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5Alpha101
One of the best stories ever! I know this probably woulden't happen, but woulden't it be cool if you wrote one about roach and ghost SURVIVING and they reunite will Allison and the others? I know you must be busy, but that would be awesome! Anyway, really good story!
Alpha101.
5Alpha101One of the best stories ever! I know this probably woulden't happen, but woulden't it be cool if you wrote one about roach and ghost SURVIVING and they reunite will Allison and the others? I know you must be busy, but that would be awesome! Anyway, really good story!
Alpha101.
10/14/2012 c47 DustMan
Thanks for the shout out:) sorry for not writing a review that often I was busy with school and clubs and try outs and so fourth. Awesome story :) I hate how MW2 they just had to kill of Roach and ghost :(
Thanks for the shout out:) sorry for not writing a review that often I was busy with school and clubs and try outs and so fourth. Awesome story :) I hate how MW2 they just had to kill of Roach and ghost :(
9/16/2012 c47 devon
I cried that was beautiful
I cried that was beautiful
8/26/2012 c45 Nioba
oh no... i wanted to read this story through to the last chapter and only review in the end but... look, i have seen this scene like a bazilion times, where Roach and Ghost die, and it always almost makes me cry. (almost, only because i am a bit too old for crying over motion pictures and literature, but were i younger, i would totally break down in cry)
i have to tell you, i also read about 20 different descriptions of that scene written by various authors, but none of them made me feel the same as while watching the in-game scene, except yours and maybe one more.
well, i may not have put it in the best words i could, but this was meant as honest and pure praise upon your art of inducing emotions via words. you are awesome, Tiger :)
oh no... i wanted to read this story through to the last chapter and only review in the end but... look, i have seen this scene like a bazilion times, where Roach and Ghost die, and it always almost makes me cry. (almost, only because i am a bit too old for crying over motion pictures and literature, but were i younger, i would totally break down in cry)
i have to tell you, i also read about 20 different descriptions of that scene written by various authors, but none of them made me feel the same as while watching the in-game scene, except yours and maybe one more.
well, i may not have put it in the best words i could, but this was meant as honest and pure praise upon your art of inducing emotions via words. you are awesome, Tiger :)
8/24/2012 c1 3Lt. Jay Chiuraya
150th review!
Mate, I bloody love your works... A lot of them
Your chice of words and your concepts are just so creative and exciting. Alison and I have our similarities, you made Roach and Ghost easier to love, and because of you, I can see them in my sleep, I can draw them doing random stuff xD
Tiger, you are a bloody fantastic writer. Thank you for makin me shed tears that have not been ahed in a LONG TIME.
3Lt. Jay Chiuraya150th review!
Mate, I bloody love your works... A lot of them
Your chice of words and your concepts are just so creative and exciting. Alison and I have our similarities, you made Roach and Ghost easier to love, and because of you, I can see them in my sleep, I can draw them doing random stuff xD
Tiger, you are a bloody fantastic writer. Thank you for makin me shed tears that have not been ahed in a LONG TIME.
8/23/2012 c47 3Unt0t3n
OwO Adorable- It's so CUTE how you named the kids after Ghost and Roach (I died inside when I read that) and Alison and Matvei (my new OTP) and just... SQUEEEEEEEE It's been awesome to see you improve through this fanfic and hopeful we will continue to see more improvement in the futu- okay this is starting to sound like one of those really long notes in the corner a teacher writes in your yearbook so- YAY keep improving! Congrats on almost 150 reviews(one more!) kthxbai! /Unt0t3n/
(thanks for the shoutout thingy!)
3Unt0t3nOwO Adorable- It's so CUTE how you named the kids after Ghost and Roach (I died inside when I read that) and Alison and Matvei (my new OTP) and just... SQUEEEEEEEE It's been awesome to see you improve through this fanfic and hopeful we will continue to see more improvement in the futu- okay this is starting to sound like one of those really long notes in the corner a teacher writes in your yearbook so- YAY keep improving! Congrats on almost 150 reviews(one more!) kthxbai! /Unt0t3n/
(thanks for the shoutout thingy!)
8/23/2012 c46 Unt0t3n
holy freakin' god... once again- my brother thinks I'm an idiot and this has been the most emotion provoking story I've read... I think ever.(screw books! They don't have anything on THIS) I cried again(lol I'm such a baby) and holy crap- the letters... they just... blew me away. Poor Alison... and everyone... BWAH... TT,TT you should write a book xD
kthxbai /Unt0t3n/
holy freakin' god... once again- my brother thinks I'm an idiot and this has been the most emotion provoking story I've read... I think ever.(screw books! They don't have anything on THIS) I cried again(lol I'm such a baby) and holy crap- the letters... they just... blew me away. Poor Alison... and everyone... BWAH... TT,TT you should write a book xD
kthxbai /Unt0t3n/
8/22/2012 c47 xXxFrostBitexXx
Oh my gosh! I knew it! Alison you are epic haha Happy endings make me really happy and joyful :D
This was a great story and I can't wait for more fanfictions from you! Awesome job! I'm glad she still kept her career in the military in her mind. Awesome fanfiction and the best on here of all time xD
Oh my gosh! I knew it! Alison you are epic haha Happy endings make me really happy and joyful :D
This was a great story and I can't wait for more fanfictions from you! Awesome job! I'm glad she still kept her career in the military in her mind. Awesome fanfiction and the best on here of all time xD
8/22/2012 c46 xXxFrostBitexXx
I am going to spill tears and cause our towns first ever flood! Oh my Gosh Poor Alison (I miss my comma key...this is going to be hard to write this review haha) I hope she at least can tend to their funerals or something? If she ever gets married name her kids after them? I dunno I am thinking crazy lol -_- Sorry for my craziness...I am acting like the drama queen. Anyway I can't believe how fast this story went by. 46 chapters is a lot and was welly awesomely beautifully written and made me cry and laugh at some parts as the story went on chapter after chapter. I wish Roach and Ghost never died in Modern Warfare 2 it sucks -.- but life must go on...
