 Alaythassa
Hello there!
Yet again, thank you for updating :D I think I might've explained this before, but I am really happy that you update weekly. Thank you!
Hrrr, I imagine Brath as kind of hot now ... he cut his hair and is shaven ... hm ... oh, I drooled on the floor :D sorry :D
I don't know how it is with you (you're the author, you probably know about them) but I have kind of problems to put a face in my imagination to a name if you understand what I mean. I am too lazy to just look who is who, so, could you perhaps make a list at the end of the next chapter about who is who again.
Well, I know that Nicolas is a rogue, that Clara is a priest, that Eric and Fizz are mages and so on, but ... I don't know, I somehow can't memorize the classes of other characters such as Hendrik and Neesera ... well, I'm dumb, soo yeah, it would be totally cool if you'd make that list ... or not, depends on you :D
Alright, I'm rambling again and the comment always gets so looooong ... yeah ":D
Just one last question: If this story is finished, are you going to write another one like a sequel or something? Or are you going to concentrate on your other stories?
Get well sooooooon (\0/)
Alaythassa
Hello there!
Yet again, thank you for updating :D I think I might've explained this before, but I am really happy that you update weekly. Thank you!
Hrrr, I imagine Brath as kind of hot now ... he cut his hair and is shaven ... hm ... oh, I drooled on the floor :D sorry :D
I don't know how it is with you (you're the author, you probably know about them) but I have kind of problems to put a face in my imagination to a name if you understand what I mean. I am too lazy to just look who is who, so, could you perhaps make a list at the end of the next chapter about who is who again.
Well, I know that Nicolas is a rogue, that Clara is a priest, that Eric and Fizz are mages and so on, but ... I don't know, I somehow can't memorize the classes of other characters such as Hendrik and Neesera ... well, I'm dumb, soo yeah, it would be totally cool if you'd make that list ... or not, depends on you :D
Alright, I'm rambling again and the comment always gets so looooong ... yeah ":D
Just one last question: If this story is finished, are you going to write another one like a sequel or something? Or are you going to concentrate on your other stories?
Get well sooooooon (\0/)
Alaythassa
4/21 c48 systrami
I can see Clara's and Nicolas' point in trying to steer Amy away from Brath, since the black dragonflight are... well, crazy. They don't really know what Brath has done for Amy and that he's all better now. Still, I think it's really, really mean towards Eric! I mean, poor guy thought he had a chance! He needs a girl. Werewolves are really popular in earthen culture at the moment, so I'm sure a girl from Earth would be all over him :)
Kidding aside, poor Eric. Thanks for updating! :)
I can see Clara's and Nicolas' point in trying to steer Amy away from Brath, since the black dragonflight are... well, crazy. They don't really know what Brath has done for Amy and that he's all better now. Still, I think it's really, really mean towards Eric! I mean, poor guy thought he had a chance! He needs a girl. Werewolves are really popular in earthen culture at the moment, so I'm sure a girl from Earth would be all over him :)
Kidding aside, poor Eric. Thanks for updating! :)
4/17 c48 3Alaythassa
I really have to say THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UOPDATING EVERY WEEEEEEK ... ... ... *cough*
Yeah, alright, I'm sure you get it ... but really, thank you. This is the only story in my alert list that gets updated regularly. I cannot say how happy I am about this :D
I was also finally able to picture Wrath in my head because only a few days ago, my character met him in Pandaria. At first I was a little bit confused and looked at his name to make sure I wasn't mistaken (I play the German Version and there he's called Furorion - FurorWrath "xD I hate you Blizz) but then I saw him and was all like "Oh, taht's Braths little brother! Nice to meet you" and went into fangirl mode ... yeah ...
Well, I'm rambling again *sigh* Great chapter :D I really liked the part where Amy started to realize the things about the conspiracy that is going on. And I really think the others should have known better, because I know from experience that if the wrong person says the wrong word at the wrong place in the wrong minute, there will be hell to pay ... yeah, I'm not exactly an angel :DDD
Alright, this comment is way too long, so I shorten things up: Thank you for this story and keep writing like this.
LG Alaythassa
3AlaythassaI really have to say THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UOPDATING EVERY WEEEEEEK ... ... ... *cough*
Yeah, alright, I'm sure you get it ... but really, thank you. This is the only story in my alert list that gets updated regularly. I cannot say how happy I am about this :D
I was also finally able to picture Wrath in my head because only a few days ago, my character met him in Pandaria. At first I was a little bit confused and looked at his name to make sure I wasn't mistaken (I play the German Version and there he's called Furorion - FurorWrath "xD I hate you Blizz) but then I saw him and was all like "Oh, taht's Braths little brother! Nice to meet you" and went into fangirl mode ... yeah ...
Well, I'm rambling again *sigh* Great chapter :D I really liked the part where Amy started to realize the things about the conspiracy that is going on. And I really think the others should have known better, because I know from experience that if the wrong person says the wrong word at the wrong place in the wrong minute, there will be hell to pay ... yeah, I'm not exactly an angel :DDD
Alright, this comment is way too long, so I shorten things up: Thank you for this story and keep writing like this.
LG Alaythassa