for Lilium Ignis3/30 c7 SiriuslyPotty
Hahaha, you were doing so well with the British colloquialisms until you said "panties". It's "knickers", or "undies" over here!
And, aren't there more than two ways to destroy a Horcux? Fiendfyre, for example?
Hahaha, you were doing so well with the British colloquialisms until you said "panties". It's "knickers", or "undies" over here!
And, aren't there more than two ways to destroy a Horcux? Fiendfyre, for example?
3/28 c34 Guest
OH MY FUKING...WHAT THE LEGITIMATE...OMG...THIS...IS...JUST...ABOUT...THE...BEST...FUKING...FANFICTION...I...HAVE...EVER...FUKING...READ...IT'S SO FUKING EMOTIONAL AND I WAS FUKING CRYING IN IT LIKE FIVE TIMES AND LIKE...FUAAARCK! IT'S SO GOOD AND LIKE OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND AAAAH!
YEAH THAT'S BASICALLY ALL I HAVE TO SAY :) AND OMG THAT PART WITH MOLLY...WHEN THEY WERE LIKE "I'LL BE WITH UNCLE FRED" REALLY GOT TO ME D:
OH MY FUKING...WHAT THE LEGITIMATE...OMG...THIS...IS...JUST...ABOUT...THE...BEST...FUKING...FANFICTION...I...HAVE...EVER...FUKING...READ...IT'S SO FUKING EMOTIONAL AND I WAS FUKING CRYING IN IT LIKE FIVE TIMES AND LIKE...FUAAARCK! IT'S SO GOOD AND LIKE OMG I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND AAAAH!
YEAH THAT'S BASICALLY ALL I HAVE TO SAY :) AND OMG THAT PART WITH MOLLY...WHEN THEY WERE LIKE "I'LL BE WITH UNCLE FRED" REALLY GOT TO ME D:
3/12 c34 Lily Malfoy
Loved it! read the entire thing in 2 hours!
Fave Character: Lily(obviosly
Loved it! read the entire thing in 2 hours!
Fave Character: Lily(obviosly
3/4 c34 Prongs
Wow! Cant believe its over. Well, i had a fun time reading it. It's a really nice story! Got a little confusing at times because of the abrupt jump to events instead of them coming gradually with the flow of story (did that even make sense!)... But it was still good. Thanks for writing it! :)
Fav character has to be Lily and Rox :D Fiery and independent.
PS. More Scor-Lily please?
Wow! Cant believe its over. Well, i had a fun time reading it. It's a really nice story! Got a little confusing at times because of the abrupt jump to events instead of them coming gradually with the flow of story (did that even make sense!)... But it was still good. Thanks for writing it! :)
Fav character has to be Lily and Rox :D Fiery and independent.
PS. More Scor-Lily please?
3/4 c32 Prongs
This chapter was so hard to read! Just heartbreaking :(
This chapter was so hard to read! Just heartbreaking :(
2/14 c34 Guest
I almost missed the epilogue ...must have been really busy when it came out. I loved the story, but wish there had (as you pointed out yourself) more scenes between the couples, including development between Lily and Scorpius. Would love to see Outtakes from your work. Best wishes for your future endeavors.
I almost missed the epilogue ...must have been really busy when it came out. I loved the story, but wish there had (as you pointed out yourself) more scenes between the couples, including development between Lily and Scorpius. Would love to see Outtakes from your work. Best wishes for your future endeavors.
2/12 c34 Frozen Fire
Awesome!
Awesome!
2/9 c34 Noelle
I spent more than one chapter with constant tears streaming down my face. I also couldn't stop reading this story, so it is currently 2:20 in the morning and I meant to go to bed 2 1/2 hours ago. Some of the plot points were really predictable, I totally saw the Molly Louis thing coming a mile away, and the possessed Lucy. Still, it was amazing.
Noelle
I spent more than one chapter with constant tears streaming down my face. I also couldn't stop reading this story, so it is currently 2:20 in the morning and I meant to go to bed 2 1/2 hours ago. Some of the plot points were really predictable, I totally saw the Molly Louis thing coming a mile away, and the possessed Lucy. Still, it was amazing.
