for Hinata's Problem8/26/2012 c10 ranneal
A super cool chapter...this is an amazing fanfic...the smackdown was sooooo cool that I just laughed...good comedy mix in the story also...it is sexy and tense at times but also funny. I fun read!
A super cool chapter...this is an amazing fanfic...the smackdown was sooooo cool that I just laughed...good comedy mix in the story also...it is sexy and tense at times but also funny. I fun read!
8/26/2012 c9 ranneal
Amazing chpt...I think you are an amazing writer to have put together such a well-written...fast paced...exciting...sexy story:) I really don't want it to end. I am wondering if Hinata will defend Naruto here? That would be superb!
Amazing chpt...I think you are an amazing writer to have put together such a well-written...fast paced...exciting...sexy story:) I really don't want it to end. I am wondering if Hinata will defend Naruto here? That would be superb!
8/25/2012 c8 ranneal
I think you have done a great job with character development in this story. The characters seem real and at least I can relate them back to the type of characters in Naruto. Super job.
I think you have done a great job with character development in this story. The characters seem real and at least I can relate them back to the type of characters in Naruto. Super job.
8/25/2012 c7 ranneal
Super great chapter...soooo good that they worked it out. This is a GREAT story. You work through events that take place in such a well written cool pace. You get into the character's head in such a way that the reader empathizes with them and cares what happens to Hinata and Naruto... great job.
Super great chapter...soooo good that they worked it out. This is a GREAT story. You work through events that take place in such a well written cool pace. You get into the character's head in such a way that the reader empathizes with them and cares what happens to Hinata and Naruto... great job.
8/25/2012 c6 ranneal
Wow...love this chapter...I had an idea that it was Hinata all the time...since you hinted about her 'plan'. I hope Naruto gets with the program now:)
Wow...love this chapter...I had an idea that it was Hinata all the time...since you hinted about her 'plan'. I hope Naruto gets with the program now:)
8/25/2012 c5 ranneal
Man, that was the best lemon this guy has read...soooo cool:) You really are great with the details and even had some laughs in there. I think I will read that chapter again!
Man, that was the best lemon this guy has read...soooo cool:) You really are great with the details and even had some laughs in there. I think I will read that chapter again!
8/25/2012 c4 ranneal
Amazing story in which I think that your writing moves it along so well that I have to slow myself down to reread some cool sentences. You are putting enough emotion and reminders of Naruto and Hinata's life struggles that it is making this a great story...not just a 'flash in the pan'...I'm enjoying it!
Amazing story in which I think that your writing moves it along so well that I have to slow myself down to reread some cool sentences. You are putting enough emotion and reminders of Naruto and Hinata's life struggles that it is making this a great story...not just a 'flash in the pan'...I'm enjoying it!
8/25/2012 c1 ranneal
This is a classic first chapter:) Wow...great writing...and creative...what a different take on the return of Naruto! Very cool idea for the reason for Hinata's total crush on Naruto.
This is a classic first chapter:) Wow...great writing...and creative...what a different take on the return of Naruto! Very cool idea for the reason for Hinata's total crush on Naruto.
8/23/2012 c14 
5Aki666
I still love this story! XD
I look foward to the challenge!
I don't expect you to update right away. I know you have a life out side of your computer and you have an Actually Life that you most live. I'm not nor will I ever be one of those people that will ask you to update right away. Even if you don't finish this story I'll still read it over and over until you take it down.
So with that said have a happy and awesome life and I hope you live it to the fulliest! Ja Ne!
5Aki666I still love this story! XD
I look foward to the challenge!
I don't expect you to update right away. I know you have a life out side of your computer and you have an Actually Life that you most live. I'm not nor will I ever be one of those people that will ask you to update right away. Even if you don't finish this story I'll still read it over and over until you take it down.
So with that said have a happy and awesome life and I hope you live it to the fulliest! Ja Ne!
8/9/2012 c3 5Wrathkal
BWAHAHAHA! I had the same reaction as Tsunade to Naruto's comment about going to Shino!
5WrathkalBWAHAHAHA! I had the same reaction as Tsunade to Naruto's comment about going to Shino!
8/7/2012 c14 1TylerSpikes
I understand if you've allowed your story to go quiet due to the recent story deletion scare, but other authors are picking their stories back up in mild caution. It'd be really great if you were to continue this story as well.
1TylerSpikesI understand if you've allowed your story to go quiet due to the recent story deletion scare, but other authors are picking their stories back up in mild caution. It'd be really great if you were to continue this story as well.
8/1/2012 c14 1fierblaze
hey man im loving the story. but its been awhile sense u updated. is there something wrong?
1fierblazehey man im loving the story. but its been awhile sense u updated. is there something wrong?
7/29/2012 c7 StormeSkyes
At first I let it slide, but your characterization of Tsunade is getting pretty irrational. It's like she only has the slightest hints of humanity in her, and holds almost nothing but contempt for Naruto. Even if the situation annoys her for some reason, it would make far more sense for her to just delegate the handling of it to Shizune, who is kind of making all the decisions anyway. Sure Tsunade calls Naruto her son, but she treats him pretty terribly when it's already been explained to her that he needs patience and understanding. Their mock hostility is funny in a low tension situation, but it just comes off as cruel and annoying when there's heavy drama going on like you've designed. Give the Hokage more credit.
Other than that, I'm glad this painful distraction is over now.
At first I let it slide, but your characterization of Tsunade is getting pretty irrational. It's like she only has the slightest hints of humanity in her, and holds almost nothing but contempt for Naruto. Even if the situation annoys her for some reason, it would make far more sense for her to just delegate the handling of it to Shizune, who is kind of making all the decisions anyway. Sure Tsunade calls Naruto her son, but she treats him pretty terribly when it's already been explained to her that he needs patience and understanding. Their mock hostility is funny in a low tension situation, but it just comes off as cruel and annoying when there's heavy drama going on like you've designed. Give the Hokage more credit.
Other than that, I'm glad this painful distraction is over now.