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12Mockingjay Rose
Hi, this is a very interesting story. What happened to Kapitel 1, may I ask? It starts off from 2. And chapters 2 & 3 are identical. D:
Please update soon!
-MJR
12Mockingjay RoseHi, this is a very interesting story. What happened to Kapitel 1, may I ask? It starts off from 2. And chapters 2 & 3 are identical. D:
Please update soon!
-MJR
10/30/2012 c3 aliceangel05
why is it incomplete?...update please ... thanks
why is it incomplete?...update please ... thanks
7/26/2012 c3 1LuckyxSteist
the pair for ouka is DEFINITELY teito! :33
anyways keep it up! me likey your story 'bout teito and ouka
:33
1LuckyxSteistthe pair for ouka is DEFINITELY teito! :33
anyways keep it up! me likey your story 'bout teito and ouka
:33
7/19/2012 c2 HessietheHorsie
OUKA MUST BE WITH TEITO! PLEASEEEEEEE :')
OUKA MUST BE WITH TEITO! PLEASEEEEEEE :')
7/15/2012 c3 amado15
pretty good chapter and now ouka knows about herself. though I kinda think its too soon but you might have a bigger plot planned out so il wait and see.
as for pairings, of course im all for teitoXouka. there's hardly any of those in here.
pretty good chapter and now ouka knows about herself. though I kinda think its too soon but you might have a bigger plot planned out so il wait and see.
as for pairings, of course im all for teitoXouka. there's hardly any of those in here.
7/2/2012 c2 Guest
Loving it so far! It is so well written :). Also, I had an idea that maybe Ouka should be raphael's bearer. Yhen there should be a showdown between mikail and Raphael *dun dun duuun*. Also looking forward for a meeting between Ouka and ayanami! Anyway keep writing! .
Loving it so far! It is so well written :). Also, I had an idea that maybe Ouka should be raphael's bearer. Yhen there should be a showdown between mikail and Raphael *dun dun duuun*. Also looking forward for a meeting between Ouka and ayanami! Anyway keep writing! .
5/26/2012 c2 2ShiroAmashi
Wah It's been awhile since I've been on FF. It's nice to see that the amount of fanfictions including Ouka have increased
Please? Continue? Your writing is going well, even though there are lumps here and there. But most everyone's writing has that. And I enjoy the plot line you've made.
2ShiroAmashiWah It's been awhile since I've been on FF. It's nice to see that the amount of fanfictions including Ouka have increased
Please? Continue? Your writing is going well, even though there are lumps here and there. But most everyone's writing has that. And I enjoy the plot line you've made.
5/7/2012 c2 2Alina Wolve
Wow. Love the story~ Teito's being shy around ouka that's so cute.~ keep up the good work.
2Alina WolveWow. Love the story~ Teito's being shy around ouka that's so cute.~ keep up the good work.