for A Matter of Life and Death2/24 c6 
1katscratchstudios
Some of your sentences are choppy and hard to follow but other than that it's a good story
1katscratchstudiosSome of your sentences are choppy and hard to follow but other than that it's a good story
1/20 c6 8RangerRainbow
D; you defs need to find a new beta. You could try i believe it's that anyways
8RangerRainbowD; you defs need to find a new beta. You could try i believe it's that anyways
11/26/2012 c6 Guest
This is a very good storyline here. Please provide more chapters...
This is a very good storyline here. Please provide more chapters...
10/9/2012 c1 Guest
Get a better beta the grammar is still terrible
Get a better beta the grammar is still terrible
8/11/2012 c4 Guest
Plz plz continue
Plz plz continue
6/6/2012 c4 liz
update plz
update plz
5/22/2012 c4 kat
this is a very interesting story, keep up the great work. i look forward to reading more. i wonder how the brothers will react when they see their father. )
this is a very interesting story, keep up the great work. i look forward to reading more. i wonder how the brothers will react when they see their father. )
5/21/2012 c4 7Minogaki TenTen
I think it's a bit rushed. And what's going on with the others?
Continue soon!
7Minogaki TenTenI think it's a bit rushed. And what's going on with the others?
Continue soon!
4/19/2012 c3 22Full Moon Howl
This is going kind of fast, but it's interesting! Keep up the good work!
22Full Moon HowlThis is going kind of fast, but it's interesting! Keep up the good work!