for Lost Flame2/5 c4 Dragon at play
That was epic.
Rayne literaly walking up on a fight between two magical beings in the woods is a bit deja vu. And finally for the first time using the magic within her even more so.
Some details are the same, but a defferent story altogether.
A great story so far. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Update soon.
That was epic.
Rayne literaly walking up on a fight between two magical beings in the woods is a bit deja vu. And finally for the first time using the magic within her even more so.
Some details are the same, but a defferent story altogether.
A great story so far. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.
Update soon.
11/16/2012 c3 Dragon at play
At first it didn't make sense, then I remembered how it was writen the first time(instead of the 4 of them just glowing diffrent colors, their surounded in flames of diffrent colors. When they attacked the ship, it clicked). Now that it makes sense, I like how THIS story is going.
I take it's gonna follow the same lines as the first, just rewriten. No deja-views this time?
Great chapter. Update soon.
At first it didn't make sense, then I remembered how it was writen the first time(instead of the 4 of them just glowing diffrent colors, their surounded in flames of diffrent colors. When they attacked the ship, it clicked). Now that it makes sense, I like how THIS story is going.
I take it's gonna follow the same lines as the first, just rewriten. No deja-views this time?
Great chapter. Update soon.
8/15/2012 c2 Dragon at play
Wow, you really went a diffrent direction with this. Adrian an Gale are not who they seem with the comment of Little earth girl and having to report to their mothers and aunt about the spark they saw form Rayne.
Great chapter, enjoyed reading it. Update soon!
Wow, you really went a diffrent direction with this. Adrian an Gale are not who they seem with the comment of Little earth girl and having to report to their mothers and aunt about the spark they saw form Rayne.
Great chapter, enjoyed reading it. Update soon!
8/15/2012 c1 Dragon at play
So your redoing the story. It was real good the first time, if a bit like deja vu. Hopefully this time there wouldn't be any "Where have I seen this before" feelings. Although it was kinda funny, like fate brought them together like their parents so many years before.
Great beginning chapter.
So your redoing the story. It was real good the first time, if a bit like deja vu. Hopefully this time there wouldn't be any "Where have I seen this before" feelings. Although it was kinda funny, like fate brought them together like their parents so many years before.
Great beginning chapter.
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