for What Happened To Me?4/27/2012 c1 
6Renewed Darkness
First i would like to say tAo Spindash77, i was in a bad mood that day and wanted to let my abger out. Sense I couldn't, I let Blizzard do it for me. And the best way was for him to get ** at Eggman rapping Blaze while she was out cold. And second, I gave him anger problems because I have anger problems? And I also make crappy jokes sometimes, havent we all? And I admit it, I made him a Gary Stue, sue me. (not really)
6Renewed DarknessFirst i would like to say tAo Spindash77, i was in a bad mood that day and wanted to let my abger out. Sense I couldn't, I let Blizzard do it for me. And the best way was for him to get ** at Eggman rapping Blaze while she was out cold. And second, I gave him anger problems because I have anger problems? And I also make crappy jokes sometimes, havent we all? And I admit it, I made him a Gary Stue, sue me. (not really)
4/27/2012 c5 1Spindash77
Oklay I was going to finish reading this story first hand before reviewing but I just have to now because this story is just AWFUL! First thing is, the main character is a mary-sue! Don't try to deny it he's more powerful than the other characters and his personality is bland since all he does is get angry or make crapy jokes that everyone finds hilarious for some reason. Next is the absolute RAPE of Blaze's character, in the games she was a strong indapendent and anti-social making her come off as cold and wary towards people she doesn't know, so how do you chose to portray her as a weak scared nervous girl who falls for your character at the drop of a hat, I mean you just let Eggman beat her even though she's supposed to be a capable fighter. Plus that whole rage problem plot point just comes out of no where.
Even when you take the factors listed above this story is still poorly told and has been done before.
1Spindash77Oklay I was going to finish reading this story first hand before reviewing but I just have to now because this story is just AWFUL! First thing is, the main character is a mary-sue! Don't try to deny it he's more powerful than the other characters and his personality is bland since all he does is get angry or make crapy jokes that everyone finds hilarious for some reason. Next is the absolute RAPE of Blaze's character, in the games she was a strong indapendent and anti-social making her come off as cold and wary towards people she doesn't know, so how do you chose to portray her as a weak scared nervous girl who falls for your character at the drop of a hat, I mean you just let Eggman beat her even though she's supposed to be a capable fighter. Plus that whole rage problem plot point just comes out of no where.
Even when you take the factors listed above this story is still poorly told and has been done before.
4/20/2012 c11 zimmerjustice
you sick f*ck you should go to prison for a long time if you like cat you f*cking pervert
you sick f*ck you should go to prison for a long time if you like cat you f*cking pervert
4/20/2012 c4 13sonicxblazey
Blaze would never sleep in the same bed as your character SHE LOVES SONIC!
13sonicxblazeyBlaze would never sleep in the same bed as your character SHE LOVES SONIC!