for Who to Choose? Seth or Embry?1/11 c26 Guest
I wasn't disappointed by the absent sex scene. Actually, I was surprised by what there was and grateful there wasn't more. I guess it's different when you know the person whose mind it came from. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter, especially the secondary characters' dialogue and actions-it all fit their characters really well. There were several typos that could've been fixed by a little editing, but, hey, this is fanfiction, after all, and it's still waaaaay better than some of the other fanfics out there. -Annafriend
I wasn't disappointed by the absent sex scene. Actually, I was surprised by what there was and grateful there wasn't more. I guess it's different when you know the person whose mind it came from. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter, especially the secondary characters' dialogue and actions-it all fit their characters really well. There were several typos that could've been fixed by a little editing, but, hey, this is fanfiction, after all, and it's still waaaaay better than some of the other fanfics out there. -Annafriend
12/28/2012 c26 
5stalkerinc
Hello, I think so far the story is AMAZING! I saw Les Miserables and the Hobbit both are also AMAZING! I noticed you used Paramore in one of you chapters, good choice.
5stalkerincHello, I think so far the story is AMAZING! I saw Les Miserables and the Hobbit both are also AMAZING! I noticed you used Paramore in one of you chapters, good choice.
12/25/2012 c26 Marie
I agree about the 50 Shades thing. I like reading about love more than sex. It was great! Update soon please:) Ps. Yay Les Mis!
I agree about the 50 Shades thing. I like reading about love more than sex. It was great! Update soon please:) Ps. Yay Les Mis!
12/23/2012 c26 Marie
Wow. They finally did it! Exciting!) I thought it was endearing how Embry was worried about his first time. Keep up the great work!
Wow. They finally did it! Exciting!) I thought it was endearing how Embry was worried about his first time. Keep up the great work!
12/23/2012 c26 5KaylaHunter1217
It was so great I think you did a good job on the sex scene. :P Please update soon as I am DYING for more!
5KaylaHunter1217It was so great I think you did a good job on the sex scene. :P Please update soon as I am DYING for more!
12/13/2012 c25 3FuturePendragon
You know how much I love the mother and daughter scenes. It's nice to take a break from the boy drama and focus on Nicole as an individual. I like how her other can tell they are in love 3 keep writing, girl!
3FuturePendragonYou know how much I love the mother and daughter scenes. It's nice to take a break from the boy drama and focus on Nicole as an individual. I like how her other can tell they are in love 3 keep writing, girl!
12/13/2012 c25 Marie
Wow! I seriously loved that chapter! Embry and Nicole being all couply is cute!) I died laughing when Maggie was insulting Leah.(bride of frankenstein comment killed me).
One question, that dream...does it have any real significance in the future? I loved the way you wrote it!
Keep up the updates! I'm glad you lengthened the chapter:)
Wow! I seriously loved that chapter! Embry and Nicole being all couply is cute!) I died laughing when Maggie was insulting Leah.(bride of frankenstein comment killed me).
One question, that dream...does it have any real significance in the future? I loved the way you wrote it!
Keep up the updates! I'm glad you lengthened the chapter:)
12/10/2012 c25 5KaylaHunter1217
Absolutely loved it can't wait for the next update! Please give Nicole her I'mprint or make her chose soon I'm dying here!
5KaylaHunter1217Absolutely loved it can't wait for the next update! Please give Nicole her I'mprint or make her chose soon I'm dying here!
12/7/2012 c24 1234
Very good story :)
Very good story :)
11/26/2012 c24 2Jewels47
Love this story as heart breaking as it was. I feel for all three characters. I cant wait to find out what happens. Keep up the good work.
2Jewels47Love this story as heart breaking as it was. I feel for all three characters. I cant wait to find out what happens. Keep up the good work.
11/26/2012 c24 7TheClicheInLife
Hello again!
So, once again these last few chapters have been great and I've sincerely enjoyed reading them.
Right now, I'm going to attempt to answer all the questions that you've posed.
First, I'm hoping that Nicole will be at least slightly angry and hurt at the realization; because honestly, what girl wouldn't be.
Next, I think that Seth's immaturity is warranted. I mean, he is still a /kid/ and being mad at Embry is just kind of his expression of said immaturity.
I've always seen Emily as more of a matron figure to the pack, so her giving advice to Seth was something that I could see as in character and inherently pretty awesome.
As for what I expect, I expect you to have fun in writing this and have the story flow in the way that you see fit, because if you're not having fun writing this it's going to turn into a chore and it will no longer be enjoyable for anyone.
I hope this helps, sweetie. I'm always around somewhere if you need to bounce ideas off of me.
-TheClicheInLife
7TheClicheInLifeHello again!
So, once again these last few chapters have been great and I've sincerely enjoyed reading them.
Right now, I'm going to attempt to answer all the questions that you've posed.
First, I'm hoping that Nicole will be at least slightly angry and hurt at the realization; because honestly, what girl wouldn't be.
Next, I think that Seth's immaturity is warranted. I mean, he is still a /kid/ and being mad at Embry is just kind of his expression of said immaturity.
I've always seen Emily as more of a matron figure to the pack, so her giving advice to Seth was something that I could see as in character and inherently pretty awesome.
As for what I expect, I expect you to have fun in writing this and have the story flow in the way that you see fit, because if you're not having fun writing this it's going to turn into a chore and it will no longer be enjoyable for anyone.
I hope this helps, sweetie. I'm always around somewhere if you need to bounce ideas off of me.
-TheClicheInLife
11/25/2012 c24 1Live To Ride
Wow. I think Nicole deserved to know. And again, wow. I can't believe Embry said that! I think Seth was immature and because of that had a right to be pissed off but after what Emily told him he shouldn't be angry anymore. And yes I liked the words. I don't know what I expect from Embry and Seth. :/
1Live To RideWow. I think Nicole deserved to know. And again, wow. I can't believe Embry said that! I think Seth was immature and because of that had a right to be pissed off but after what Emily told him he shouldn't be angry anymore. And yes I liked the words. I don't know what I expect from Embry and Seth. :/
11/25/2012 c24 18CrimsonAngel22
NoOOOOoooo. I will review a hundred times over if it means you won't do fewer updates!
I like that you have Seth acting a bit immature- it fits his character, actually. I still like him best, but Embry/Nicole is so dang cute!
I hope she doesn't leave :/ I feel bad for her- to know that Embry could imprint and just forget her. ...I don't like thinking about that, hahaha. In my head, one day Seth will magically imprint on Nicole and they will live happily ever after, running off into the sunset. :D
Yes, I like that ending :3
18CrimsonAngel22NoOOOOoooo. I will review a hundred times over if it means you won't do fewer updates!
I like that you have Seth acting a bit immature- it fits his character, actually. I still like him best, but Embry/Nicole is so dang cute!
I hope she doesn't leave :/ I feel bad for her- to know that Embry could imprint and just forget her. ...I don't like thinking about that, hahaha. In my head, one day Seth will magically imprint on Nicole and they will live happily ever after, running off into the sunset. :D
Yes, I like that ending :3