for So Much6/19/2012 c1 student
cute :)
cute :)
6/16/2012 c1 Mathiilde3
This is all kinds of wonderful, I am just all giggles and lovesick smiles. I really, really liked it. It was so sweet and the tone of your writing, your phrasing or wording I do not know the correct term, was exquisite! Great work!
Mathilde
This is all kinds of wonderful, I am just all giggles and lovesick smiles. I really, really liked it. It was so sweet and the tone of your writing, your phrasing or wording I do not know the correct term, was exquisite! Great work!
Mathilde
5/25/2012 c1 JeuxDeVagues
I love it when you save the premise for later. It's fun when the opening is a mystery, and even more fun when it's as simple and well-written as this. "... the sudden onslaught of lips and teeth and tongue in front of a flustered cabbie" SO GOOD. The dialogue is pretty fantastic too. "'You smell like sweat. And cherries.' He's not going to survive this."
I love it when you save the premise for later. It's fun when the opening is a mystery, and even more fun when it's as simple and well-written as this. "... the sudden onslaught of lips and teeth and tongue in front of a flustered cabbie" SO GOOD. The dialogue is pretty fantastic too. "'You smell like sweat. And cherries.' He's not going to survive this."
4/17/2012 c1 LoveJessieLou
I totally fangirled after reading that last line! Like flailing arms and everything! :) That was the perfect use of that line. I LOVED THIS!
I totally fangirled after reading that last line! Like flailing arms and everything! :) That was the perfect use of that line. I LOVED THIS!
4/16/2012 c1 
31477166
Oh this is amazing, loved the season 2 reference! Very cute, I actually hope something like this happens haha!
31477166Oh this is amazing, loved the season 2 reference! Very cute, I actually hope something like this happens haha!
4/16/2012 c1 58Cora Clavia
I cling to the faint hope that this happens when he finally tells her about Le Secret.
Because it is ADORABLE.
How is everything you write so adorable?
58Cora ClaviaI cling to the faint hope that this happens when he finally tells her about Le Secret.
Because it is ADORABLE.
How is everything you write so adorable?
4/15/2012 c1 38Topsy
Not that his daughter hasn't seen him bare-chested plenty of times, but he's had more than one bad experience involving hot breakfast foods and bare skin, and the mere remembrance is enough to convince him to clothe himself this time. - LOL!
An argument in the breakroom that led to unintended confessions from both of them, Kate walking out, him chasing her into a taxi, the sudden onslaught of lips and teeth and tongue in front of a flustered cabbie, the detective calling out a change in their destination. - Yum! Love the bit about the flustered cabbie. Lol. Nice detail. :)
He grins. Grins down at her, because with neither of them in shoes, he has at least a good four inches on her, and as much as he loves her fierceness, her ability to stand toe to toe and eye to eye - because you're tall - with him, he finds that something deep and primal within him loves this too. Loves that she's just the right height now that he could reel her in and her face would fit just right in the crook of his neck. - This is awesome. Especially the bit "because you're tall" I love that... even though I honestly still don't really get why he said that... other than to relieve the tension, distract her. But it really wasn't THAT funny, so I'm wondering if I'm missing something. Hahah.
She lets out a puff of air that he thinks is a laugh. Then she presses her nose to his throat and inhales. Good Lord. - AMAZING.
38TopsyNot that his daughter hasn't seen him bare-chested plenty of times, but he's had more than one bad experience involving hot breakfast foods and bare skin, and the mere remembrance is enough to convince him to clothe himself this time. - LOL!
An argument in the breakroom that led to unintended confessions from both of them, Kate walking out, him chasing her into a taxi, the sudden onslaught of lips and teeth and tongue in front of a flustered cabbie, the detective calling out a change in their destination. - Yum! Love the bit about the flustered cabbie. Lol. Nice detail. :)
He grins. Grins down at her, because with neither of them in shoes, he has at least a good four inches on her, and as much as he loves her fierceness, her ability to stand toe to toe and eye to eye - because you're tall - with him, he finds that something deep and primal within him loves this too. Loves that she's just the right height now that he could reel her in and her face would fit just right in the crook of his neck. - This is awesome. Especially the bit "because you're tall" I love that... even though I honestly still don't really get why he said that... other than to relieve the tension, distract her. But it really wasn't THAT funny, so I'm wondering if I'm missing something. Hahah.
She lets out a puff of air that he thinks is a laugh. Then she presses her nose to his throat and inhales. Good Lord. - AMAZING.
4/14/2012 c1 dtrekker
So many references to happier times! I was actually grinning one remembering each one in their own settings
Thank youbforbthis ridebunto memory lane that will keep me believing all will be ok again...soon
So many references to happier times! I was actually grinning one remembering each one in their own settings
Thank youbforbthis ridebunto memory lane that will keep me believing all will be ok again...soon
4/13/2012 c1 Nathan fan
Thank YOU so much for this little slice of heaven for a downcast shipper's heart.
Thank YOU so much for this little slice of heaven for a downcast shipper's heart.
4/13/2012 c1 KMacD
Well done! All the retro references were great as I'm sure Ryan and Espo would agree!
Well done! All the retro references were great as I'm sure Ryan and Espo would agree!