for Come Get Me12/4/2012 c9 
2Elimere
That was pretty cool. And very cute. Interesting ending. Not really what I expected. Kinda hoped Tori was hinting that she wanted Jade to stand outside her house with a boom-box. Now that would be a sight!
There's not a lot of description in between the dialogue, so everything feels quite devoid of emotion. Don't get me wrong, it was all really good and I got used to it, but it's just not my preference.
Good story. Very sweet.
Thanks!
2ElimereThat was pretty cool. And very cute. Interesting ending. Not really what I expected. Kinda hoped Tori was hinting that she wanted Jade to stand outside her house with a boom-box. Now that would be a sight!
There's not a lot of description in between the dialogue, so everything feels quite devoid of emotion. Don't get me wrong, it was all really good and I got used to it, but it's just not my preference.
Good story. Very sweet.
Thanks!
11/3/2012 c9 12boo-doh-bag
You always manage to do a beautiful stories! I love it! Though I would like to know how did that date went and more. They are so amazing
Thanks for this, I had a good time
12boo-doh-bagYou always manage to do a beautiful stories! I love it! Though I would like to know how did that date went and more. They are so amazing
Thanks for this, I had a good time
8/29/2012 c9 Guest
This is seriously one of THE BEST stories I have read. So PLEASE update soon. PLEASE! Or atleast make a sequel.
This is seriously one of THE BEST stories I have read. So PLEASE update soon. PLEASE! Or atleast make a sequel.
8/19/2012 c9 2LaDyKiLlErZ15
SO CUTE I'M SO IN LOVE WITH JORI I WISH THIS WAS REAL AND I REALLY CAN IMAGINE HOW TORI AND JADE END UP TOGETHER XD THANKS FOR MAKING CUTE STORY
2LaDyKiLlErZ15SO CUTE I'M SO IN LOVE WITH JORI I WISH THIS WAS REAL AND I REALLY CAN IMAGINE HOW TORI AND JADE END UP TOGETHER XD THANKS FOR MAKING CUTE STORY
8/15/2012 c9 38Invader Johnny
A great fic, a lot of character development for Jade and Tori was full of surprises! Neat!
Invader Johnny Signing Off.
38Invader JohnnyA great fic, a lot of character development for Jade and Tori was full of surprises! Neat!
Invader Johnny Signing Off.
6/28/2012 c1 Kween Of Thorn
I had to sign in for this story. This is my second time reading it and sad to say I didn't comment the first time. I love this story and your writing. When I looked for it earlier I was shocked to see it only had 99 reviews -_- so close yet so far from the triple digits. Anyway keep up the awesome work! :)
-Kween
I had to sign in for this story. This is my second time reading it and sad to say I didn't comment the first time. I love this story and your writing. When I looked for it earlier I was shocked to see it only had 99 reviews -_- so close yet so far from the triple digits. Anyway keep up the awesome work! :)
-Kween
6/15/2012 c9 2TheTimeTravelingNinja
I was goin through your other stories (ALL FORTY SIX OF THEM!)and I recognized this title and summery or watever and I read the whole damn thing before realizing that I was actually RE-reading it:p
Well anyway yeah I read it twice and both times I though it was really good. This story reminded me of the song "We are young" by Fun. Mainly the lines:
"My lover she is waiting for me just across the bar
My seat’s been taken by some sunglasses
asking 'bout a scar, and
I know I gave it to you months ago
I know you’re trying to forget
But between the drinks and subtle things
The holes in my apologies, you know
I’m trying hard to take it back"
I don't know, I was just reading and my mind made the connection on its own. I would explain the connection between the two, the song and your story that is, but the space it would take up to fit the workings of my brain would be about... lets just say it'd take up a lot of space. If you're interested though you could PM me and I'd be happy to explain it then. Anyway yeah great story,!
2TheTimeTravelingNinjaI was goin through your other stories (ALL FORTY SIX OF THEM!)and I recognized this title and summery or watever and I read the whole damn thing before realizing that I was actually RE-reading it:p
Well anyway yeah I read it twice and both times I though it was really good. This story reminded me of the song "We are young" by Fun. Mainly the lines:
"My lover she is waiting for me just across the bar
My seat’s been taken by some sunglasses
asking 'bout a scar, and
I know I gave it to you months ago
I know you’re trying to forget
But between the drinks and subtle things
The holes in my apologies, you know
I’m trying hard to take it back"
I don't know, I was just reading and my mind made the connection on its own. I would explain the connection between the two, the song and your story that is, but the space it would take up to fit the workings of my brain would be about... lets just say it'd take up a lot of space. If you're interested though you could PM me and I'd be happy to explain it then. Anyway yeah great story,!
6/11/2012 c9 23LuffyKun3695
I *love* the ending, though I hope you do another Jori story or a sequel to this one that follows up on how the others react to their relationship. The best part was how the title became a dual meaning, in the last two chapters especially, with Tori urging Jade to take a leap and "come get her"
23LuffyKun3695I *love* the ending, though I hope you do another Jori story or a sequel to this one that follows up on how the others react to their relationship. The best part was how the title became a dual meaning, in the last two chapters especially, with Tori urging Jade to take a leap and "come get her"
6/11/2012 c8 LuffyKun3695
Ooh Tori, you play so dirty! XD I love this chapter, though I kind of want to hit Cat and Robbie, they can be very stupid. Though, in all honesty they would probably be a very cute couple. They're on one another's wavelength.
Ooh Tori, you play so dirty! XD I love this chapter, though I kind of want to hit Cat and Robbie, they can be very stupid. Though, in all honesty they would probably be a very cute couple. They're on one another's wavelength.
6/11/2012 c7 LuffyKun3695
I loved, LOVED that foreplay line. I think I was laughing for a good five minutes. I really love how you characterize Jade. Its perfect. It's nice to see her and Beck attempting to be civil, though I doubt he will handle knowing he was left for TORI very well!
I loved, LOVED that foreplay line. I think I was laughing for a good five minutes. I really love how you characterize Jade. Its perfect. It's nice to see her and Beck attempting to be civil, though I doubt he will handle knowing he was left for TORI very well!
4/24/2012 c9 23MaybeWolf
That was an awesome story. You did a great job of adding to their characters, while also keeping them IN character. The ending was pitch perfect too. Great job.
23MaybeWolfThat was an awesome story. You did a great job of adding to their characters, while also keeping them IN character. The ending was pitch perfect too. Great job.
4/23/2012 c9 jori love
very cute. i loved your characterization of tori, made the whole thing even more believable
very cute. i loved your characterization of tori, made the whole thing even more believable
4/21/2012 c9 BensonFanatic87
Awesome stuff. Just...with the...beautiful. Real talent you got, you slacker :) Don't hesitate to write more stories in the future...especially Jori.
Awesome stuff. Just...with the...beautiful. Real talent you got, you slacker :) Don't hesitate to write more stories in the future...especially Jori.
4/21/2012 c9 Supremah
..aaaawwwww .. it was over? PLEASE i'm begging you .. write more stuff .. PLEASE . PLEASE .. you are fantastic .. i totally adore your work .. PLEASE .. write another one .. make it on jade's POV .. luv ur work so much :D GOD BLESS take care
..aaaawwwww .. it was over? PLEASE i'm begging you .. write more stuff .. PLEASE . PLEASE .. you are fantastic .. i totally adore your work .. PLEASE .. write another one .. make it on jade's POV .. luv ur work so much :D GOD BLESS take care