for Everything changes8/21/2012 c8 
16Purple Lex
Realized I didn't leave a review so I will do it now.
Ran across this story last Friday and spent all the weekend catching up on it.
They were very IC and the evolution throughout this story was fantastic. Their road trip was very humorous and also really helped with their bonding, which I smiled at. I think them willingly becoming friends and recognizing each other as they are, not holding any past grudges anymore, was an excellent play to end it. It was natural and dragging it out any further, I think, might have ruined the magic of it.
However, the sequel that you're writing picks up where this left off with enough time passing that it feels very natural.
You are officially one of my favorite writers :)
16Purple LexRealized I didn't leave a review so I will do it now.
Ran across this story last Friday and spent all the weekend catching up on it.
They were very IC and the evolution throughout this story was fantastic. Their road trip was very humorous and also really helped with their bonding, which I smiled at. I think them willingly becoming friends and recognizing each other as they are, not holding any past grudges anymore, was an excellent play to end it. It was natural and dragging it out any further, I think, might have ruined the magic of it.
However, the sequel that you're writing picks up where this left off with enough time passing that it feels very natural.
You are officially one of my favorite writers :)
6/4/2012 c8 9julyisfree
Oh I'm so pleased with the way you've carried this story; I think it was a good point to end but personally I would have done a little longer, there were a lot of elements to continue, but as you said for a first story is more than ok.
What I liked the most about this chapter and your story in general, is that at the end each of them took a piece of the other; Sylar helped Claire understand that it was guilt what moved her to become this fierce company agent and Claire made Sylar understand that he really had not changed, not in essence, I mean he did stoped killing but he was doing nothing to give back something of what he had took from the world, like in a way he was being selfish.
All in all a great piece.
And please dont leave us here, we want a sequel!
9julyisfreeOh I'm so pleased with the way you've carried this story; I think it was a good point to end but personally I would have done a little longer, there were a lot of elements to continue, but as you said for a first story is more than ok.
What I liked the most about this chapter and your story in general, is that at the end each of them took a piece of the other; Sylar helped Claire understand that it was guilt what moved her to become this fierce company agent and Claire made Sylar understand that he really had not changed, not in essence, I mean he did stoped killing but he was doing nothing to give back something of what he had took from the world, like in a way he was being selfish.
All in all a great piece.
And please dont leave us here, we want a sequel!
6/3/2012 c8 mel
I liked the ending. Quiet and hopeful, but not all roses.
I liked the ending. Quiet and hopeful, but not all roses.
6/2/2012 c7 9julyisfree
And now the inmortal duo have to save the day!
Go team S/C!
"...she just wanted to snap and tell Sylar to get over himself"
and she would, you know this is one of the things that make their dynamic so good, Claire would totally call Sylar in his ** without regret and that's what Sylar needs, someone who keep him in track.
Anyway loved this chapter, yeah the plot tightens!
9julyisfreeAnd now the inmortal duo have to save the day!
Go team S/C!
"...she just wanted to snap and tell Sylar to get over himself"
and she would, you know this is one of the things that make their dynamic so good, Claire would totally call Sylar in his ** without regret and that's what Sylar needs, someone who keep him in track.
Anyway loved this chapter, yeah the plot tightens!
5/30/2012 c7 mel
Cliffhangers and terrorist threats! Yay!
Cliffhangers and terrorist threats! Yay!
5/28/2012 c6 9julyisfree
Sorry, but this is what happen when I'm trying to let a review while I'm drinking coffe and writing my fic at the same time.
I fail.
Sorry but this comment was meant for CH 5, which I didn't see until now -hehe you updated earlier YAY- I love how at ease these two are towards each other, you know is really difficult for my sometimes to pull things out between Sy and Claire because the tension is so strong. But you make it seems so natural, I love it.
As for shipping goes, well as you may had noticed I'm a S/C shipper but I would rather read a well developed frienship over a rushed relationship anytime. So as you said, just let the flow of the story take you, I will keep reading anyway ;-)
9julyisfreeSorry, but this is what happen when I'm trying to let a review while I'm drinking coffe and writing my fic at the same time.
I fail.
Sorry but this comment was meant for CH 5, which I didn't see until now -hehe you updated earlier YAY- I love how at ease these two are towards each other, you know is really difficult for my sometimes to pull things out between Sy and Claire because the tension is so strong. But you make it seems so natural, I love it.
As for shipping goes, well as you may had noticed I'm a S/C shipper but I would rather read a well developed frienship over a rushed relationship anytime. So as you said, just let the flow of the story take you, I will keep reading anyway ;-)
5/23/2012 c4 mel
Yay, an update! My day is better.
Yay, an update! My day is better.
5/21/2012 c4 9julyisfree
The image of a pedaling Sylar with a cautious Claire sitting on the handlebars has really worth the wait for this chapter.
I loved that scene, it showed how much at ease they are with each other and the progrees they had made so far. Claire is really starting to see Sylar as an entirely new person and for Sylar well we dont know exactly how he felt about her but I can tell that at least he respect her and her desicions.
"Seriously, is this some twisted chapter of 'The misadventures of an ex-serial killer and…"
"…and a grumpy cheerleader?"
OMG THAT was freaking hilarious! XD
Please try to update more often :-)
9julyisfreeThe image of a pedaling Sylar with a cautious Claire sitting on the handlebars has really worth the wait for this chapter.
I loved that scene, it showed how much at ease they are with each other and the progrees they had made so far. Claire is really starting to see Sylar as an entirely new person and for Sylar well we dont know exactly how he felt about her but I can tell that at least he respect her and her desicions.
"Seriously, is this some twisted chapter of 'The misadventures of an ex-serial killer and…"
"…and a grumpy cheerleader?"
OMG THAT was freaking hilarious! XD
Please try to update more often :-)