for the new 'gang' in town10/12/2012 c1 Guest
How on EARTH can she have a license when your on the run much less buy a house or a car or get a job you need an id for to do that and you would be found if you HAD an id
How on EARTH can she have a license when your on the run much less buy a house or a car or get a job you need an id for to do that and you would be found if you HAD an id
8/14/2012 c1 thefloweroffire
Please, please PLEASE, write another chapter. I liked how you had a cliff hanger at the edn, but it's not fair to keep us waiting! I must know the rest of the story. This is excellent.
Please, please PLEASE, write another chapter. I liked how you had a cliff hanger at the edn, but it's not fair to keep us waiting! I must know the rest of the story. This is excellent.
5/24/2012 c1 A-Double
This is quite possibly the best Twilight/Fast and Furious fanfic I have ever read. Do us all a great favor and please, please please, continue this story. It would brighten my day if this became a full length tale
This is quite possibly the best Twilight/Fast and Furious fanfic I have ever read. Do us all a great favor and please, please please, continue this story. It would brighten my day if this became a full length tale
4/23/2012 c1 Fruitbox
OMG guys write moar!1! Srsly my aiyez arrunt bleading enugh.
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For f*ck's sake, it's not just the crack pairing, but the quality (more like the total lack of it) that ranks this a few notches better than 'My immortal' but only just. At least you have multiple-sentence long chapters.
But daaaaamn. Ultimate crack pairing. Learn to keep universes untouched.
Because an angry mod with torches might come soon and yell "KILL IT WITH FIRE". And I agree with them.
OMG guys write moar!1! Srsly my aiyez arrunt bleading enugh.
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For f*ck's sake, it's not just the crack pairing, but the quality (more like the total lack of it) that ranks this a few notches better than 'My immortal' but only just. At least you have multiple-sentence long chapters.
But daaaaamn. Ultimate crack pairing. Learn to keep universes untouched.
Because an angry mod with torches might come soon and yell "KILL IT WITH FIRE". And I agree with them.
4/23/2012 c1 Zepher Ashcroft
Please never write again. This was more senseless than any gibberish a kindergarten child could write
Please never write again. This was more senseless than any gibberish a kindergarten child could write
14/20/2012 c1 Speechless
What is... what? I found this posted on fandom base as the highlight of this week's "Bad Fanfic Friday" and... wow. Where to begin?
What are two nekos doing in this story? Why does this fifteen-year-old have a driver's license? How can she afford a huge house and nice cars if she's a runaway? How can she even get work at a club since she's underage? The large majority of clubs won't even let you in the front door unless you're twenty-one. You might be able to get a gig there at eighteen, but NOT fifteen.
Do you have someone proofreading this story? The grammar is atrocious and basic spelling mistakes are everywhere. Instead of "promise" you wrote "promace", you wrote "reasuring" instead of "reassuring", and "thru" instead of "through". There's missing capitalization and phrases such as "I asked slightly shyly while slyly" are a confusing mess that end up conveying nothing to the reader.
Just... what is this? The character is clearly a mary-sue/self-insert so I really don't see why I should care about her at all. Nothing in this story makes sense and the more I try to wrap my head around it the less I understand.
What is... what? I found this posted on fandom base as the highlight of this week's "Bad Fanfic Friday" and... wow. Where to begin?
What are two nekos doing in this story? Why does this fifteen-year-old have a driver's license? How can she afford a huge house and nice cars if she's a runaway? How can she even get work at a club since she's underage? The large majority of clubs won't even let you in the front door unless you're twenty-one. You might be able to get a gig there at eighteen, but NOT fifteen.
Do you have someone proofreading this story? The grammar is atrocious and basic spelling mistakes are everywhere. Instead of "promise" you wrote "promace", you wrote "reasuring" instead of "reassuring", and "thru" instead of "through". There's missing capitalization and phrases such as "I asked slightly shyly while slyly" are a confusing mess that end up conveying nothing to the reader.
Just... what is this? The character is clearly a mary-sue/self-insert so I really don't see why I should care about her at all. Nothing in this story makes sense and the more I try to wrap my head around it the less I understand.