for A Commander's Journal12/27/2012 c19 
13Wyolake
I really loved this chapter. It was a wonderful way to show her struggles and how much her teammates help her, just by being there. I'm a huge Shenko fan, but Joker is very special and I'm glad you wrote that in to this chapter.
13WyolakeI really loved this chapter. It was a wonderful way to show her struggles and how much her teammates help her, just by being there. I'm a huge Shenko fan, but Joker is very special and I'm glad you wrote that in to this chapter.
12/1/2012 c17 6AngstyShenko
This is extremely interesting. I love the first person POV. Please write more!
6AngstyShenkoThis is extremely interesting. I love the first person POV. Please write more!
7/11/2012 c16 Kate
This Journal is a unique anad very well written fiction! Please, keep writing.
This Journal is a unique anad very well written fiction! Please, keep writing.
6/22/2012 c15 2A Talking Dinosaur
Not much to say about this chapter but I wanted to let you know I'm enjoying this story a lot. You're portraying Shepard's struggles with the aftermath of the war really well. Looking forward to more ).
2A Talking DinosaurNot much to say about this chapter but I wanted to let you know I'm enjoying this story a lot. You're portraying Shepard's struggles with the aftermath of the war really well. Looking forward to more ).
5/26/2012 c13 2thedeadflag
This fic is too good to only have 17 reviews. Honestly. IMO, when doing a first person perspective, the most important thing is for it to seem honest, candid.
You accomplish this in droves across all these chapters.
Incredible stuff. Keep it up :)
2thedeadflagThis fic is too good to only have 17 reviews. Honestly. IMO, when doing a first person perspective, the most important thing is for it to seem honest, candid.
You accomplish this in droves across all these chapters.
Incredible stuff. Keep it up :)
5/24/2012 c12 CyanB
Grrr. This makes my fists itch, on Shepard behalf. The grey lands are a horrible place to live.
Excellent writing.
Grrr. This makes my fists itch, on Shepard behalf. The grey lands are a horrible place to live.
Excellent writing.
5/18/2012 c11 CyanB
Nice to see that the Batarians still miss the point.
And humans, I swear we are the most F@#$%&* species in the galaxy.
Still feeling like a voyeur, still enjoying it and really enjoying watching your writing get better and better.
Nice to see that the Batarians still miss the point.
And humans, I swear we are the most F@#$%&* species in the galaxy.
Still feeling like a voyeur, still enjoying it and really enjoying watching your writing get better and better.
5/12/2012 c10 49Catlover friendly-but-xplosive
I love your broken Shepard, trying to get back on her feet.
49Catlover friendly-but-xplosiveI love your broken Shepard, trying to get back on her feet.
5/12/2012 c10 dorko525
It's a little sad to see how displaced Shepard is after the war. Like an old relic. But I'm glad to see that her old fire sill flickers now and then. Great writing
It's a little sad to see how displaced Shepard is after the war. Like an old relic. But I'm glad to see that her old fire sill flickers now and then. Great writing
5/8/2012 c7 dorko525
My heart just about melted in this chapter. Especially the line where you said they slept better together. Aww!
My heart just about melted in this chapter. Especially the line where you said they slept better together. Aww!
5/8/2012 c6 dorko525
I love how you write in all the little details in like the fact that everyone IS stuck in the Sol system. And I just want to huggle Kaidan. He's such a stand up guy
I love how you write in all the little details in like the fact that everyone IS stuck in the Sol system. And I just want to huggle Kaidan. He's such a stand up guy