for Castell Ice2/11 c19 zuellni
i can tell you that the ending brought me to tears, but this was not the ending i wanted it to be !
i can tell you that the ending brought me to tears, but this was not the ending i wanted it to be !
7/14/2012 c19 
13Phantom Ou
Congrats on finishing your story! Great job! I do like the ambiguous ending. It leads way for more possibilities. I'm glad that you are seriously putting effort into your story. Some authors just write for reviews, you know, but you are dedicated. High-five! And also, you're welcome! I'll review anytime! xD (Love how I happen to be the last thing on the chapter. XD)
13Phantom OuCongrats on finishing your story! Great job! I do like the ambiguous ending. It leads way for more possibilities. I'm glad that you are seriously putting effort into your story. Some authors just write for reviews, you know, but you are dedicated. High-five! And also, you're welcome! I'll review anytime! xD (Love how I happen to be the last thing on the chapter. XD)
7/5/2012 c1 13Phantom Ou
Interesting introductions of your OCs. However, on to some constructive criticism. It's difficult to discern who is talking; you'd want to space it out between characters in a dialogue. And be careful of the minor grammatical errors. For instance in 'It's just your so quiet', 'your' should be 'you're'. You might not want to overuse the boldface; italics are more professional to use for emphasis. Otherwise, have more confidence in your writing! I'm sure your story is going to be very interesting!
13Phantom OuInteresting introductions of your OCs. However, on to some constructive criticism. It's difficult to discern who is talking; you'd want to space it out between characters in a dialogue. And be careful of the minor grammatical errors. For instance in 'It's just your so quiet', 'your' should be 'you're'. You might not want to overuse the boldface; italics are more professional to use for emphasis. Otherwise, have more confidence in your writing! I'm sure your story is going to be very interesting!
6/26/2012 c16 Happyallie3
Damon I order u now to write the next chapter!
Btw
I love u cousin u are awesome!:))
Damon I order u now to write the next chapter!
Btw
I love u cousin u are awesome!:))
5/30/2012 c13 4Ready-To-Play
DAMN IT THIS ANOTHER CLIFFY!
i love this btw
always will!
UPDATE PLEASE!
4Ready-To-PlayDAMN IT THIS ANOTHER CLIFFY!
i love this btw
always will!
UPDATE PLEASE!
5/24/2012 c12 2xXstarmiXx
This chapter is surprising, it just want's you to read the next chapter so much! I like it! And I wanna see the photos... (must... see... the photos...)
2xXstarmiXxThis chapter is surprising, it just want's you to read the next chapter so much! I like it! And I wanna see the photos... (must... see... the photos...)
5/23/2012 c11 Lilylac68
I vote Damon 3
I vote Damon 3
5/20/2012 c11 xXstarmiXx
My favorite is probably Avangeline. She's so cute and airheaded! In the funny way if course.
My favorite is probably Avangeline. She's so cute and airheaded! In the funny way if course.