for Old Friends and New Romances5/18 c4
4dream lighting
Jerks poor Tyson please keep writing shame you've stopped hope they end up together keep writing
4dream lightingJerks poor Tyson please keep writing shame you've stopped hope they end up together keep writing
4/3 c4 bunnykim89
hi this is the first time im reading this fanfic and i gotta say i love it. introducing rayne after the betrayal was genius i cant wait to read the update and hope its soon bye
hi this is the first time im reading this fanfic and i gotta say i love it. introducing rayne after the betrayal was genius i cant wait to read the update and hope its soon bye
3/23 c4 Matsukaze Tenma
Thank you for the update my friend...hope to read the next chapter for my upcoming birthday on March 28th
Thank you for the update my friend...hope to read the next chapter for my upcoming birthday on March 28th
3/21 c4
4queen of beyblade
you updated,yeah...
i really love your story and do you need other oc's? cause i can give you mine
again love the story and hope to the continuation fast...
4queen of beybladeyou updated,yeah...
i really love your story and do you need other oc's? cause i can give you mine
again love the story and hope to the continuation fast...
3/21 c4 Saiya
What a great update! I always get ** off when I remember how Tyson's team mates ditched him. And I get his anger, I would be mad to. It also always angered me when Hiro or Daichi or any of the others belittled him for it as well. I cannot wait to read what you have planned for next.
Saiya
What a great update! I always get ** off when I remember how Tyson's team mates ditched him. And I get his anger, I would be mad to. It also always angered me when Hiro or Daichi or any of the others belittled him for it as well. I cannot wait to read what you have planned for next.
Saiya
10/19/2012 c3 latdh1
i hope his former friends suffer love this fic, keep it coming
i hope his former friends suffer love this fic, keep it coming
10/10/2012 c2 Matsukaze Tenma
wow; the rest of the Bladebrakers are stupid to abandon Tyson when he needs them the most. Thank goodness he has an old friend willing to help him. Also will the other teams (White Tiger, the Demolition Boys, the All Stars, The Dark Bladers, The Majestics etc) will appear?
Tyson should act as a cold person to those who betrayed him in his time of need but funny, friendly, gentle and kind to others.
PS: Can't wait for the next chapters to be updated. Hope to read it soon
wow; the rest of the Bladebrakers are stupid to abandon Tyson when he needs them the most. Thank goodness he has an old friend willing to help him. Also will the other teams (White Tiger, the Demolition Boys, the All Stars, The Dark Bladers, The Majestics etc) will appear?
Tyson should act as a cold person to those who betrayed him in his time of need but funny, friendly, gentle and kind to others.
PS: Can't wait for the next chapters to be updated. Hope to read it soon
7/3/2012 c2 Guest
Thank you for the chapter! I'm happy !
Thank you for the chapter! I'm happy !
7/3/2012 c2 Sprintingfever
Wow, the bomb was dropped there! Hehe
I like the sound of Hydrus. So update soon!
Happy writings :)
Wow, the bomb was dropped there! Hehe
I like the sound of Hydrus. So update soon!
Happy writings :)
7/3/2012 c1 Sprintingfever
It's pretty good, I like the story. Highlight: Tyson was kept well in-character! :) That's hard to do.
My one qualm is that Rayne sounds a tiny bit like a Sue (she ties with Tyson) but it's early days so. Oh and there's a couple of grammatical blips here and there in terms of tenses. Other than that it's pretty good.
But we'll see how it goes in the next chappie! Happy writings :)
It's pretty good, I like the story. Highlight: Tyson was kept well in-character! :) That's hard to do.
My one qualm is that Rayne sounds a tiny bit like a Sue (she ties with Tyson) but it's early days so. Oh and there's a couple of grammatical blips here and there in terms of tenses. Other than that it's pretty good.
But we'll see how it goes in the next chappie! Happy writings :)
