for The Prince's Rebirth5/17 c7
7KeiGinya
Really well-written, except for the butchered Japanese names. It captures the air of 1/2 Prince really well and the OCs are just as wacky as the actual characters.
One thing in this chapter: shouldn't her current weapon be referred to as a jian because it's stabby? The thinness suggests a sword over a saber.
HAHAHA! ...HAHAHAHA! Go do it Xiao Lan! Go and conquer the Eastern continent's player city! :very amused:
Oh, and I prefer Rei/Kaen, if only because Angel's fangirling is too freaking hilarious to stop.
7KeiGinyaReally well-written, except for the butchered Japanese names. It captures the air of 1/2 Prince really well and the OCs are just as wacky as the actual characters.
One thing in this chapter: shouldn't her current weapon be referred to as a jian because it's stabby? The thinness suggests a sword over a saber.
HAHAHA! ...HAHAHAHA! Go do it Xiao Lan! Go and conquer the Eastern continent's player city! :very amused:
Oh, and I prefer Rei/Kaen, if only because Angel's fangirling is too freaking hilarious to stop.
5/14 c1
2AnotherJoker
Oh gosh this story love love love love. This could be like an actual sequel of 1/2 prince 3
2AnotherJokerOh gosh this story love love love love. This could be like an actual sequel of 1/2 prince 3
5/4 c7 DellyYuki
Wanna ask when will this new update?
only ask.
Actually because I can't wait for the next plot prince as Zero.
I like this story so much.
Wanna ask when will this new update?
only ask.
Actually because I can't wait for the next plot prince as Zero.
I like this story so much.
5/1 c7
2Jenaminya
This is great! I'd love to see Prince claiming back all his gear ;)
I hope you'll write more soon!
2JenaminyaThis is great! I'd love to see Prince claiming back all his gear ;)
I hope you'll write more soon!
4/30 c7
2Anonymess
I don't remember if I have written a review yet since I signed up here. But just in case, I wanna see that I loveeeee this story. It's interesting, well written and just makes me want to come back for more. I especially love the part of the plot where she has to go and EARN her rightful place back. I don't know why, but those kind of story pieces are so compelling to me.
Keep up the good work, you better update soon! ;3
2AnonymessI don't remember if I have written a review yet since I signed up here. But just in case, I wanna see that I loveeeee this story. It's interesting, well written and just makes me want to come back for more. I especially love the part of the plot where she has to go and EARN her rightful place back. I don't know why, but those kind of story pieces are so compelling to me.
Keep up the good work, you better update soon! ;3
4/30 c7 Tina
nice
nice
4/29 c7 Guest
"I just need to destroy the city gem and become Lord of Diamond Dragon City." : Genius! I never saw it coming! (And probably never would have thought of it...)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
"I just need to destroy the city gem and become Lord of Diamond Dragon City." : Genius! I never saw it coming! (And probably never would have thought of it...)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
4/23 c7 Guest
Please update!
Please update!
4/22 c7
5Loraliell
This is awesome *cackle madly*. I adore all those new characters -. Please update soon
5LoraliellThis is awesome *cackle madly*. I adore all those new characters -. Please update soon
4/19 c7 Sterlingnight
Thanks for the update! I love this story so much! Can't wait for the next updaye! (is the bamboo guy the new character?)
Thanks for the update! I love this story so much! Can't wait for the next updaye! (is the bamboo guy the new character?)
4/19 c7 Hilde
Haha! Unforseen consequences of being female, 'but Prince is male'
*I can see him banging his head against the city gem when they finally get there* XD
Haha! Unforseen consequences of being female, 'but Prince is male'
*I can see him banging his head against the city gem when they finally get there* XD
4/18 c6
8VioletLink7
Ooooookay I seriously love this. Like seriously. I'm so darn curious now; please update! xD
8VioletLink7Ooooookay I seriously love this. Like seriously. I'm so darn curious now; please update! xD
4/18 c7
3Yoru Hana1
Considering several of Prince's party knew that she really was a girl, even if not all of them, I'm wondering why they'd set up the quest to be male only. Did they think the same event that let her play as a him would happen again? Or was it something more?
3Yoru Hana1Considering several of Prince's party knew that she really was a girl, even if not all of them, I'm wondering why they'd set up the quest to be male only. Did they think the same event that let her play as a him would happen again? Or was it something more?
