for Count Down Beloved12/20/2012 c1 Balckshadow32
WHY PROWL?! Why did you do it? Why!?
WHY PROWL?! Why did you do it? Why!?
6/21/2012 c1 
23Emi The Ninja
I'm crying! don't care how old this is...i love it! Helped me with the nightmares :3
23Emi The NinjaI'm crying! don't care how old this is...i love it! Helped me with the nightmares :3
4/16/2012 c1 14DarknessRising10
The summary alone brought a lump in my throat as I knew that there would be self-sacrafice and I was a snivelling wreck by the end of the story, which is no mean feat with me.
The story may not be very long, and rightly so as too much longer, the feelings may have become lost as it needed to keep up the fast pace you had going, but it was so emotive, I defy anyone not to cry when reading this.
I did have a gut feeling that Prowl would not send Jazz to his death but it was still a kick in the gut when I read 'His visor brightened as his door slid away and his plasma froze in his systems...it was a storage closet' Some sort of strangled sound left my throat at that point.
This really is a beautifully sad story.
14DarknessRising10The summary alone brought a lump in my throat as I knew that there would be self-sacrafice and I was a snivelling wreck by the end of the story, which is no mean feat with me.
The story may not be very long, and rightly so as too much longer, the feelings may have become lost as it needed to keep up the fast pace you had going, but it was so emotive, I defy anyone not to cry when reading this.
I did have a gut feeling that Prowl would not send Jazz to his death but it was still a kick in the gut when I read 'His visor brightened as his door slid away and his plasma froze in his systems...it was a storage closet' Some sort of strangled sound left my throat at that point.
This really is a beautifully sad story.
4/15/2012 c1 1Dance With Danger
I've read this before somewhere, and it still had me in tears. I absolutely love it. I'd love to see something else added to it.
1Dance With DangerI've read this before somewhere, and it still had me in tears. I absolutely love it. I'd love to see something else added to it.
4/10/2012 c1 5Fianna9
Poor Jazz. Of course Prowl wouldn't want to send you to your death if there was an alternative, and of course Jazz would want to save him. Tragic and well done.
5Fianna9Poor Jazz. Of course Prowl wouldn't want to send you to your death if there was an alternative, and of course Jazz would want to save him. Tragic and well done.
4/10/2012 c1 11Psyche102
*cries* I read this somewhere else, and it made me cry. Here it is again, resurfacing to me make me cry again... :(
Love it! The best ones always make me cry. :*)
11Psyche102*cries* I read this somewhere else, and it made me cry. Here it is again, resurfacing to me make me cry again... :(
Love it! The best ones always make me cry. :*)
4/9/2012 c1 53renegadewriter8
Damn this makes me ache and cry every single time. Was hoping you would upload this soon ^^ Total love for this. Would love to see a small sequel showing Jazz grieving or something. This is love, in a very sad kind of way *hugs Jazz* Awesome job as always! ^^
53renegadewriter8Damn this makes me ache and cry every single time. Was hoping you would upload this soon ^^ Total love for this. Would love to see a small sequel showing Jazz grieving or something. This is love, in a very sad kind of way *hugs Jazz* Awesome job as always! ^^