for soul king naruto5/23/2012 c2 Akuma-Heika
Like the harem but to just let you know you said Sasuke instead of Sasuki in this chapter.
Like the harem but to just let you know you said Sasuke instead of Sasuki in this chapter.
5/8/2012 c3 
1shadow wolf125767
this is good story so far i will keep it up if i were you but i think you are making the harem too big. While i am for a good harem but it won't be easy to maintain if you update regularly.
1shadow wolf125767this is good story so far i will keep it up if i were you but i think you are making the harem too big. While i am for a good harem but it won't be easy to maintain if you update regularly.
5/8/2012 c3 Phantom Dark-Knight
damn that alot of girls in the harem O_o'
and make the story longer! ^.^
damn that alot of girls in the harem O_o'
and make the story longer! ^.^
5/8/2012 c3 10Element-OverLord
I Love It,Continue It. Please Make The Chapters Longer And Add A Fem.Youdaime To The Harem.
10Element-OverLordI Love It,Continue It. Please Make The Chapters Longer And Add A Fem.Youdaime To The Harem.
5/8/2012 c1 W.H.I.P
Please for the LOVE Of GOD don't add anyone in the konoha 12 in the harem... However, I think it would be interesting to see fem-bijuu
Please for the LOVE Of GOD don't add anyone in the konoha 12 in the harem... However, I think it would be interesting to see fem-bijuu
5/8/2012 c3 4ultima-owner
is "being a horrifying snake-faced pedophile" an crime? Or is it just a stab at his reputation?
4ultima-owneris "being a horrifying snake-faced pedophile" an crime? Or is it just a stab at his reputation?
5/8/2012 c3 Reaper
Really good story but I wish you would make the chapters longer they are just to short. Also for the Harem Kurenai, Ayame, Tsunami, Tsunade and Shizune
Really good story but I wish you would make the chapters longer they are just to short. Also for the Harem Kurenai, Ayame, Tsunami, Tsunade and Shizune
4/22/2012 c2 54Darksiders death necro
great story idea I enjoyed the first and second chapters even if they were short keep up the good work oh and nice using Zoro's sword style from one peice and Haru's sword from rave master keep up the good work ja for now
54Darksiders death necrogreat story idea I enjoyed the first and second chapters even if they were short keep up the good work oh and nice using Zoro's sword style from one peice and Haru's sword from rave master keep up the good work ja for now