for The Man in the Mirror4/2 c13 Guest
please make more your awesome at this
please make more your awesome at this
4/2 c9 Guest
haha Alma at the end "so what'er the odds Suman doesn't hear about this"
haha Alma at the end "so what'er the odds Suman doesn't hear about this"
4/2 c8 sweetycakes
OMG timcampy give allen his food back that was just to funny i love your story
OMG timcampy give allen his food back that was just to funny i love your story
3/17 c13 
1B3GIN
Magnificently awesome job, as usual! Great job with Lenalee's fight with Echii. I liked the way you did her thought process; it was clean and made sense.
I only saw one tiny error in this chapter, and it's not a big deal if you don't want to correct it since the sentence is still easily readable (it's toward the beginning. 4th paragraph up from the first page break). Currently it reads " "Oh god I'm sorry! I don't what what I did, but-" "
Whereas you probably meant something like " "Oh god I'm sorry! I don't *know* what I did, but-" "
I won't give up on Tim! TT I loved how you wrote his reactions in this chapter so much. I look forward to the next!
1B3GINMagnificently awesome job, as usual! Great job with Lenalee's fight with Echii. I liked the way you did her thought process; it was clean and made sense.
I only saw one tiny error in this chapter, and it's not a big deal if you don't want to correct it since the sentence is still easily readable (it's toward the beginning. 4th paragraph up from the first page break). Currently it reads " "Oh god I'm sorry! I don't what what I did, but-" "
Whereas you probably meant something like " "Oh god I'm sorry! I don't *know* what I did, but-" "
I won't give up on Tim! TT I loved how you wrote his reactions in this chapter so much. I look forward to the next!
2/27 c13 1FailScribe
No problem O
It's interesting for me to beta. LOL Plus, you help me too. 3
I'm looking forward to so much. O.O' Seeing if Lenalee is okay, how the outside peeps will work this out, and Road's coming in! 8D She's like mah favorite baddy! X3
Lemme know if you need any extra help. XD Oh also, my Skype changed. I'll send you it in an email today then so it's easier to contact each other. XP
1FailScribeNo problem O
It's interesting for me to beta. LOL Plus, you help me too. 3
I'm looking forward to so much. O.O' Seeing if Lenalee is okay, how the outside peeps will work this out, and Road's coming in! 8D She's like mah favorite baddy! X3
Lemme know if you need any extra help. XD Oh also, my Skype changed. I'll send you it in an email today then so it's easier to contact each other. XP
2/26 c13 3Booklover2526
timcampy! u poor little golem! I cant wait for allen to come back, im hoping at least he'll come back next chappie... awesome chappie to the hundreths!
3Booklover2526timcampy! u poor little golem! I cant wait for allen to come back, im hoping at least he'll come back next chappie... awesome chappie to the hundreths!
2/7 c12 1B3GIN
Cheese and rice it always freaks me out a little when I read about Lavi in bookman mode. It doesn't help that you wrote it so well, either. And then... and then... TTTT I'd write about something but I don't want to spoil stuff for anyone who accidentally reads the comments before getting to this chapter. You've seriously got me hooked. I can't wait for the next chapter (but will anyway), and I wanted to tell you one of my other friends is reading it (huge Lavi fan, by the way, but she doesn't have a account), and she said she really likes it! :D Though she's not this far yet... School and stuff are getting in the way. Thank you for posting this!
1B3GINCheese and rice it always freaks me out a little when I read about Lavi in bookman mode. It doesn't help that you wrote it so well, either. And then... and then... TTTT I'd write about something but I don't want to spoil stuff for anyone who accidentally reads the comments before getting to this chapter. You've seriously got me hooked. I can't wait for the next chapter (but will anyway), and I wanted to tell you one of my other friends is reading it (huge Lavi fan, by the way, but she doesn't have a account), and she said she really likes it! :D Though she's not this far yet... School and stuff are getting in the way. Thank you for posting this!
2/7 c11 B3GIN
Whoa. 0_0 That last part of the chapter... creepy.
And it was so hard to read the part in the middle, even though I knew it was coming and everything, but to read it. :( You wrote it incredibly well but that part has always left me feeling a little empty when I think about it. Thank you for uploading!
Whoa. 0_0 That last part of the chapter... creepy.
And it was so hard to read the part in the middle, even though I knew it was coming and everything, but to read it. :( You wrote it incredibly well but that part has always left me feeling a little empty when I think about it. Thank you for uploading!
2/6 c9 B3GIN
Ah... I'm not hoping for a romance between Allen and Miranda, if my vote counts for anything! I'd be fine with no pairings. .; But that's just my preference...
Great great great job! Thank you for posting.
Ah... I'm not hoping for a romance between Allen and Miranda, if my vote counts for anything! I'd be fine with no pairings. .; But that's just my preference...
Great great great job! Thank you for posting.
2/5 c8 B3GIN
So glad you included Alma in the story, and in such an original way as well! :D And thanks to your fantastic writing skills, I had something pleasurable to read when I was stranded by myself. Thank you for posting this! :D
So glad you included Alma in the story, and in such an original way as well! :D And thanks to your fantastic writing skills, I had something pleasurable to read when I was stranded by myself. Thank you for posting this! :D
2/4 c7 B3GIN
I forgot to write this last chapter, but I love what you came up with for Lavi's innocence formation. His reaction was hilarious-I laughed out loud, then felt weird for laughing in a room by myself. /
1.) As I was reading the bit about Miranda recalling that no one had ever thank her, I thought about that and was impressed that you'd avoided the phrase. I'll bet it was hard!
