for Remember When1/20 c16 laytonworshipper
now all chapters should be that long
now all chapters should be that long
11/19/2012 c20 
4Brightpaw32
Err... I don't know what happened. Um, well, here's your review... this is not going to end well...
Your Review:
Well, it's OK to write that you're the author AT THE BEGINNING, though because you are said author doesn't mean that you should intervene the story. It breaks the flow of things. Additionally, you can't do things like "lolz" and "XD" as it makes the writing unprofessional, UNLESS you are doing a crack fic. In that case go crazy. Another thing; this is a Layton story. Not a crossover. Isn't that correct? Or am I sadly mistaken? You may add people from other FF into your Question-Answer thing, but only that. Not the actual story. Plus, you don't skip a sentence all the time. Example: "Lando frowned." You don't skip a line afterward if he's the one speaking next! Also (if I may add), the characters are OOC. They need to act like they usually would for a good Fanfic. Also, there are A LOT of grammar issues, from spelling to just sentence structure. Question: What happened to your old writing? I loved those stories, when Luke got kidnapped by Descole (surprised adopted), when Clive all the villians, when Layton and Lando couldn't take a bus 'cause they're gay (or something...). What happened to that...? I mean, I know you're a good person, though I'm going to have to drop this story if this continues. I'm very sorry. (Tips hat) I think that would be all. Goodbye, for now.
Paths are as Twisted as we imagine them -Brightpaw
P.S.
If I were to ask a question, it would be "Where did the old days go?"
4Brightpaw32Err... I don't know what happened. Um, well, here's your review... this is not going to end well...
Your Review:
Well, it's OK to write that you're the author AT THE BEGINNING, though because you are said author doesn't mean that you should intervene the story. It breaks the flow of things. Additionally, you can't do things like "lolz" and "XD" as it makes the writing unprofessional, UNLESS you are doing a crack fic. In that case go crazy. Another thing; this is a Layton story. Not a crossover. Isn't that correct? Or am I sadly mistaken? You may add people from other FF into your Question-Answer thing, but only that. Not the actual story. Plus, you don't skip a sentence all the time. Example: "Lando frowned." You don't skip a line afterward if he's the one speaking next! Also (if I may add), the characters are OOC. They need to act like they usually would for a good Fanfic. Also, there are A LOT of grammar issues, from spelling to just sentence structure. Question: What happened to your old writing? I loved those stories, when Luke got kidnapped by Descole (surprised adopted), when Clive all the villians, when Layton and Lando couldn't take a bus 'cause they're gay (or something...). What happened to that...? I mean, I know you're a good person, though I'm going to have to drop this story if this continues. I'm very sorry. (Tips hat) I think that would be all. Goodbye, for now.
Paths are as Twisted as we imagine them -Brightpaw
P.S.
If I were to ask a question, it would be "Where did the old days go?"
11/16/2012 c20 Sara
Is this a new romance for Flora? ._.
Is this a new romance for Flora? ._.
9/29/2012 c15 16Nocturnea
May I venture a guess at the identity of the murderer? The murderer's name is one of these three isn't it? Nordic, Ghent, or Bram. Or any combination of them. I just love solving mysteries :) I have a question to Professor Layton or you. Is that answer correct?
16NocturneaMay I venture a guess at the identity of the murderer? The murderer's name is one of these three isn't it? Nordic, Ghent, or Bram. Or any combination of them. I just love solving mysteries :) I have a question to Professor Layton or you. Is that answer correct?
9/29/2012 c11 Nocturnea
I have a question for Luke! Was Clive ok after leaving or did he get hurt or something? And also why do people say Clive is hot? I asked a friend after showing her a picture of him and she said she does not know because he wears cool colours and has a cool-type personality.
I have a question for Luke! Was Clive ok after leaving or did he get hurt or something? And also why do people say Clive is hot? I asked a friend after showing her a picture of him and she said she does not know because he wears cool colours and has a cool-type personality.
8/7/2012 c19 13Redsparrow3
I love how Red came through the window!
Awesome chapter, very funny :)
Sincerely, Sparrow
13Redsparrow3I love how Red came through the window!
Awesome chapter, very funny :)
Sincerely, Sparrow
8/5/2012 c19 4Brightpaw32
I love this story so much! Let us try to get back to PL though, not now, but some point. Besides that I like that there was ANOTHER STORY afterwards and it was about the World Conference.
Spain is kawaii and I'd like it if you did the "Behind the Scenes" personally. Al, Raphael (yay!), and Ciel can come too.
Question for Clive (but others can answer as well): If you were in a band what would you do (play instrument or sing the vocals), and if you're playing an instrument what would you play?
Question for Layton and Lando: When you were younger did you play D&D (Dungeons and Dragons)?
4Brightpaw32I love this story so much! Let us try to get back to PL though, not now, but some point. Besides that I like that there was ANOTHER STORY afterwards and it was about the World Conference.
Spain is kawaii and I'd like it if you did the "Behind the Scenes" personally. Al, Raphael (yay!), and Ciel can come too.
Question for Clive (but others can answer as well): If you were in a band what would you do (play instrument or sing the vocals), and if you're playing an instrument what would you play?
Question for Layton and Lando: When you were younger did you play D&D (Dungeons and Dragons)?
