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23/25 c3 jessarae
Hey...Rae is my middle name...teehee! Anyway, great story! I wanna slap this model bitch?,
Hey...Rae is my middle name...teehee! Anyway, great story! I wanna slap this model bitch?,
3/9 c31 Gidget922
I loved this story the way everything flowed, you showed real life at it's best and worst, real struggles w life relationships, parents etc. How fighting for something you believe in counts it was awesome thank you
I loved this story the way everything flowed, you showed real life at it's best and worst, real struggles w life relationships, parents etc. How fighting for something you believe in counts it was awesome thank you
3/9 c28 Gidget922
Of all the stories i've read this chapter is my favorite, how you described the sweet and tender moments of the first time thank you
Of all the stories i've read this chapter is my favorite, how you described the sweet and tender moments of the first time thank you
2/28 c31 maphie
When a person reaches a point where the best option in life is to not exist, where he ended up at the end of this story is a miraculous gift. He probably looks younger and more alive than when he was at 20. I was irritated with Bella in the beginning but as a lot of writers like you request of readers like me, patience will bring the most satisfying outcome. It is certainly true here. I'm happy to read about how she transformed. In the end, she became a better partner for Edward because let's face it, when you get involved with someone older than you, while emotions don't recognize the age difference, life decisions do. Her maturity when they finally got together helped her overcome the separation because of their busy lives, the uncertainty of what he was going to do after the Wilton project and of course, Tanya. The ever present Tanya. She's the Twific character I love to hate. I must say that the most enjoyable angsty stories have Tanya right in the middle of it. I miss her when she's not in the story. Anyway, great stuff. Looking forward to how you wrap this up! Like I say to writers who fill my day with entertaining stories, thanks for sharing your talent with us.
When a person reaches a point where the best option in life is to not exist, where he ended up at the end of this story is a miraculous gift. He probably looks younger and more alive than when he was at 20. I was irritated with Bella in the beginning but as a lot of writers like you request of readers like me, patience will bring the most satisfying outcome. It is certainly true here. I'm happy to read about how she transformed. In the end, she became a better partner for Edward because let's face it, when you get involved with someone older than you, while emotions don't recognize the age difference, life decisions do. Her maturity when they finally got together helped her overcome the separation because of their busy lives, the uncertainty of what he was going to do after the Wilton project and of course, Tanya. The ever present Tanya. She's the Twific character I love to hate. I must say that the most enjoyable angsty stories have Tanya right in the middle of it. I miss her when she's not in the story. Anyway, great stuff. Looking forward to how you wrap this up! Like I say to writers who fill my day with entertaining stories, thanks for sharing your talent with us.
2/4 c31 Guest
Terrific story!
Terrific story!
1/21 c31 ana1973
I just finished the whole story and loved it. I actually stayed up way to late just to read. Thanks so much for sharing such a wonderful story. I was hoping to get a glimpse of their future as husband/wife. I plan to look at your other stories :)
I just finished the whole story and loved it. I actually stayed up way to late just to read. Thanks so much for sharing such a wonderful story. I was hoping to get a glimpse of their future as husband/wife. I plan to look at your other stories :)
12/17/2012 c31 EdwardLuver28
This is amazing. I am happy to take this journey with you, Bella, and Edward. I like that Rose wasn't with Emmett in this one. I was surprised but I was fine with and without Alice and Jasper. I am sad it's over though. You should maybe to a sequel. But I think they've been through enough and what would you do for a sequel anyway.
This is amazing. I am happy to take this journey with you, Bella, and Edward. I like that Rose wasn't with Emmett in this one. I was surprised but I was fine with and without Alice and Jasper. I am sad it's over though. You should maybe to a sequel. But I think they've been through enough and what would you do for a sequel anyway.