2.) I'm not asking why Allen and Miranda were singing. It was yet another part that made me laugh out loud, feel awkward, and then feel hollow when I read about what happened on the 'news'
3.) I laughed at this plot device too! No problems here!
4.) Uh... At first I thought Devit and Jasdero since the song sounded similar to the one they sang in the Ark, but I'm going to take a dive off the deep end and say Mana and Nea instead. :D
I'm loving your story! It's so well written, the chapters are nice and long, the plot's moving at a great pace. But you've got me curious: How is it that Allen knows Crown Clown's name but doesn't have the Sword of Exorcism or his cape yet? 0_0 I can't tell if it fits into the AU part or if this is some way to lull us into thinking that he doesn't have it... when he does. Because I'm also not sure if you're alluding to the fact that Allen is a general (I'd love you if you made him one!), because there were several instances where he avoided straight-out answering what rank he is. And then the Earl saying they'd lost a general in the limbo... And Tyki saying it too...
I'm writing so much. I'm sorry. Your story's really making me think though. XDDDD Great job! Wish I could read more today, but it's late again. Thank you for writing this lovely story!
I forgot to write this last chapter, but I love what you came up with for Lavi's innocence formation. His reaction was hilarious-I laughed out loud, then felt weird for laughing in a room by myself. /
1.) As I was reading the bit about Miranda recalling that no one had ever thank her, I thought about that and was impressed that you'd avoided the phrase. I'll bet it was hard!
2.) I'm not asking why Allen and Miranda were singing. It was yet another part that made me laugh out loud, feel awkward, and then feel hollow when I read about what happened on the 'news'
3.) I laughed at this plot device too! No problems here!
4.) Uh... At first I thought Devit and Jasdero since the song sounded similar to the one they sang in the Ark, but I'm going to take a dive off the deep end and say Mana and Nea instead. :D
I'm loving your story! It's so well written, the chapters are nice and long, the plot's moving at a great pace. But you've got me curious: How is it that Allen knows Crown Clown's name but doesn't have the Sword of Exorcism or his cape yet? 0_0 I can't tell if it fits into the AU part or if this is some way to lull us into thinking that he doesn't have it... when he does. Because I'm also not sure if you're alluding to the fact that Allen is a general (I'd love you if you made him one!), because there were several instances where he avoided straight-out answering what rank he is. And then the Earl saying they'd lost a general in the limbo... And Tyki saying it too...
I'm writing so much. I'm sorry. Your story's really making me think though. XDDDD Great job! Wish I could read more today, but it's late again. Thank you for writing this lovely story!
1/10 c2 B3GIN
This is awesome! I really hope I have more free time to read this in soon. Great job! :D I think you portrayed everyone incredibly well, and I'm so happy that Miranda will be a central character in your story. Love her!
This is awesome! I really hope I have more free time to read this in soon. Great job! :D I think you portrayed everyone incredibly well, and I'm so happy that Miranda will be a central character in your story. Love her!
1/8 c12 4Anon Novelist
I absolutely love this story! Every time I read it I'm hypnotized by this realm you've created, and I LOVE your writing style. I think you have each character done flawlessly as well. The length makes it amazing, too, because there's so much to read in one chapter and a whole bunch of information.
Simply incredible!
Also, I would be honored to be your beta reader if you don't have one yet. But honestly, there's not enough people reading this story. I think you deserve more credit, so I'll recommend to my readers and friends and hopefully it spreads. Good luck in the future with THe Man In The Mirror and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat just waiting for the update!
Seriously, though, I get super excited when I see you update this story. (I've been watching this for awhile, but I've been too lazy to sign in.) But anyways, I hope to read more soon when ever you can update. If you will, let me know about the beta reading thing as soon as possible please.
PS: I think you did fine with the interrogation and the injuries and the rushing to the hospital. If you ever have any questions just ask me and I'll try to answer the best I can. Also, I know a few others that will do the same for you. They're good friends of mine on here and they love this story too. I'm not sure if you heard from them though: Jet Classics, Snow Shadows, and I saw D. Gray - Man 411Critic post this in his/her forum. I think Critic will help you too if you ask. _
4Anon NovelistI absolutely love this story! Every time I read it I'm hypnotized by this realm you've created, and I LOVE your writing style. I think you have each character done flawlessly as well. The length makes it amazing, too, because there's so much to read in one chapter and a whole bunch of information.
Simply incredible!
Also, I would be honored to be your beta reader if you don't have one yet. But honestly, there's not enough people reading this story. I think you deserve more credit, so I'll recommend to my readers and friends and hopefully it spreads. Good luck in the future with THe Man In The Mirror and I'm sitting on the edge of my seat just waiting for the update!
Seriously, though, I get super excited when I see you update this story. (I've been watching this for awhile, but I've been too lazy to sign in.) But anyways, I hope to read more soon when ever you can update. If you will, let me know about the beta reading thing as soon as possible please.
PS: I think you did fine with the interrogation and the injuries and the rushing to the hospital. If you ever have any questions just ask me and I'll try to answer the best I can. Also, I know a few others that will do the same for you. They're good friends of mine on here and they love this story too. I'm not sure if you heard from them though: Jet Classics, Snow Shadows, and I saw D. Gray - Man 411Critic post this in his/her forum. I think Critic will help you too if you ask. _