Life goes by fast! This story gave me a lesson in a way. Live life as if you'd die tomorrow. Don't regret anything but remember the good old times and the positive future ahead. Tears won't bring anyone back even though they will be with you in spirit or up above watching over you like a guardian angel. You never know what could happen in war or over in the states at home and you should treat others like you wanna be treated because you never know when they'll take their final breath...
Yes..wow...I say a lot -.- Anyways I can't wait to see what happens next...
I am going to spill tears and cause our towns first ever flood! Oh my Gosh Poor Alison (I miss my comma key...this is going to be hard to write this review haha) I hope she at least can tend to their funerals or something? If she ever gets married name her kids after them? I dunno I am thinking crazy lol -_- Sorry for my craziness...I am acting like the drama queen. Anyway I can't believe how fast this story went by. 46 chapters is a lot and was welly awesomely beautifully written and made me cry and laugh at some parts as the story went on chapter after chapter. I wish Roach and Ghost never died in Modern Warfare 2 it sucks -.- but life must go on...
Life goes by fast! This story gave me a lesson in a way. Live life as if you'd die tomorrow. Don't regret anything but remember the good old times and the positive future ahead. Tears won't bring anyone back even though they will be with you in spirit or up above watching over you like a guardian angel. You never know what could happen in war or over in the states at home and you should treat others like you wanna be treated because you never know when they'll take their final breath...
Yes..wow...I say a lot -.- Anyways I can't wait to see what happens next...
8/22/2012 c45 xXxFrostBitexXx
Oh. MY. GOD! Why you make me cry! Litterally I have tears spilling out of my eyes and I was playing the saddest song ever! The Humbling River just ended as it said "Roach was dead" and I'm like
This was sad...
Oh my god Roach! Get back up pwease! *Hugs Roach and Ghost* Alison needs you!
and all I can say is this was sad and written welly...it made me cry and I don't usually emotionless in reading...but today I did and this was sad and I feel all sad D:
watch?vdIjUtzWrCeA just listen to this and read and you will know what I mean...It gave me sad chills...
Rest in Peace Roach and Ghost
Oh. MY. GOD! Why you make me cry! Litterally I have tears spilling out of my eyes and I was playing the saddest song ever! The Humbling River just ended as it said "Roach was dead" and I'm like
This was sad...
Oh my god Roach! Get back up pwease! *Hugs Roach and Ghost* Alison needs you!
and all I can say is this was sad and written welly...it made me cry and I don't usually emotionless in reading...but today I did and this was sad and I feel all sad D:
watch?vdIjUtzWrCeA just listen to this and read and you will know what I mean...It gave me sad chills...
Rest in Peace Roach and Ghost
8/22/2012 c45 Unt0t3n
BWAH That was... those two chapters were just... so FREAKIN' SAD. I actually cried- not like eyes watering and maybe one tear crying- like actual hysterical crying (my brother was like "shut up" and I was like -tries to explain that Cheetah died and then it was loose ends- TT,TT And I love the description of loose ends. at first I was like "is it...?" and then I realized it was loose ends and started crying again D: I love how you didn't specifically tell it was loose ends but you could kinda tell from the foreshadowing by Roach. And the part where Cheetah died... I DIED inside... FREAKIN' AMAZING!
kthxbai /Unt0t3n/
BWAH That was... those two chapters were just... so FREAKIN' SAD. I actually cried- not like eyes watering and maybe one tear crying- like actual hysterical crying (my brother was like "shut up" and I was like -tries to explain that Cheetah died and then it was loose ends- TT,TT And I love the description of loose ends. at first I was like "is it...?" and then I realized it was loose ends and started crying again D: I love how you didn't specifically tell it was loose ends but you could kinda tell from the foreshadowing by Roach. And the part where Cheetah died... I DIED inside... FREAKIN' AMAZING!
kthxbai /Unt0t3n/
8/21/2012 c44 FrostBite
My heart...is...broken! Oh my gosh...Rest in Peace Ian...
This made meh sad and I'll be sader again tomorrow or on anyother update because the end it coming! Man this went quick...
I am sad...I will go in corner now D;
My heart...is...broken! Oh my gosh...Rest in Peace Ian...
This made meh sad and I'll be sader again tomorrow or on anyother update because the end it coming! Man this went quick...
I am sad...I will go in corner now D;
8/21/2012 c43 Unt0t3n
n'awwwwwww I hate sad goodbyes TT,TT I keep dying inside when I read this story- when I checked fanfic for updates earlier I was like -sees update... almost yells"YAYYYYYYYY"- but I couldn't yell 'cuz my family already thinks I'm crazy enough... Anyway- awesome suspense-almost-cliffhanger thing with the letters (that or I'm just being derpy and missing out on something) lol I'm always like "holy crap how do you update so freakin' fast!?" awesome chapters! kthxbai! /Unt0t3n/
n'awwwwwww I hate sad goodbyes TT,TT I keep dying inside when I read this story- when I checked fanfic for updates earlier I was like -sees update... almost yells"YAYYYYYYYY"- but I couldn't yell 'cuz my family already thinks I'm crazy enough... Anyway- awesome suspense-almost-cliffhanger thing with the letters (that or I'm just being derpy and missing out on something) lol I'm always like "holy crap how do you update so freakin' fast!?" awesome chapters! kthxbai! /Unt0t3n/