for Trapped7/27/2012 c2 Hope
You havent updated in forever Smh shame
You havent updated in forever Smh shame
4/20/2012 c2 sophie
cant wait till you add a new chapter cant wait to see what happens your a good writer. Pooor brooke hope she finds another love sigh or be as bad as jessi who desperately in need of love and a family.
cant wait till you add a new chapter cant wait to see what happens your a good writer. Pooor brooke hope she finds another love sigh or be as bad as jessi who desperately in need of love and a family.
4/14/2012 c2 
3Byron12
Oh no dylan is dead and he told brooke he loved her and now she gotta move to seattle so what will brooke do now since her life is in danger
3Byron12Oh no dylan is dead and he told brooke he loved her and now she gotta move to seattle so what will brooke do now since her life is in danger
4/12/2012 c2 Molly
Update soon can't wait can't wait to see what happens people need to make more Kyle xy story's :)
Update soon can't wait can't wait to see what happens people need to make more Kyle xy story's :)
4/12/2012 c2 Sigh
Awwww he died already for Brooke I feel so bad for him and her. That was kinda sad now she has to pick up her life and go to Seattle. But the story is great keep going I been waiting for another chapter can't wait til you write more.
Awwww he died already for Brooke I feel so bad for him and her. That was kinda sad now she has to pick up her life and go to Seattle. But the story is great keep going I been waiting for another chapter can't wait til you write more.
4/11/2012 c2 18Wolflover1989
aww poor brooke.
Loved the chapter.Cant wait for the next one.
please update soon
18Wolflover1989aww poor brooke.
Loved the chapter.Cant wait for the next one.
please update soon
4/10/2012 c2 13kessilover
It was a great chapter . To be honest I was glad that Dylan died I didn't like him much.
Anyway, looking for the next update :)
13kessiloverIt was a great chapter . To be honest I was glad that Dylan died I didn't like him much.
Anyway, looking for the next update :)
4/8/2012 c1 3Byron12
I like this story it's very original how will dylan and brooke get out of this situlation
3Byron12I like this story it's very original how will dylan and brooke get out of this situlation
4/7/2012 c1 9Infamously Me
This is really well written. Your writing has improved greatly since the last story of yours I read (when was that anyway? Like a year and a half ago?)
Anyway, you have a really good thing going here. Keep up the good work, my friend. Even though I've never really watched Kyle XY. Good job.
9Infamously MeThis is really well written. Your writing has improved greatly since the last story of yours I read (when was that anyway? Like a year and a half ago?)
Anyway, you have a really good thing going here. Keep up the good work, my friend. Even though I've never really watched Kyle XY. Good job.
4/6/2012 c1 13kessilover
Interesting begining . Can't wait to see what 's gonna happen . But will kyle or jessi be mentioned ?
Update soon :)
13kessiloverInteresting begining . Can't wait to see what 's gonna happen . But will kyle or jessi be mentioned ?
Update soon :)
4/6/2012 c1 3FosterThePeople
Hey I got your message.
Nice story you got here. I'm interested to see where it goes. And I keep wondering about this mysterious suited man that's stalking her. Maybe he's a good guy and knows something about her past or he's a bad guy, knows what she's capable of, and came to kill her. Because so far she seems like Kyle and Jessie.
Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Good work.
3FosterThePeopleHey I got your message.
Nice story you got here. I'm interested to see where it goes. And I keep wondering about this mysterious suited man that's stalking her. Maybe he's a good guy and knows something about her past or he's a bad guy, knows what she's capable of, and came to kill her. Because so far she seems like Kyle and Jessie.
Anyway, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Good work.
4/6/2012 c1 New and approved
Can't wait to see where this story goesss continue :)
Can't wait to see where this story goesss continue :)
4/5/2012 c1 Excited
Pleaseeeeeeeee continue please it was really good please. I got to the end it was great don't leave me curious and suspenseful.
Pleaseeeeeeeee continue please it was really good please. I got to the end it was great don't leave me curious and suspenseful.