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7/22/2012 c1 21Renn
Please do continue, this made me grin and I'd loveeee to read more! :)
4/6/2012 c1 tchaikfour
1. You summarise this as pre-slash.

2. I am intrigued and cross my fingers that you'll write more.

3. ?

4. Profit!

Very nice! It's kind of static, which isn't at all a bad thing. Just means that it isn't going anywhere yet and I'd love to see where it ends up going. I adore the snappiness of your dialogue! Keep on being a fantastic writer.
4/6/2012 c1 11sassie69
I found this a bit odd, more like a random thought than anything else. I love J/S slash and of course would like to see what happens AFTER the lift gets stuck, but obviously you are leaving that to the reader's imagination.

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