for The Mark of Athena5/19 c12 
1oliver132cool
HAHAHAHAH! not to be mean but you are AWFUL at understanding prophecies! ROFL! HAHAHAH! an oath to keep with a final breath is the oath that percy made that he will never leave annabeth's side again. and when they were dangling on the cliff about to drop in tartarus, percy had to choice to save himself and let go or fall down with annabeth. that is AN OATH TO KEEP WITH A FINAL BREATH! ROFL! LOL, YOU ARE A TERRIBLE UDERSTANDER!
1oliver132coolHAHAHAHAH! not to be mean but you are AWFUL at understanding prophecies! ROFL! HAHAHAH! an oath to keep with a final breath is the oath that percy made that he will never leave annabeth's side again. and when they were dangling on the cliff about to drop in tartarus, percy had to choice to save himself and let go or fall down with annabeth. that is AN OATH TO KEEP WITH A FINAL BREATH! ROFL! LOL, YOU ARE A TERRIBLE UDERSTANDER!
5/16 c12 Bob
It would be funny if Jason stubbed his toe and died because of his Achilles spot
It would be funny if Jason stubbed his toe and died because of his Achilles spot
3/24 c22 jessie
what the h- at least give me an epilogue.
what the h- at least give me an epilogue.
2/10 c21 basketballgirl10
plez continue!
plez continue!
1/13 c2 Wise Girl EH
Percy really needs to change out of that toga!
Percy really needs to change out of that toga!
1/2 c9 Guest
I liked this chapter too! I especially love the sweet tender moments with percy and annabeth. Remind me of me and my boyfriend. Keep writing!:)
I liked this chapter too! I especially love the sweet tender moments with percy and annabeth. Remind me of me and my boyfriend. Keep writing!:)
1/2 c8 Guest
awesome! i really liked it. but try to make it flow a bit better. keep up the good work. you kept me reading the whole time.
awesome! i really liked it. but try to make it flow a bit better. keep up the good work. you kept me reading the whole time.
12/3/2012 c6 PIPERMXJASONG
YESSSSS!LOVE YA MATE!PIPERXJASON FOREVER!
YESSSSS!LOVE YA MATE!PIPERXJASON FOREVER!
12/2/2012 c22 daughterofthesea
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg
This is better than rick's book! I love it! SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOD! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg
This is better than rick's book! I love it! SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOD! Thankyouthankyouthankyou!
12/2/2012 c21 daughterofthesea
please please please don't discontinue! Make it so that percy is warned, then they go to the doors of death, and find two armies waiting there. One in tartarus and another out side. Please please please write on!
please please please don't discontinue! Make it so that percy is warned, then they go to the doors of death, and find two armies waiting there. One in tartarus and another out side. Please please please write on!
11/21/2012 c22 blackjackrulz11
Eh i'm not in 2 love stories so yeah but still write it my mom would love it peace out.
Eh i'm not in 2 love stories so yeah but still write it my mom would love it peace out.
11/21/2012 c18 jakob yoshino
I wish it's that easy to get a girlfriend Percy is lucky if i was his age i would ask Annabeth out to
I think I would be a child of ZEUS BOO YA!
I wish it's that easy to get a girlfriend Percy is lucky if i was his age i would ask Annabeth out to
I think I would be a child of ZEUS BOO YA!
11/20/2012 c21 JAKOB YOSHINO
THAT SUCKS I NEED 2 READ MORE!
THAT SUCKS I NEED 2 READ MORE!
11/19/2012 c12 jakob yoshino
So at the end of The Last Olimpyan Percy and Annabeth get together i don't getit tell me more e-mail me at .
So at the end of The Last Olimpyan Percy and Annabeth get together i don't getit tell me more e-mail me at .
11/18/2012 c22 3DandelionsAndDaydreams
You know, it probably would've just been easier to shoot me. In the heart. About nine times. Or twenty. You know, whatever works best for you.
Gah. That was so... asdfghjkl. I started flailing around when she died, then I like screamed when she said "your armor's crooked". That was perfect.
I knew Apollo was going to come. Ha. I so called that.
Honestly, this could've easily fit at the end of the series, especially with the sacrifice thing. That was a pretty predictable part of the series, don't you think? Most of it isn't but that was. Oh, whatever. I really don't care. It's still good. And I think you wrote it very well.
One thing. There's some awkward sentences and weird dialogue in this chapter. I've been noticing a decrease in the quality of these chapters lately. I'm not sure if you're just tired of writing this or if you ran out of steam or what. It was still really good, but not your best.
I'm sad this is over. I really liked this story. Aw.
I can't wait for your next one though. Is it going to be AU? All-Human, maybe? Wait, no, please don't do that last one. Honestly, I probably won't read it if it's all-human. I think it's kind of stupid, since the main part of the series is that they're DEMIGODS. I don't know. That just bugs me.
Anyway. About your original story. I like it, but it seems kind of empty. Like, I would not just buy a live story. There has to be a plot behind it. Like, maybe the boy has a younger sister with cancer who he really loves. Or maybe their parents hate each other, and won't let them be together, AND there's problems at school and/or at home. What you said was a nice start, but I don't think it's really enough. You need some sub-plot lines, or maybe you should make THAT the sub-plot line. Whatever you want to I'd probably buy it. But O really do think you should give it a go!
Can't wait to see your next update!
3DandelionsAndDaydreamsYou know, it probably would've just been easier to shoot me. In the heart. About nine times. Or twenty. You know, whatever works best for you.
Gah. That was so... asdfghjkl. I started flailing around when she died, then I like screamed when she said "your armor's crooked". That was perfect.
I knew Apollo was going to come. Ha. I so called that.
Honestly, this could've easily fit at the end of the series, especially with the sacrifice thing. That was a pretty predictable part of the series, don't you think? Most of it isn't but that was. Oh, whatever. I really don't care. It's still good. And I think you wrote it very well.
One thing. There's some awkward sentences and weird dialogue in this chapter. I've been noticing a decrease in the quality of these chapters lately. I'm not sure if you're just tired of writing this or if you ran out of steam or what. It was still really good, but not your best.
I'm sad this is over. I really liked this story. Aw.
I can't wait for your next one though. Is it going to be AU? All-Human, maybe? Wait, no, please don't do that last one. Honestly, I probably won't read it if it's all-human. I think it's kind of stupid, since the main part of the series is that they're DEMIGODS. I don't know. That just bugs me.
Anyway. About your original story. I like it, but it seems kind of empty. Like, I would not just buy a live story. There has to be a plot behind it. Like, maybe the boy has a younger sister with cancer who he really loves. Or maybe their parents hate each other, and won't let them be together, AND there's problems at school and/or at home. What you said was a nice start, but I don't think it's really enough. You need some sub-plot lines, or maybe you should make THAT the sub-plot line. Whatever you want to I'd probably buy it. But O really do think you should give it a go!
Can't wait to see your next update!