Noelle
2/8 c34 nonreviewer
Honestly I usually never leave reviews on fics (I know that's bad), but something about this story struck and cord with me and compels me to leave one.
I love your story. I think that you had an interesting plot idea matched with good characters. I feel like Harry was a bit OC and just a tad unrealistic, but I guess that was your vision. Also the whole dream sequence with Lucy about being bad was a little bit cliched. I think had you not incorporated it at all the whole Lucy being evil thing would have caught a lot of people off guard and had a bigger impact (but the foreshadowing up to that was brilliant).
However, I honestly have mixed feelings about he ending. A story should end when all of the conflicts within the story end. While I think the conflict between the Death Eaters was good, I really enjoyed reading your story because of the other conflict between the next gen and the parents. I loved that while even though the main enemy of the story were Death Eaters, the tension between Lily and co. and their parents was just as, if not more important to the plot. However, you never provided any sort of concrete resolution to that conflict. Instead it was exacerbated more due to the fight between Lily and Harry and then the story suddenly ended. Even with the epilogue I didn't get the feeling of completeness and satisfaction. As a reader I wanted to know more. Even one chapter tying everything up would be fine. Just a bit of food for thought.
Constructive criticism aside, can I just tell you how much I adored Lily. I think you did a great job creating a character that really came alive. Unlike a lot of other fanfic authors, you are able to give your protagonist clear flaws. Also her character remained much the same throughout the novel. Kudos to you.
Overall, I really loved this story (I'm leaving a review which never happens). You are a very talented writer. I can't wait to read more fics from you. :)
Honestly I usually never leave reviews on fics (I know that's bad), but something about this story struck and cord with me and compels me to leave one.
I love your story. I think that you had an interesting plot idea matched with good characters. I feel like Harry was a bit OC and just a tad unrealistic, but I guess that was your vision. Also the whole dream sequence with Lucy about being bad was a little bit cliched. I think had you not incorporated it at all the whole Lucy being evil thing would have caught a lot of people off guard and had a bigger impact (but the foreshadowing up to that was brilliant).
However, I honestly have mixed feelings about he ending. A story should end when all of the conflicts within the story end. While I think the conflict between the Death Eaters was good, I really enjoyed reading your story because of the other conflict between the next gen and the parents. I loved that while even though the main enemy of the story were Death Eaters, the tension between Lily and co. and their parents was just as, if not more important to the plot. However, you never provided any sort of concrete resolution to that conflict. Instead it was exacerbated more due to the fight between Lily and Harry and then the story suddenly ended. Even with the epilogue I didn't get the feeling of completeness and satisfaction. As a reader I wanted to know more. Even one chapter tying everything up would be fine. Just a bit of food for thought.
Constructive criticism aside, can I just tell you how much I adored Lily. I think you did a great job creating a character that really came alive. Unlike a lot of other fanfic authors, you are able to give your protagonist clear flaws. Also her character remained much the same throughout the novel. Kudos to you.
Overall, I really loved this story (I'm leaving a review which never happens). You are a very talented writer. I can't wait to read more fics from you. :)
2/8 c34 
4EvansGinnLilu
I can't believe it's ended yet, haha.
It's been so much time, I'll need sometime to get accustomed to it. But don't worry, I will.
I really loved every chapter, well there were some more than others (the ones were Harry was being nothing but a shade and Ginny didnt spoke her mind out ** me off), but the story needed them.
One of my favorites was the Veritaserum one, it was so complicated! But beautiful nothenless. And the one after Lily killed Anguis! Hugo was a total sweetheart! And Albus finding about Lilius, and one the last the antipenuntimun were Porella defends Lily! I have to say, its engraved in my mind haha.
I would love say more, but the internet connection won't allow me haha, it's my third try, might aswell not wasted.
Read you soon I hope, take care and God bless your talent! You are one of the better fanfictions authors I've read a story from, since it was well written and it was so understandable. Your methaphors were perfect for each part, and it the plot itself was like a paint with words.
