for Kakashi's Secret8/7/2012 c5 Guest
Hey man it's good but u ruined it by hitomi, why does she have a mask that's shit and if it's like kakashi's it shouldent cover her eye coz his head band does that and why does she have to have both bloodline eyes would be better with just sharingan and u made her WAYYY too strong for nine everything was good till u made her REALLY shit...
Hey man it's good but u ruined it by hitomi, why does she have a mask that's shit and if it's like kakashi's it shouldent cover her eye coz his head band does that and why does she have to have both bloodline eyes would be better with just sharingan and u made her WAYYY too strong for nine everything was good till u made her REALLY shit...
7/26/2012 c48 ZyiareHellsing
you are a genius! absolutely love this story I'm about to read a sequel now!
you are a genius! absolutely love this story I'm about to read a sequel now!
7/1/2012 c45 Naoko Matatabi
Go Team Prodigy! I was really curious about who she was going to choose. I really liked how you had Shikamaru find out he was going to be a dad. It was clever.
Go Team Prodigy! I was really curious about who she was going to choose. I really liked how you had Shikamaru find out he was going to be a dad. It was clever.
6/29/2012 c44 Naoko Matatabi
I like how Kakashi is like "Konoha is willed with inner team love" cause it's so true.
I like how Kakashi is like "Konoha is willed with inner team love" cause it's so true.
6/28/2012 c43 Naoko Matatabi
This is a great story! It deserves so much praise I'm sure I won't get it all in one review! I love how you pay attention to all the characters relationships and gave details about them that make them seem much more real. I wish the manga Ataskuni were like your Ataskuni. I love how they had a soft spot for the kids. I can't wait to read more! You ate awesome!
This is a great story! It deserves so much praise I'm sure I won't get it all in one review! I love how you pay attention to all the characters relationships and gave details about them that make them seem much more real. I wish the manga Ataskuni were like your Ataskuni. I love how they had a soft spot for the kids. I can't wait to read more! You ate awesome!
6/26/2012 c42 Invincible Shadow
This is sooo cute! I love your story, and the delicate jealousy between Daisuke and Masaru is adorable! Hope you can update soon!
This is sooo cute! I love your story, and the delicate jealousy between Daisuke and Masaru is adorable! Hope you can update soon!
6/22/2012 c39 Invincible Shadow
Wow... This is getting awesomer and awesomer with each chapter! Hitomi is amazing! But I want to see the second round, so please update soon! Btw, I reviewed the last chapter too, but my stupid computer didn't let me log in, so it'll probably show up as anon.
Wow... This is getting awesomer and awesomer with each chapter! Hitomi is amazing! But I want to see the second round, so please update soon! Btw, I reviewed the last chapter too, but my stupid computer didn't let me log in, so it'll probably show up as anon.
6/21/2012 c38 Guest
Ooh! I'm really loving this! Like I said in my previous review, this story is awesome and I admire your determination to continue it. Thank you for another amazing update!
Ooh! I'm really loving this! Like I said in my previous review, this story is awesome and I admire your determination to continue it. Thank you for another amazing update!
6/19/2012 c35 
7Lioutenant Flame
Oh yeah! That was one hell of a chapter. And one of the most satisfying Danzo-deaths I've ever read.
7Lioutenant FlameOh yeah! That was one hell of a chapter. And one of the most satisfying Danzo-deaths I've ever read.
6/15/2012 c32 Lioutenant Flame
Oh my, my! Certainly didn't see THAT coming! I can't wait for the Itachi-Sasuke reunion!
Oh my, my! Certainly didn't see THAT coming! I can't wait for the Itachi-Sasuke reunion!
6/10/2012 c31 8Invincible Shadow
Hell yeah you're awesome! I just read through your ENTIRE story in one go, in one day, and I must say, it's one of the best stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading on this site. I'm positively addicted. I can't believe it only has 10 reviews! I was expecting triple digits! Or at least one more zero at the end! The plot is intense and I'm constantly kept on the edge of my seat! I love Kakashi's daughter- she's sooo cute! And if anyone tells you she's a Mary-Sue, they obviously need to go and have their eyes checked. And I also love the fact that you've made the Akatsuki into fairly loveable people, and not heartless bastards like they're usually portrayed.. Can't wait for another update so please keep up the amazing work! Cuddles!
8Invincible ShadowHell yeah you're awesome! I just read through your ENTIRE story in one go, in one day, and I must say, it's one of the best stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading on this site. I'm positively addicted. I can't believe it only has 10 reviews! I was expecting triple digits! Or at least one more zero at the end! The plot is intense and I'm constantly kept on the edge of my seat! I love Kakashi's daughter- she's sooo cute! And if anyone tells you she's a Mary-Sue, they obviously need to go and have their eyes checked. And I also love the fact that you've made the Akatsuki into fairly loveable people, and not heartless bastards like they're usually portrayed.. Can't wait for another update so please keep up the amazing work! Cuddles!
5/17/2012 c23 Avesecrets457
Best Story Ever!
Best Story Ever!