for Butterfly's Samurai12/5/2012 c4 Bittersweet Alchemist
YOU DIDN'T MENTION ME! WHERE AM I? DOES THIS MEAN YOU DON"T CARE ABOUT ME?!
And you can dance, liar.
YOU DIDN'T MENTION ME! WHERE AM I? DOES THIS MEAN YOU DON"T CARE ABOUT ME?!
And you can dance, liar.
12/5/2012 c3 Bittersweet Alchemist
You goof! You're MINE!
Even if your avatar in this story is a weak little girl, you'd still be MINE!
You goof! You're MINE!
Even if your avatar in this story is a weak little girl, you'd still be MINE!
12/5/2012 c2 Bittersweet Alchemist
Don't give away too much about yourself... But you still made a good chapter!
Don't give away too much about yourself... But you still made a good chapter!
12/5/2012 c1 Bittersweet Alchemist
You make such detail into emotion...
I still admire you, hunny-bun!
You make such detail into emotion...
I still admire you, hunny-bun!
11/3/2012 c27 
2elysenjazz
This story has introduced me to a whole new world of music and I have to stay I really liked it. Even if it was a tad confusing at times it was still really good. Hey, what if you wrote a sequel about what happens when the boys go on their trip, hmmmm?
2elysenjazzThis story has introduced me to a whole new world of music and I have to stay I really liked it. Even if it was a tad confusing at times it was still really good. Hey, what if you wrote a sequel about what happens when the boys go on their trip, hmmmm?
10/31/2012 c1 elysenjazz
Are your eyes really that Color or do you just like to make them that way in you stories?
Are your eyes really that Color or do you just like to make them that way in you stories?
5/27/2012 c3 Daeva23
I would pay no heed to Gblackwell. You write a few sentences introducing Annabeth and he(or she) says you are overly poetic. Then he goes on to say that a character who seemed pitiable has a revolting side, and he accuses you of incompetence. He complains that your character is sick, but can still beat Ed. I think Ed is an effing ** anyway, so why is it such a big deal a sick little girl can kick his **?
I listen to a lot of Edenbridge, Tristania, Nightwish etc, and your stories seem to fit the mood of such music perfectly.
I would pay no heed to Gblackwell. You write a few sentences introducing Annabeth and he(or she) says you are overly poetic. Then he goes on to say that a character who seemed pitiable has a revolting side, and he accuses you of incompetence. He complains that your character is sick, but can still beat Ed. I think Ed is an effing ** anyway, so why is it such a big deal a sick little girl can kick his **?
I listen to a lot of Edenbridge, Tristania, Nightwish etc, and your stories seem to fit the mood of such music perfectly.
4/28/2012 c13 2TheCrazyMe
Awww pleeease i NEED more! Haha but i loved alot its a great story really! keep up the awesome work!
2TheCrazyMeAwww pleeease i NEED more! Haha but i loved alot its a great story really! keep up the awesome work!