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7/22/2012 c3 1Arkell26
um i am almost positive toza is an earthbender but ok
7/8/2012 c3 Guest
Hehe this story made me laugh and I just adore it! Not to mention I think the Mako POV is just awesome and that everyone's pretty much in character ;) hope you do upload that epilogue soon:)
7/2/2012 c3 4Bell.Bit
lolz awesome story. so funny
5/7/2012 c3 shinjiru15
so cute :) seriously, these scenes need to be animated, people. thanks for sharing and good luck with your study abroad!
4/30/2012 c3 mabello
hahaha awesome! i wish i could see boulin faces when mako said "put some pants" hahaha please cintinue it soon
4/29/2012 c3 42Zanzibar1
Interesting turn of events. I'm curious as to how Amon will now deal with things after this. Please update soon!
4/28/2012 c3 2ParadoxMoonlight
Like it a lot!
4/27/2012 c3 AnabellaGC
I loved this! "bolin...out pants on." I would be cracking up if I was there!
4/25/2012 c3 ChillinLikeaVillain
awesome and hilarious
4/22/2012 c3 Mokimoki-chan
An awkward bunch Of teens in almost nothing... LOL

Ahaha I really do hope I get to see more of the other characters and Zuko in LoK:)
4/22/2012 c3 11patty cake rocks
the ending was hilarious, loved it!
4/21/2012 c3 6NorthernLights25
Great chapter!
4/21/2012 c3 Guest
"Let's get out of here. The Avatar in her underwear is NOT something I want the press to get a picture of."

I laughed...so hard
4/21/2012 c3 1Mcleo1
please write faster this is awesome
4/21/2012 c3 Arrankor
I really like your story. It provides a really interesting view of the equilists belief system, though I do belive your equilista will end up far more reasonable the the canon ones.

I would like to seem some argument from the other side to maybe about bending being a natural trait and do the equilists plan on breaking the legs of gifted runners and acrobats or blind people with superior vision. Something along those lines.

I believe there argument is rather tied to the natural gifts of benders giving them an advantage; I don't think there is any systematic oppression by benders of non-benders(later episodes may prove otherwise)

sorry abouth the wall but your story is rather thought provokeing.
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