for Super Smash Bros Tabu's Revenge6/23/2012 c10 D
Awosom
Awosom
6/12/2012 c2 
1danhihat
GREAT JOB ROY! YOU DID EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD and you did pull through but i want to read the collection really quickly then ill come back, Roy consider me a loyal reader t this series :)
1danhihatGREAT JOB ROY! YOU DID EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD and you did pull through but i want to read the collection really quickly then ill come back, Roy consider me a loyal reader t this series :)
6/12/2012 c1 danhihat
Omg this has to be te worst chapter of all time...but i know youll pull through for me Roy on your next chapters ill give them a shot!
Omg this has to be te worst chapter of all time...but i know youll pull through for me Roy on your next chapters ill give them a shot!
4/18/2012 c3 14MouseMaster42
Hey Roy. It dawned on me that I haven't actually reviewed this yet, and I didn't want your only review to be a borderline flamer. That'd suck. X_x
You fixed so much, I'm so proud of you! ^_^ It reads so much better this way! Not to mention that taking criticism and applying it the way you did says a lot of good things about you as a budding author. :)
You've actually got a really good sense of humor going here with all of the Dedede cracks that you made. Those were really funny-as was the Ike/Link banter. Nice job. I think every fic, even predominantly serious ones like yours, need a splash of humor to make it interesting, but you obviously don't have to worry about that.
Aaand the story takes off~ I'm excited to see where this is going. :D
Excellent job! Keep it up!
14MouseMaster42Hey Roy. It dawned on me that I haven't actually reviewed this yet, and I didn't want your only review to be a borderline flamer. That'd suck. X_x
You fixed so much, I'm so proud of you! ^_^ It reads so much better this way! Not to mention that taking criticism and applying it the way you did says a lot of good things about you as a budding author. :)
You've actually got a really good sense of humor going here with all of the Dedede cracks that you made. Those were really funny-as was the Ike/Link banter. Nice job. I think every fic, even predominantly serious ones like yours, need a splash of humor to make it interesting, but you obviously don't have to worry about that.
Aaand the story takes off~ I'm excited to see where this is going. :D
Excellent job! Keep it up!