8/12/2012 c4 8Psychopathic Light
Dude, you just made me cry. As in, crying-crying with snot and cries and ragged breaths. This is the best story I've ever read. Seriously.

Please update soon!

7/6/2012 c3 DAForever62442
Wonderful chapter :) at first I thought Zack was in the accident, and I was like "noooo! Not Zack!" but now I realize it was Amanda...:""(

7/6/2012 c3 Aideen Rathnait
God! You made me believe Zack was dead! I swear I almost had a heart attack. You are an amazing writer, I couldn't take my eyes off the screen...

6/14/2012 c4 1Slinky Flower the Lovatic
Sorry this review is so late. And don't worry about the not updating for a month thing. There's this one story that wasn't updated for a year and a half. Last updated on 1-5-11 then updated again on 5-15-12. That's WAY longer than you, so there's nothing to worry about I guess.

On to the chapter, it was EPIC as usual. I really wish Zack wouldn't be so ** himself. Why would he ever WANT to die? :(

And please UPDATE SOON! :D

6/10/2012 c4 4owlhero
We have all been there, lost in a sea of emptiness. One of the faults of being a writer or just being creative. Somewhere inside most of us there's an empty well and we are bound to hit it sometime. Besides a month is not terible for not uploading. I once went three months without uploading, so I'll feel your misery.

As for the chapter itself, love the quote at the top. Its true because sometimes we need to face ourselves so we can see through the lies we see and tell.

This is going to be a little rough I think with Cody's regrets getting in the way and having to watch Zack suffer. Personallly I like the way you wrote Zack's emotions secondhand with the hair-pulling.

What a sudden change in the relationship especially with Zack digging his own grave. Its so twisted with the stress of the trauma onto top of Zack's previous state. One false step and its over. At first it seemed a little too quick for me for it to be realistic but the memory of the trauma made it more real for me.

The detached humor has me wondering about Zack's mental state considering he is blaming himself for everything. Cody's watchfulness may be the key here. Of course the Buddy system works perfectly here. But why there might be too much of a good thing. Zack's questioniing of Cody's reasoning for the pairing makes me wonder why he believes Cody gets nothing out of it. Also if he believes Cody can help him as well.

Zack wanting to home has thinking maybe he's running away from something and maybe he needs to go home and find out who cares for him.

I like the usage of literary elements throughout the chapter like the sound effects and comparing his head to a target.

All this voices I can Zack developing a mental condition. I can see why and where the iony comment fits perfectly here.

The hair aspect for zack is something new I dont have seen as a strees reliever for him in a story.

Wow I dont think I have seeen anyone use Londons airheadness and easy insults that bluntly before. That's impressive. I conggradualte you on using her as a story to further the reader's torture with the conflict between the twins.

Poor Cody, his social issues duestroy all the good he did. Zack blaming himself makes sense with everyone blame him for the screw-ups going on.

Perfect quote at the end. It rounds up Zack's psychological makeup well.

FYI regarding Blood in the bathroom: Crimson Haze is probably done writing fanfiction. I hope I am wrong but EVERYONE I know on this forum has been waiting for I'm Right Here to be updated and you see how long its been for that. Unfortunately, it looks like it might one of those unsufferable unfinished stories. And I try contacting her through the other links she put up, no good.

6/8/2012 c4 Allebasi Eiram
I honestly don't know what to say. To say that I just liked it would be a huge understatement. This may sound odd, but all of the flaws in it made it perfect. Zack going through survivors guilt is done perfectly. I shall wait in great anticipation for the next update! 3 Thank you so much!

5/10/2012 c3 Allebasi Eiram
WOW- this story is so amazing! I LOVE it! Excellent writing! I absolutely loved it when Cody was freaking out when he thought that Zack had died. Brotherly love rocks.