for DreamScape3/20 c14 Hollows RI fan
Ugh I cant believe u have left this hanging here! Just found this, Love it, and want more. PLEASE. It's not weird btw, very creative. So come back and tell us the story...we're listening...
Ugh I cant believe u have left this hanging here! Just found this, Love it, and want more. PLEASE. It's not weird btw, very creative. So come back and tell us the story...we're listening...
12/4/2012 c14 
2garnmcgaughn
Well this has been defiantly in a few works a messed up story lol and that's in a good way. I was worried off the start thinking shed be in her head the entire time but really glad that's not the case. The sudden onset of the memories catches you off guard on occasion. Really wondering what the heck happened and who she killed and what the heck is happening. Heck I just wondered if so some reason he picked rach then ivy killed him for it? Lol random thought but all the questions keep you guessing and wondering what's next.
2garnmcgaughnWell this has been defiantly in a few works a messed up story lol and that's in a good way. I was worried off the start thinking shed be in her head the entire time but really glad that's not the case. The sudden onset of the memories catches you off guard on occasion. Really wondering what the heck happened and who she killed and what the heck is happening. Heck I just wondered if so some reason he picked rach then ivy killed him for it? Lol random thought but all the questions keep you guessing and wondering what's next.
10/4/2012 c14 Hannah
Love this chapter, I'm glad that it touched on Ivy's past more. Though I really want to know what went on while Rachel was dreaming/sleeping.
I look forward to your next up date
Love this chapter, I'm glad that it touched on Ivy's past more. Though I really want to know what went on while Rachel was dreaming/sleeping.
I look forward to your next up date
9/29/2012 c14 1Hewhoislost
Love the chapter, tha part where she burned the dress was needed. Great work, I await till next update.
1HewhoislostLove the chapter, tha part where she burned the dress was needed. Great work, I await till next update.
9/28/2012 c14 Avarenda
Aww, im glad Ivy got some closure in that regard. Also, Ivy and Rache in the rain was hot, and the way Ivy tempted her in the last line made me chuckle.
Aww, im glad Ivy got some closure in that regard. Also, Ivy and Rache in the rain was hot, and the way Ivy tempted her in the last line made me chuckle.
8/4/2012 c13 10Over Worked Witch
Ahh poor Ivy, never entirely certain she is the great person Rachel sees her as (at least in FanFic - some days I'm not entirely KH likes Ivy) but maybe there is hope that Rachel can demonstrate just how fond she is of the vampire ;).
I'm really glad that this story continues on as the Ravy community seems to have gotten rather quiet and that makes me rather sad.
10Over Worked WitchAhh poor Ivy, never entirely certain she is the great person Rachel sees her as (at least in FanFic - some days I'm not entirely KH likes Ivy) but maybe there is hope that Rachel can demonstrate just how fond she is of the vampire ;).
I'm really glad that this story continues on as the Ravy community seems to have gotten rather quiet and that makes me rather sad.
8/3/2012 c13 RavyTamwood
Beautiful. Like nature after it rains. Refreshing, crisp an beautiful. Thank you for that chapter, I can't wait to read more. Cheers
Beautiful. Like nature after it rains. Refreshing, crisp an beautiful. Thank you for that chapter, I can't wait to read more. Cheers
8/3/2012 c13 Ibskib
Well kittens are pretty cute, so that's understandable :-)
I think the NaNo thing is helping your writing, this chapter seems to flow a bit better. Or maybe I just enjoy this chapter more than the previous one shrugs
Wasn't Rachel's nonbiological father called Randall? Or maybe I'm mixing it up with another fantasy series...
correction:
feeling surprisingly good - feeling surprisingly well (since it's about her health)
which I guessed - which I guess
Well kittens are pretty cute, so that's understandable :-)
I think the NaNo thing is helping your writing, this chapter seems to flow a bit better. Or maybe I just enjoy this chapter more than the previous one shrugs
Wasn't Rachel's nonbiological father called Randall? Or maybe I'm mixing it up with another fantasy series...
correction:
feeling surprisingly good - feeling surprisingly well (since it's about her health)
which I guessed - which I guess
7/29/2012 c12 8cookiesforfrogs
Yay loved the update Im really enjoying this story. I hope the job goes well. Ivy's fear over Rachel remembering is oddly adorable.
8cookiesforfrogsYay loved the update Im really enjoying this story. I hope the job goes well. Ivy's fear over Rachel remembering is oddly adorable.
7/26/2012 c12 10Over Worked Witch
I don't know where you had issues so if they were in this one before you posted this they must have disappeared, just like Rachel's chances of getting yogurt. :)
This was a really enjoyable chapter, though I am rather suspicious about the helpfulness of this pack leader in casting out one of his own and not pursuing Rachel's client.
Ivy's concern over what Rachel remembered, or more specifically what that would do to their relationship, seems 100% in character for her. Poor Ivy, even when she gets Rachel there is always that lingering doubt that the witch might change her mind.
10Over Worked WitchI don't know where you had issues so if they were in this one before you posted this they must have disappeared, just like Rachel's chances of getting yogurt. :)
This was a really enjoyable chapter, though I am rather suspicious about the helpfulness of this pack leader in casting out one of his own and not pursuing Rachel's client.
Ivy's concern over what Rachel remembered, or more specifically what that would do to their relationship, seems 100% in character for her. Poor Ivy, even when she gets Rachel there is always that lingering doubt that the witch might change her mind.
7/18/2012 c11 Ulster Gold
I'm really glad that you updated your story BlueNoise, I've been looking forward to reading more of it for some time now - and you did an excellent job with this chapter, so congrats due there.
And it looks like Rachel isn't getting that Yogurt after-all... And as for YOU! You're such a tease! Had me thinking there was gonna be some fun-lovin...Wicked wicked writer you... (A quick side note, how long will it be taking Rachel to heal from the gunshot? Do Witches/Demons heal at the same rate as humans, or faster/slower?
And here's another question for you - Is the Were attacking them? You wrote that it's racing toward them, but that doesn't necessarily mean that it's attacking them...But if it is attacking them, it would be an awful shame if Rachel's dress somehow managed to get mangled...Lol, will Rachel be this way every time Ivy wants to buy something for her? Did Ivy end up getting to buy the shoes?
Keep writing BlueNoise, I love reading your chapters.
I'm really glad that you updated your story BlueNoise, I've been looking forward to reading more of it for some time now - and you did an excellent job with this chapter, so congrats due there.
And it looks like Rachel isn't getting that Yogurt after-all... And as for YOU! You're such a tease! Had me thinking there was gonna be some fun-lovin...Wicked wicked writer you... (A quick side note, how long will it be taking Rachel to heal from the gunshot? Do Witches/Demons heal at the same rate as humans, or faster/slower?
And here's another question for you - Is the Were attacking them? You wrote that it's racing toward them, but that doesn't necessarily mean that it's attacking them...But if it is attacking them, it would be an awful shame if Rachel's dress somehow managed to get mangled...Lol, will Rachel be this way every time Ivy wants to buy something for her? Did Ivy end up getting to buy the shoes?
Keep writing BlueNoise, I love reading your chapters.