for NL: School
111/12/2012 c5 ohgravitysonfire
if you get the chance to read this i think you should edit/rework this installment. I enjoy the story, but it's very confusing without that first chapter!
if you get the chance to read this i think you should edit/rework this installment. I enjoy the story, but it's very confusing without that first chapter!
4/19/2012 c8 cheether
I can see trouble looming ahead, I hope that he doesn't get into too much trouble at school for it though. It use to be that you could take play guns to school and play cops and robbers at recess but times have certainly changed in that aspect. Good story.
I can see trouble looming ahead, I hope that he doesn't get into too much trouble at school for it though. It use to be that you could take play guns to school and play cops and robbers at recess but times have certainly changed in that aspect. Good story.
4/18/2012 c6 cheether
Jethro is good with kids, but maybe this time he has something more up his sleeve. Hopefully Colby can find something really cool for show and tell. I hope that Colby will tell Jethro what he is going through too. Good story.
Jethro is good with kids, but maybe this time he has something more up his sleeve. Hopefully Colby can find something really cool for show and tell. I hope that Colby will tell Jethro what he is going through too. Good story.
4/18/2012 c1 tyshuman
You should update your summary to say this is a crossover with Numbers. Unless you watch that show the reader doesn't know what is going on here. There is almost no NCIS in characterization or in the plot.
You should update your summary to say this is a crossover with Numbers. Unless you watch that show the reader doesn't know what is going on here. There is almost no NCIS in characterization or in the plot.
4/16/2012 c5 cheether
Best laid plans of mice and men, I think Colby will naturally try to help out if he can. Good story.
Best laid plans of mice and men, I think Colby will naturally try to help out if he can. Good story.