for The Young Whitelighter5/28/2002 c1 
3Charmedchic72
...me very very confuzeded...who in ur story is leo married to?...piper or phoebe...you confuzeded me!
3Charmedchic72...me very very confuzeded...who in ur story is leo married to?...piper or phoebe...you confuzeded me!
5/28/2002 c1 Greeneyes17
Keep going this is really good except Piper and Leo are married, and Piper also freezes things and causes things to explode. Otherwise I like it a bunch and keep going.
Keep going this is really good except Piper and Leo are married, and Piper also freezes things and causes things to explode. Otherwise I like it a bunch and keep going.
5/28/2002 c1 PrincessSkywalkerOrgana
LOL. Add on!
LOL. Add on!
5/27/2002 c1 LaNa Politi
WoW great story! I don't like the fact that Jackson will be taking over for Leo. What's with that I mean hes Piper's husband after all and so he should stay down there with her. Please explain all this in the next Chapter. I would greatly appreciate it.
LaNa
WoW great story! I don't like the fact that Jackson will be taking over for Leo. What's with that I mean hes Piper's husband after all and so he should stay down there with her. Please explain all this in the next Chapter. I would greatly appreciate it.
LaNa
5/27/2002 c1 Michiru
The story line is good but you've got the characters all mixed up. Phoebe has premonitions and can levitate, Piper can freeze things just as she can make things explode, Paige can orb things, like telekenesis but a little different and can orb her self in and out of places. Pru, the one who died was telekenetic.
The story line is good but you've got the characters all mixed up. Phoebe has premonitions and can levitate, Piper can freeze things just as she can make things explode, Paige can orb things, like telekenesis but a little different and can orb her self in and out of places. Pru, the one who died was telekenetic.
5/27/2002 c1 Michiru
The story line is good but you've got the characters all mixed up. Phoebe has premonitions and can levitate, Piper can freeze things just as she can make things explode, Paige can orb things, like telekenesis but a little different and can orb her self in and out of places. Pru, the one who died was telekenetic.
The story line is good but you've got the characters all mixed up. Phoebe has premonitions and can levitate, Piper can freeze things just as she can make things explode, Paige can orb things, like telekenesis but a little different and can orb her self in and out of places. Pru, the one who died was telekenetic.
5/27/2002 c1 15writelikeademon
I like the idea, and I think it could be really good. Piper freezes people! You must fix that, it's really bothering me.
15writelikeademonI like the idea, and I think it could be really good. Piper freezes people! You must fix that, it's really bothering me.
5/27/2002 c1 Piper1
Piper has the power to freeze not Phoebe.
Piper has the power to freeze not Phoebe.
5/27/2002 c1 Scootch
Um...okay story line, but it's PIPER that is married to Leo and who can freeze things, not Phoebe.
Um...okay story line, but it's PIPER that is married to Leo and who can freeze things, not Phoebe.