8/5/2012 c19 1Blackshadow the Fangirl
You are baws! I love you! And France! And Spain, England, Lando, Layton, Luke, Clive, Russia, China, all Hetalians, and I'm not forgetting Flora! That was the most twisted 'Remember When' ever! And how do you get that after watching Black Butler? And FMA? And how do you fall asleep during FMA?! That's ... that's... kolkolkolkolkolkolkol...
Questions: I will try:
Red, will Black Butler ever make a appearance?
Luke: Do you hate Bill Hawks?
Spain: Is there really a 'Bad Touch Trio'?
Layton: Were you ever pranked and they glued the hat to your head and that's why you never take off the hat? (I know the real reason, I just had to ask)
Lando: I never found you boring! Not even in the real Layton Universe! I know that's not a question... Are you planning to make a: 'Evil Villian Trio' with Clive and Descole?
I think that's all the questions... Peace. Prosperity. Poptarts. That is Flandre Scarlet. Bye!
1Blackshadow the FangirlYou are baws! I love you! And France! And Spain, England, Lando, Layton, Luke, Clive, Russia, China, all Hetalians, and I'm not forgetting Flora! That was the most twisted 'Remember When' ever! And how do you get that after watching Black Butler? And FMA? And how do you fall asleep during FMA?! That's ... that's... kolkolkolkolkolkolkol...
Questions: I will try:
Red, will Black Butler ever make a appearance?
Luke: Do you hate Bill Hawks?
Spain: Is there really a 'Bad Touch Trio'?
Layton: Were you ever pranked and they glued the hat to your head and that's why you never take off the hat? (I know the real reason, I just had to ask)
Lando: I never found you boring! Not even in the real Layton Universe! I know that's not a question... Are you planning to make a: 'Evil Villian Trio' with Clive and Descole?
I think that's all the questions... Peace. Prosperity. Poptarts. That is Flandre Scarlet. Bye!
8/5/2012 c18 4Brightpaw32
OMG. If Layton actually found out about Hetalia...I wouldn't watch it again in embarrassment. Or watch it everyday. Either way works. :D Iggy! You'll have to fight my sis for Russia...
FMA FOR THE WIN! I'm trying to watch the movies... :'( The chance always slips away... You can have Al, ROY-BOY IS MINE.
Isn't Vocaliod already in America...? And isn't the Hetalia game on PSP?
Question for All: If you were to read a manga, get sucked into it, and have to live in that world until further notice, what manga would you choose?
4Brightpaw32OMG. If Layton actually found out about Hetalia...I wouldn't watch it again in embarrassment. Or watch it everyday. Either way works. :D Iggy! You'll have to fight my sis for Russia...
FMA FOR THE WIN! I'm trying to watch the movies... :'( The chance always slips away... You can have Al, ROY-BOY IS MINE.
Isn't Vocaliod already in America...? And isn't the Hetalia game on PSP?
Question for All: If you were to read a manga, get sucked into it, and have to live in that world until further notice, what manga would you choose?
8/4/2012 c18 36Nixi Stasia
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Another question...HMmmmmmm. How would Layton act if Luke was gay? (And yes I asked that because I want to see the reaction of Luke's)
Funny chapter.
36Nixi StasiaHmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Another question...HMmmmmmm. How would Layton act if Luke was gay? (And yes I asked that because I want to see the reaction of Luke's)
Funny chapter.
8/4/2012 c18 1Blackshadow the Fangirl
JSONFCKLJSNSMC (Spazzes) Hetalia, FMA, Shugo Chara! XDDDD I LOVE YOU!
Sorry about that. Just so excited. Anyway, Russia is mine, I had him since liek, the beginning of last year so, paws off. And you can never trust Russia. Never do it. Anyway questions.
Layton, why do you not except the yaoi? It's Baws.
Lando, why are you so loveable?
Luke, how can you talk to animals?
Flora, what is your favorite thing to cook?
Clive, are you blue? ba da de ba da da, ba da Dee, ba da Daa!
Red, why do you hate France so? I love France. He's cute...
1Blackshadow the FangirlJSONFCKLJSNSMC (Spazzes) Hetalia, FMA, Shugo Chara! XDDDD I LOVE YOU!
Sorry about that. Just so excited. Anyway, Russia is mine, I had him since liek, the beginning of last year so, paws off. And you can never trust Russia. Never do it. Anyway questions.
Layton, why do you not except the yaoi? It's Baws.
Lando, why are you so loveable?
Luke, how can you talk to animals?
Flora, what is your favorite thing to cook?
Clive, are you blue? ba da de ba da da, ba da Dee, ba da Daa!
Red, why do you hate France so? I love France. He's cute...
7/17/2012 c17 4Brightpaw32
Bravo! Bravo! That's hystarical! Probably the best chapter next to 'Lando's funny moments'.
4Brightpaw32Bravo! Bravo! That's hystarical! Probably the best chapter next to 'Lando's funny moments'.
7/15/2012 c17 13Redsparrow3
Lol! That was so awesome
It made me laugh and I loved it :)
Sincerely, Sparrow
13Redsparrow3Lol! That was so awesome
It made me laugh and I loved it :)
Sincerely, Sparrow