Thank you for taking your time to write for us fool who cannot live without fanfiction, and again bless your talent haha
Read you later,
EvansGinnLilu
4EvansGinnLiluI can't believe it's ended yet, haha.
It's been so much time, I'll need sometime to get accustomed to it. But don't worry, I will.
I really loved every chapter, well there were some more than others (the ones were Harry was being nothing but a shade and Ginny didnt spoke her mind out ** me off), but the story needed them.
One of my favorites was the Veritaserum one, it was so complicated! But beautiful nothenless. And the one after Lily killed Anguis! Hugo was a total sweetheart! And Albus finding about Lilius, and one the last the antipenuntimun were Porella defends Lily! I have to say, its engraved in my mind haha.
I would love say more, but the internet connection won't allow me haha, it's my third try, might aswell not wasted.
Read you soon I hope, take care and God bless your talent! You are one of the better fanfictions authors I've read a story from, since it was well written and it was so understandable. Your methaphors were perfect for each part, and it the plot itself was like a paint with words.
Thank you for taking your time to write for us fool who cannot live without fanfiction, and again bless your talent haha
Read you later,
EvansGinnLilu
2/7 c34 speedsONEandONLY
i like it.
i wasnt sure how i would
feel with some of the loose ends.
but i liked it.
it ended well. :)
i like it.
i wasnt sure how i would
feel with some of the loose ends.
but i liked it.
it ended well. :)
2/6 c34 1Pan's Box
That was very sweet, thank you for sharing this story with us!
And as usual, keep it up with the showing vs telling, you've improved so much on that front. You're still jumping around a bit, though - don't just hope the reader will get it immediately.
I like the idea of Little!Molly, it's just like Little!Fred.
Best of luck for the future!
Pan x
1Pan's BoxThat was very sweet, thank you for sharing this story with us!
And as usual, keep it up with the showing vs telling, you've improved so much on that front. You're still jumping around a bit, though - don't just hope the reader will get it immediately.
I like the idea of Little!Molly, it's just like Little!Fred.
Best of luck for the future!
Pan x
2/6 c34 Skildpaden8D
Hi' I really liked your story, I must say that every scene with scorpius and Lily was my favorite, though properly the veritaseum chapter was the best.
I think I like Porella, she seemed like a bad ** but still like a good person.
Cannot remember any lines, and I smiled everytime Lily smiled and was sad when she was.
I hope you will write some other story in the Harry Potter universe soon:)
Hi' I really liked your story, I must say that every scene with scorpius and Lily was my favorite, though properly the veritaseum chapter was the best.
I think I like Porella, she seemed like a bad ** but still like a good person.
Cannot remember any lines, and I smiled everytime Lily smiled and was sad when she was.
I hope you will write some other story in the Harry Potter universe soon:)
2/5 c34 kittikatlova
Ok. So, I loved this story. Like from the depths of my heart, from the first chapter, I ADORED this. That being said, I was less fond of the epilogue. I dont feel like it had your usual fire and passion in it. It was written very well, dont think its not, it just didnt scream Lily/Scorpius as I expected it to. Thus, have you though sequel? Cuz I really think none of us would mind! Really! I havent convinced you have I? Damn. Well, still interested in anything you write! Maybe a Harry/Ginny or another Lily/Scorp? Pretty please? Still not convinced? LOL. One last try: I would really LOVE to see some loose ends tied up, such as when they got married (I assume they are? It wasnt covered), etc. Either way, thanks for a wonderful, passionate, well-written story we all loved!
Ok. So, I loved this story. Like from the depths of my heart, from the first chapter, I ADORED this. That being said, I was less fond of the epilogue. I dont feel like it had your usual fire and passion in it. It was written very well, dont think its not, it just didnt scream Lily/Scorpius as I expected it to. Thus, have you though sequel? Cuz I really think none of us would mind! Really! I havent convinced you have I? Damn. Well, still interested in anything you write! Maybe a Harry/Ginny or another Lily/Scorp? Pretty please? Still not convinced? LOL. One last try: I would really LOVE to see some loose ends tied up, such as when they got married (I assume they are? It wasnt covered), etc. Either way, thanks for a wonderful, passionate, well-written story we all loved!