for Slave Owner5/2 c9 
8xXGlamorousGloraXx
kakarot changed into a Super Saiyan...and he doesn't realize it!...that he has shown and is the the first guy in all the Saiyan race to exceed to becoming the legendary Super Saiyan. Wow...vegeta is gonna be so ** when he finds out about this...
Kakarot slayed Turles and got his Chi back from him...things are going back to normal.:)
This story was pretty cool! good job!
8xXGlamorousGloraXxkakarot changed into a Super Saiyan...and he doesn't realize it!...that he has shown and is the the first guy in all the Saiyan race to exceed to becoming the legendary Super Saiyan. Wow...vegeta is gonna be so ** when he finds out about this...
Kakarot slayed Turles and got his Chi back from him...things are going back to normal.:)
This story was pretty cool! good job!
5/2 c8 xXGlamorousGloraXx
Come on beat Turles...that low life used a fruit to try and overcome kakarot, now thats just sad.
Come on beat Turles...that low life used a fruit to try and overcome kakarot, now thats just sad.
5/1 c7 xXGlamorousGloraXx
hmm...what is it and is it as dangerous as Turles states...plus will Kakarot save dear Chi?
hmhm Vegeta makes me laugh!
hmm...what is it and is it as dangerous as Turles states...plus will Kakarot save dear Chi?
hmhm Vegeta makes me laugh!
5/1 c6 xXGlamorousGloraXx
Oh no...who's standing at the door and wait didn't Kakarot lock up before leaving?...*smacks head* ah!
Oh no...who's standing at the door and wait didn't Kakarot lock up before leaving?...*smacks head* ah!
5/1 c5 xXGlamorousGloraXx
Hmm...i do like the surprises so if you decide to add the cold-hearted Frieza or that creepo Turles...it would take things up an notch. Kakarot is in love with Chi but gee...if only he can releive that Saiyan pride and just say 'love' to her.
Oh and good luck!:)
Hmm...i do like the surprises so if you decide to add the cold-hearted Frieza or that creepo Turles...it would take things up an notch. Kakarot is in love with Chi but gee...if only he can releive that Saiyan pride and just say 'love' to her.
Oh and good luck!:)
5/1 c4 xXGlamorousGloraXx
No no!...don't let your eyes blind you from seeing what's before you Chi...it may seem normal but geeze you'll never know if their either good or harmful...so be alert!
No no!...don't let your eyes blind you from seeing what's before you Chi...it may seem normal but geeze you'll never know if their either good or harmful...so be alert!
5/1 c3 xXGlamorousGloraXx
Oh what's this Kakarot is being...soft to dear Chi, he saved her from that gravitational machine and from that sly no good guy Turles. He's really not as dark as he's made out to be...
Oh what's this Kakarot is being...soft to dear Chi, he saved her from that gravitational machine and from that sly no good guy Turles. He's really not as dark as he's made out to be...
5/1 c1 xXGlamorousGloraXx
So it's a new era for chi as the world is under the rule from the Saiyans race, things are extremely tough and a nightmare for peopel...
Can Chi cope being a slave to her new master...or crumble?:)
So it's a new era for chi as the world is under the rule from the Saiyans race, things are extremely tough and a nightmare for peopel...
Can Chi cope being a slave to her new master...or crumble?:)
4/30 c3 Guest
If goku or KAKAROT or something has an attitude like that I wonder what would vegetas be like
If goku or KAKAROT or something has an attitude like that I wonder what would vegetas be like
4/30 c1 Guest
Hmm Frezza never attacks right? so kakarot is a creepy bastard Hun ? I've seen the v and b version
Hmm Frezza never attacks right? so kakarot is a creepy bastard Hun ? I've seen the v and b version
3/6 c1 jordan sparks
loved it
loved it
3/5 c3 8PuiNikkiShowron
I always love AU slaves stories with DBZ characters. Chi-Chi doesn't act like a timid woman, which I like cause that's her style. And her bickering with Kakarott is funny. I would like to think that Goku would really act this way if he never came to Earth.
8PuiNikkiShowronI always love AU slaves stories with DBZ characters. Chi-Chi doesn't act like a timid woman, which I like cause that's her style. And her bickering with Kakarott is funny. I would like to think that Goku would really act this way if he never came to Earth.
1/28 c9 jazmine
greatest story ever you should totally make a second one
greatest story ever you should totally make a second one
11/23/2012 c9 1PoeticLover1996
It was kind of rushed, but still good overall. Try to slow it down more, and let your story flow. And always check for grammatical errors. I love this couple a lot and would love to read more stories dealing with this couple :)
1PoeticLover1996It was kind of rushed, but still good overall. Try to slow it down more, and let your story flow. And always check for grammatical errors. I love this couple a lot and would love to read more stories dealing with this couple :)